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Chapter 24 by FINN 0815 FINN 0815

What's next?

The warrior answers

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Chapter 23

"Where have you been for so long?" Tammy's piercing voice reaches my ear. It's a repeat of the first day with the MCD and this time I'm not in a particularly good mood either. That's an understatement. I'm really fucking pissed. And my little sister's inquisitive pokes is not what I need right now.

"Long day," I grumble and push past her into the house. She has set up an ambush behind the door and immediately attacks me with her usual annoying behavior while I just want to go home and have some peace and quiet, feet aching, mind tormented.

"Jasmine is already home. We've even been waiting for you with supper. Mom will probably be angry by now." She looks at me hurtfully, wants to strain me with these little stabs. So far she has managed to bring me to my knees, but that's over now. “You better be careful, or…”

I step up to her again, really close. I don’t know where I got this from, this control over the things in my life, over my body and therefore also over the people around me. Maybe I’ve always had it. Maybe it just takes a little device to tease it out of me. But the sound her back makes when Tammy presses it against the wall is sweeter than honey and more beautiful than the moaning… Okay, Rose moans are more beautifully. But my little sister’s eyes that always get so big, round and googly when she realizes how much bigger I am, her mouth that is slightly open when she has to raise her head to look me in the eyes, her breathing that is a little faster… I could get used to it. I stop right in front of her and support myself with both hands next to her head, get really close to her and look deep into her eyes.

“Look at you” my voice cuts through the tension between us, hitting her directly, affecting her. “So little and sweet.” I shake my head. “And so full of poison.” Today, points are earned and I start with Tammy. “Enough with that, I say.” My hands are braced close to her head, forcing her to look at me while my leg bends and lightly touches her thigh. “It’s time you learn to be a good, nice little girl.” It’s delicious. Her eyes get even bigger when she hears the words that the MCD taught her to love. Then she remembers her situation but I know that my words worked.

Finn you… You scare me” she says in a quiet, squeaky voice that only spurs me on even further. I come even closer to her and my body almost presses against hers. Then I raise my hand and place it gently but firmly on her mouth. Not another word from her. I feel her quick, uncertain breath on my skin while her lips press against my palm.

"Good." My voice is dark and threatening but the white of my teeth flashes in her big eyes when I'm very close to her. "Little girls should be scared sometimes. Especially when they know full well that they've behaved wrongly. You know that you've behaved wrongly, don't you?" Tammy waits but I don't let up, I say nothing and keep her trapped between me and the wall. She doesn't struggle, let me handle this, handle her.

And then she nods.

Tammy Lynchwood. +4 (PS -70)

"Good girl."

"Hmmmpfffaaa" It's almost a moan. Yes Tammy, that's your new currency you little beast. Earn it. My expression freezes her but I'm sure her nether regions are already twitching at the thought of discipline and order. Time to show her the consequences of rebellion. "But we both know that you were a mean, stupid, naughty, bratty little girl."

"Nnnnuuuuhhh."

"Hush now," I whisper to her and stroke her hot, soft, dry cheek with my thumb. "Don't worry. I'm here, my little one. I will take care of you, you lost naughty little girl. I will make you a good little girl who listens to me and does what I say, even if it's the last fucking thing I do." We stare at each other over my hand and even though I only see half of her face, I know what a whirlwind is raging in her head right now. But from now on there is only one truth for her, no matter how hard she fights against it. "That's what you want, isn't it? Enough with the rebellious behavior. Enough with the constant quarrels. You don't even know what it feels like to be loved. But I'll make sure of that. I will love you, Tammy. Do you want that?"

The reaction is instant. She can't fight it and loses the first of many fights, but wins something way more valuable.

Tammy Lynchwood. +8 (PS -62)

Her soft lips slide over my skin as she nods eagerly. A tear wets my hand and her breath catches, heavy and rattling as her lips quiver.

I step away from her and immediately she slides down the wall as my body, her daddy, no longer supports her.

"Then do what I tell you," I command her as I tower over her. "Be nice and good and I will love you."

"Yes..." This is the beginning. Here, crouching in front of me, looking up from those doe eyes, she accepts the new dynamic.

