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Chapter 4
by awesomeness98778
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The Succubus Queen
Jeremy is probably the luckiest man in the world right now. He doubts there's anyone else in the world who owns two sex slaves that are succubuses. Most men would probably give or do anything to be in his position, sitting on the couch watching TV while his two sex toys are kneeling on the floor in front of him, taking turns licking and sucking his cock.
Feeling himself getting ready to cum, Jeremy gives his two sex toys a heads-up. "Get ready to be covered in my cum, sluts."
Lily and Evelyn stop licking Jeremy's cock and remain kneeling on the floor as he gets up from the couch. Their reward for working together to satisfy their Master is his delicious cum. Aiming his cock, Jeremy releases a few shots of cum on Lily before he turns to aim at Evelyn. After he's finished cumming, the succubuses' faces and breasts are evenly covered with large amounts of the warm, white liquid.
"Thank you for covering us in your cum, Master. May we lick it off our bodies now?" Lily and Evelyn ask simultaneously. After Jeremy nods his head, they begin cleaning themselves with their tongues.
Jeremy just smiles as he watches Lily and Evelyn lick his cum off each other's bodies. Soon, their cum licking turns into sucking on each other's breasts to passionately making out. The fact that they are mother and daughter makes the erotic sight more arousing.
Looking up at the TV screen for a second, Jeremy sees a familiar commercial playing. It's about a young woman thanking her single mother for raising her. The commercial is heartwarming, and Jeremy has seen it a million times. But seeing it again makes him realize how different humans are from succubuses, besides succubuses having wings and horns. In human society, mothers and daughters having a sexual relationship is considered wrong. However, succubuses don't have a problem with ****.
"Hey, Master. Would you like us to worship your cock with our mouths again?"
"Uhh... No. I actually want to talk to you two. Hop on the couch."
"Is something wrong, Master?" Evelyn asks as she sits on the end of the couch while Lily sits in the middle between her and Jeremy.
"No, nothing's wrong. I just realized that despite you two living with me for a while, I barely know anything about succubuses. So, I want to know more about your species."
"Okay. What would you like to know about us, Master?"
"Where do you guys live? I'm assuming you don't live around humans since we barely know you exist aside from being in myths and legends."
"You're right about us not living near humans. But it wasn't always that way. Succubuses used to live with humans. But our current queen changed that long ago." Evelyn replies.
"You have a queen? How did she become queen? Was she voted to become queen of the succubuses or something?"
"No. But how she became queen is an interesting story. Would you like to hear it, Master?"
"Sure."
"Okay. So our beloved queen, Queen Lilith, is the oldest succubus alive. She turned 1,567 years old this year. Before she became queen at the age of... Did Lilith become queen when she was 36 or 37?" Lily asks her mom.
"She became queen at the age of 42." Evelyn replies, making Lily look at her in confusion. "Anyway. Before Lilith became queen, humans and succubuses lived together peacefully. In exchange for protecting human from demons, they rewarded us with their cum. But that all changed due to one person. The story goes that one day, a young man made a deal with a demon. The demon promised to grant the man world-conquering powers if he killed all the succubuses. By the time we found out it was a human killing us and not demons, there were only a few hundred adult succubuses left. Those of us that were still alive banded together to fight the man. Lilith managed to kill the man. But she was the only adult succubus remaining. To ensure our species survived, she-"
"What are you talking about, Mom?" Lily asks, interrupting her mother. "That's not what happened. Tell Master the real story of what happened."
"That is what happened. Lilith was the last adult succubus alive and took all the baby succubuses underground to raise them. She used her magic to make all humans forget we exist. And since that day, succubuses have lived underground, hidden from humans."
"Okay, that part is true. But everything before that isn't what my teachers told me in school. Your story doesn't even make sense. How can a human kill a succubus? They can't kill a demon."
"I assumed the man was able to kill us because the demon gave him demonic powers.
"Even if he did possess demonic powers, there's no way he would be able to kill hundreds of succubuses on his own. Not even a demon is capable of doing that."
Evelyn takes a moment to think. "Okay. You're right about that. Maybe I'm remembering the story wrong, and it was multiple humans with demonic powers who were killing us."
"Our species didn't almost go extinct because of humans. It was our stupid ancestors who nearly killed us all," Lily says, now starting to get annoyed.
"What are you talking about? What was the story your teachers told you in school?"
"My teachers told me that long ago, a succubus died while trying to protect a human from a demon. She was unsuccessful in killing the demon, and the demon thought of an evil idea. He possessed the human and had him confess to being the one who killed the succubus. Many of our ancestors were stupid enough to believe the story. They wanted the man to be hanged to **** for killing one of our own. But the succubuses who were smart and didn't believe the story were able to convince the humans in charge of the law that the man was innocent. When the man wasn't punished, the stupid succubuses were furious. As an act of ****, they broke into the man's house and killed him while he was sleeping. This sparked a war between succubuses, and Lilith was the only adult succubus left alive in the end. That's what happened."