"From this point forward, there is a prize to pay for disobedience little girl. Now be a good girl and hang up my jacket." I take off my jacket while Tammy takes two attempts to get up. In a way, it's my fault for rushing her like this, but enough is enough. Then she stands in front of me and holds out her hand to me.

Tammy Lynchwood. +2 (PS -60)

My sister hangs my clothes on the hook.

"And my shoes."

At first she looks at me puzzled but then wants to crouch down, too shocked to realize what is happening. But I stop her, take off my shoes myself and then nod down. Without saying a word, Tammy crouches down, picks up my shoes and puts them back in their place.

Tammy Lynchwood. +1 (PS -59)

I probably won't be able to get more out of her like that, but it's a good start.

"Finn... I..." But I raise my hand and Tammy listens to me. Not much points through this, but with her first act of following her daddy, she has earned some sweets.

"Good girl."

Tammy Lynchwood. +6 (PS -53)

It's almost as if she's moaning again, but she presses her lips together, struggles with herself and then glares at me. On wobbly legs, hand shaky and lips trembling it isn't a real fight back.

"Don't call me that." I just grin evilly. I know she enjoyed it. She can keep playing, but from now on I'm going to win.

"Tell our older sister that I want to talk to her," I ignore her resistance and Tammy fights, glares angrily, then obeys...

And stands rooted to the spot.

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Michelle stares at us in disbelief as she stands in the entrance to see why her children aren't coming into the house. And Tammy looks so helpless. Shocked, she looks from me to Mom, fearing, rightly, that her mother has seen our behavior. I can see from her body language that Tammy is considering screaming, being bratty, but then she just squeaks, lowers her head and quickly rushes past Michelle to do my bidding. Meanwhile, I spread my arms.

"Mom! Come here and give me a welcoming hug!”

As she stands in the entrance, ignoring Tammy, nervously playing with her fingers, her eyes lowered, red on her cheeks and sweat on her neck, you could almost think she was the little, scared child. But Tammy is not yet as far along as her puppy mom. Michelle has seen what I am capable of. And for some time now, her dreams have been getting wilder and more submissive. Tonight I have something special for her, no matter how she behaves now.

Finn, we… we can’t… You have to… Please…” I stop and watch Michelle nervously struggle for words while her fingers twist around each other as if she were trying to start a fire. She is so nervous, a load of hormones and stress. “Please don’t make me…”

“What?” I ask and turn to her, lowering my arms. “Behave?” Michelle takes a step towards me, then looks at me in panic. “Come here,” I say gently, rising my hand again. “Listen. Behave.” I smile. “You’ll like it. When you do it, you’ll understand.”

“N... N...” So sweet. “No I can’t...” she says as she walks towards me. “I can’t...” I snap my fingers and Michelle freezes.

“Down.”

Michelle Lynchwood. +7 (PS -5)

“Good girl.” Today I’m giving out praise left and right.

Michelle Lynchwood, my adopted mother, sinks to her knees. Then her hands touch the floor.

“You know it already,” I praise her and crouch down. “Now give me a hug sweety.”

Without words, Mom crawls towards me. Her daughters or the shame she feels are forgotten. That will surely come back later, but I’m prepared for it. For now, I enjoy her embrace on my knees as she pulls herself up and wraps her arms around me.

"Such a good girl," I praise her condescendingly and pat her back.

And then my hands wander down her body tu her firm ass. Michelle flinches.

"Let it happen," I whisper in her ear. "You're squatting on the floor in your entrance area and letting your son grope you. It's too late, sweety," I inform her.

"I'm so afraid," Michelle whimpers while I grab her mounds, then sniffling noises mix with her rapid breathing. "And so confused... Owner..."

"I know," I reassure her. "I know, sweety. I know. Hush now, okay?" Michelle presses herself against me. She knows that it's me who's doing something to her, but can't help but confide in me. “You sucked my cock Mom,” I say quietly as I reach over her back and touch her ass. “Shake it for me.”

Michelle Lynchwood. +6 (PS +1)

“That’s right.” The MCD vibrates in my pocket.

“Owner… You…”

“Say it, sweety. Tell it to me.” And while my fingers reach over her ass, my mom wiggles and presses herself tightly against me.

“You turn me into… into… AH!” My hands slapped her ass, hard.

“Say it!” Her voice is muffled by my shoulder but I can still hear it as she finally admits it to herself.

“You turn me into... a... dog.”

“Yes,” I whisper. “My sweet little puppy. You will belong to me and soon you will see that behaving like it is a blessing, not a curse.”

“But… Owner… I… I can’t…”

“You can’t cum, I know.” Michelle tenses on my body. “That’s because you haven’t accepted your fate yet. You’re only halfway there.” My hand wanders up her back again and strokes her hair. Michelle enjoys it. "I'll take you there," I promise. "To your destiny."

"Thank you, owner," she squeaks with sad pleasure. Then I snap my fingers and Michelle pays close attention to me. "Now go to your room and wait for me there," I order and point into the house. Michelle gets up on her feet, looks at me pleadingly and I nod.

"Mom?" Rose's voice rings out as she speaks to her mother, but Michelle just hurries past her. "Finn?" Now she sees me. "Where the fuck were you? I was worried about you. Oh." She immediately returns my hug as I take her in my arms. I didn't even make it out of the entrance area, but I've already achieved so much.

"I almost got arrested today," I say into the hug as my stiff cock presses against Rose. She doesn't move away from me, but looks at me questioningly.

"What happened? Shit Finn, I could have helped if...“ But I prefer to hug her, hold her head and press myself tightly against her. She hugs me back.

“Tonight I want to touch your breasts,” I confess in a quiet voice.

Finn, I...“

“I know. It's nothing... sexual... or is it... But Rose... I thought for a moment today that I would never see you again and...“

“Shut up,” Rose says seriously and interrupts me. Then her hands grab mine. “And listen to me.”

“Okay...” I just say, a little perplexed.

“I don't care what happened, but if you get yourself into trouble like that again, you'll call me, got it? Got it?”

“Yes, got it. I promise.”

“I mean it,” she says in a serious voice. “Look, you're a perverted loser, for sure. But you're my brother. And I won't let you get yourself in trouble. Shit Finn, I'll take care of you, okay?"

Rose Lynchwood. +4 (PS -9)

"Sure, bro," I say apologetically. "It was nothing."

"The police aren't nothing, you dumbass. If you go to jail..." She presses her lips together and forces a smile onto her face. "Then who do I show these to?"

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Round and perfect, I can't resist and hold out my hands. Rose flinches as if I'm running at her with an axe, screaming like a barbarian. She's really ticklish.

"Tonight," she says, blushing slightly. Then she remembers her two promises that this would never happen again and refuses in the hardest way she can think of. "Maybe." Then she flinches again when I move my arms, but notices that I want to hug her, again. "Now pull yourself together," she says and rolls down her shirt. "You're not going to jail." But then she pulls me towards her. "And we'll still see each other. Every day, okay?"

"Every day," I say happily. "Let's eat." But Rose sighs.

"Jasmine is pretty angry. She said it was your responsibility to be on time and..."

"I don't care," I say. "Mom won't eat with us." Rose looks at me questioningly. "It's just the Lynchwood girls... And me." Rose hesitates, but then shrugs her shoulders.

"If you really want to die... I'm behind you." I kiss her briefly on the cheek, then we go into the house.


Message from the author:

I had to cut this chapter in half because I didn't want to miss out on some explanations and wanted to embellish the chapter a bit. I hope I managed that and the end doesn't seem too short or choppy. I've included the points with Rose so that we get to around 2400 words. Dinner will be in the next chapter. Then I'm planning a sex scene. Let's see if I can do that in 2000 words. And then, for the first time in a long time, a POV change to one of the girls.

We have 200 tokens in the bank but I'm sure I can increase that even further in the next chapters. As I said, points are earned now. And after that I'm actually toying with the idea of ​​leaving you hanging for a bit with Pregnancy Control, we'll see. Firstly because I've just remembered that there's going to be another sex scene, and secondly because I'm thinking about adding a few extremely sensitive erogenous zones. Based on the comments, I'm wondering whether I was perhaps a bit too bold.

Finn grabs Michelle's ass. Rose's breasts are ticklish. Tammy's mouth is covered. There will definitely be a poll in the next chapters. Next Sage and Sofia will be activated and then there will be a poll for the next subjects. I hope it's okay that I don't make something up for every chapter. For now I want to concentrate on keeping the promises I made to you.

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