"Your story doesn't make any sense either. How did none of the stupid succubuses realize the man was under demonic possession? They either had to be extremely dumb or blind. Second, all of our ancestors must have been idiots if they killed each other over the **** of a single human. And our queen is not an idiot. Lastly, explain why our queen has a strong hatred for humans if we were the ones who were killing each other."
Lily doesn't respond as she doesn't have an answer to her mom's question. Their queen does have an **** hatred toward humans. But her story doesn't explain the reason why. She looks at Jeremy and says, "I don't know what to tell you, Master. That's the story all of my teachers in school told me."
"Okay. So, since your queen was the only adult succubus left alive, she's the only one who can confirm what really happened long ago, correct?" Jeremy asks.
"Yes. Queen Lilith was the only adult succubus alive at one point and raised all the baby succubuses on her own underground since she hates humans."
Before Jeremy can ask another question, someone knocks loudly on the door. "Who could that be?" Jeremy asks as he gets up from the couch. After finding and putting his pants on, he approaches the front door and opens it.
"Hel-" is all Jeremy manages to say before the succubus at the door grabs him by the neck and effortlessly lifts the young adult male off the ground.
"Alright, human. If you value your life and wish to continue living, you will tell me everything I want to know. Where are Lily and Evelyn?! I know they are here! Where are you hiding them?! I swear if you have so much as-"
"Lilith?"
The queen of all succubuses looks toward where she heard someone call her name and is relieved by what she sees. "Lily! Evelyn!" She recklessly drops Jeremy onto the floor and leaves him lying on the ground as she enters the house.
Lily and Evelyn kneel on the floor and bow their heads, showing the utmost respect to their queen as she approaches them. "Greetings, your Majesty," they both simultaneously say.
"You may rise, you two. I'm so happy to see that you're both safe."
"We're fine, your Majesty. What are you doi-"
"Wait? No! Is that what I think it is?!" Lilith shouts, interrupting Lily. She's horrified as she stares at the tattoos that are on Lily's and Evelyn's bellies. Behind her, she hears someone approaching. Lilith quickly grabs the person and pins him hard against the wall. When she realizes the person she's holding is the human who answered the door, she stares daggers at him. "YOU! Are you the one who **** these two to have sex with you?! Answer me!"
Jeremy would answer if he could. But he can't with his throat currently being crushed. He fears for his life, thinking he's going to die being strangled to **** by this crazy succubus. But thankfully, Jeremy's two succubus sex toys are there to save him.
"Your Majesty! What are you doing?! Stop it! You're hurting our Master!" Together, Lily and Evelyn rush to try and **** their queen to let go of Jeremy. But before they can reach her, Lilith willingly lets go of Jeremy. She turns around to face Lily and Evelyn, now directing her anger toward them.
"Did you just call this human Master?!" Lilith shouts. However, she doesn't get a response from either Lily or Evelyn. They are both too scared to answer. Never before have they seen their queen so angry. Ultimately, Jeremy finally breaks the silence, happy to be able to breathe again.
"Yes. They call me Master. But my real name is Jeremy. Nice to meet you." Jeremy holds his arm toward Lilith, wanting to shake hands with her. But she doesn't. Instead, she punches him hard in the stomach. As Jeremy collapses to the floor in pain, Lily and Evelyn rush to help him and ensure he's alright.
"Why did you do that, Lilith? All he wanted was to shake your hand," Evelyn says.
"I don't shake hands with humans. And if you knew what he has done to you, you would want to punch him as well. You told me you were leaving to go and find your daughter, Evelyn. How did you wind up having sex with this human?"
"Well, I never intended to have sex with a human. When I found Lily, she was already Master's sex toy. She told me nothing bad had happened from having sex with a human and convinced me to do it as well. What even is the problem with having sex with a human, your Majesty? Nothing bad has happened. All we got are these cool tattoos on our bellies."
"These tattoos on your bellies are the tattoos of ****. You two doomed yourselves."
"What? What are you talking about, your Majesty? What is going to happen to us?"
Lilith takes a deep breath, calming herself down a bit. But she still desperately wants to kill Jeremy. "When a succubus has sex with a human, they are bonded to that human for his whole life. They suffer a curse where they can only feed on that human's cum. If you try to feed on a different human's cum, it'll taste disgusting. Even if you could get past the taste and were able to swallow it, it wouldn't satisfy your hunger. As soon as this human dies in how many years of his pathetic life he has left, you'll die shortly after from starvation."
"WHAT?!" Lily and Evelyn both say simultaneously.
Jeremy, who has recovered from getting punched and stands up, starts to speak. "If you knew about this, why have you never told anyone? Lily and Evelyn told me they didn't know the reason why they couldn't have sex with a human. I would think important information like this is something you would want everyone to know. Isn't your job as queen to protect your-"
"Silence!" Lilith punches Jeremy in the stomach again. "Who are you to judge how I protect my people? But to answer your question, human, I never saw a need to tell anyone this information. Ever since I became queen, no succubus has had sex with a human. That is, until recently." Lilith gives Lily and Evelyn a **** glare. "All succubuses, sorry, almost all succubuses follow my rules without question. They live by the notion that the succubus species is superior to humans, which we are. If we didn't need your species' cum to survive, I would kill every single one of you myself."
As Lilith starts making her way to the front door, Lily tries to stop her. "Wait! Your Majesty. Where are you going?"
"I'm going home. I was hoping to bring you back with me. But I can't since you had sex with this human."
"Please. You have the most powerful magic of all the succubuses. There must be something you can do to help us."
"I am helping you. I'm allowing you to live the rest of your lives with this human until he dies. You should be thankful that I haven't decided to kill him."
"Now, hold on." Jeremy gets back up and approaches Lilith. "There is something you could have done. You could have told all your people what would happen if they had sex with humans to prevent this from happening. You are a terrible queen. Also, I have a name. Stop calling me human."
Jeremy expects Lilith to punch him again and prepares himself. But to his surprise, she doesn't hit him. Instead, she spends some time examining his face.
"All you humans look the same to me. And you can all be described the same way. Pathetic, inferior, unless. I could go on." Lilith turns toward Lily and says, "I always thought there was something special about you. I believed that you would do great things. But it turns out I was wrong. Instead, you were nothing more than a disappointment." Lilith leaves the house without saying another word and flies into the night sky.
A million things are going through Lily's mind about everything that has happened since Lilith arrived. It's a lot to take in. She has just learned that her queen isn't who she thought she was. The person she looked up to the most called her a disappointment.
Evelyn can tell her daughter is close to crying and does her motherly duty of comforting her. She hugs her and speaks in a soothing voice. "Don't worry, Lily. All of this is a complete shock to me as well. But I promise you everything will be alright."
Despite feeling good receiving a hug from her mother, Lily still lets out a few tears. "How is everything going to be alright, Mom? Shortly after Master dies, we'll die as well. How long do humans live, Master?"
"Our lifespan varies. Some of us die extremely young, while others can live to be 100. Most members of my family live long lives. My great-grandfather lived to be 106. And my grandpa is still living strong and healthy at 87."
"You humans live that short?! Oh my god!"
"Calm down, Lily," Evelyn says, patting her daughter's back. "I have an idea. If it works, we won't have to ever worry about Master dying. Are you willing to try out my idea, Master?"
"Sure, I guess. What exactly is your idea? And is it going to take long to do?"
"No, not at all. We can get it done tonight. But first, we'll have to travel far. How are you with us carrying you while we fly, Master?"
A/N: I hope you all enjoyed the chapter. I didn't think I would publish another chapter before this year ended. I thought about holding off on publishing this chapter until the holidays ended. But I decided to publish it now.
Sorry that this chapter only has 1 image and basically no erotic scene. I wanted to see just how good of a writer I am and thought of this interesting idea for a full story for this storyline. I know I don't have to write a full story for this. But I don't want every storyline/chapter I write for Hypno Captions to be the same plot of perverted guy gets the power to mind control people and turns women into sex slaves. I don't know how many chapters or different storylines I have currently written and published for Hypno Captions. But I don't want everything I write to be just smut with no real plot. I think it's safe to say from the many chapters I've written that I'm creative and hopefully a decent writer.
So, with this chapter published, this storyline now has an antagonist. I guess you could Lilith a villain as of right now. But for the idea I have of how I want this storyline to go, she'll be an antagonist or possibly an anti-hero. I don't want to spoil everything I have planned. I haven't fully figured out the entire story for this storyline yet. So, I think I'm going to mainly work on writing other chapters and storylines but continue writing this storyline on the side. If you guys like this chapter and think it's good despite having no erotic scene, then let me know. It would be great for me to know that I can write a good chapter without having to rely entirely on smut.
I hope you all have a nice day and see you again in the next chapter. The image used in this chapter was generated in PixAI. Happy holidays and Happy New Year. Let's hope that 2024 will be a good year for us all.
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Hypno Captions
Mind-control pictures with bite-sized stories attached
Sometimes an image begs for some text to really bring out its true potential. This story is for those pictures and captions. Stories will be on the shorter side, just as some bite-sized entertainment to accentuate the pics, though if the fancy strikes, longer stories are fine as well. Mind-control stories only.
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