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Chapter 12
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Moot
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The Silly House
Vanessa could see that street was coming to a dead end, nowhere to turn and walk. Feeling hopeful, she thought this might end her hypnosis and allow her to have control again. Unfortunately, she took too good of a look at the street. At the very end of the street was a small entrance down a covered up alleyway. Big red arrow signs pointed to the entrance, dead golden bulbs outlined each one. "Come inside!" Was written in big bold letters above the entrance. It looked abandoned, with none of the lights working.
It was poetic that this entrance happened to be directly infront of the former CEO. Her heart sank as she felt her hypnotic mind look at the instruction above the entrance and obey it. She knew it had followed the order because her normal walking had turned into a stride. She stormed over to the entrance, looking keen and eager. Her mind, however, panicked. She screamed and shouted internally, wanting nothing to do with this strange entrance.
Vanessa unwillingly stepped down the dark tunnel, her footseps made loud echoes. The tunnel wrapped round to left where a bright green light shone out of it. As Vanessa walked round the corner, she saw a hole at the end of wall where a stall was. A big sign above the stall said "Silly House!". Vanessa rolled her eyes as she unwillingly walked over to the stall in the tunnel. "You must be joking..." She muttered, embarassed by how ridiculous this place was.
When she reached the stall, she looked around. There was a closed bright red door to her left. Inside the stall was a small reception desk, a computer and a cash register. A fairly obese middle woman was asleep on a chair infront of the woman. She had very messy and unkept red hair that looked like it hadn't seen a brush in years. She wore black jeans and a black top.
Vanessa awkwardly stood there and watched the woman sleep. She noticed there was a bell on the desk with a sign next to it saying "if I'm asleep press me." The hypnosis got to work before Vanessa had even processed it, she quickly slammed her hand on the bell.
The woman awoke instantly, she shook about on her chair. When she saw Vanessa she grew a wide smile. "Oh! Hello! You're here for the silly house?" She asked Vanessa. The former CEO used every fibre in her body to try and say no, but her hypnosis nodded her head in agreement.
The woman clapped her hands together happily. "Marvellous! That'll be $400 please!" The lady demanded as she prepared the cash register. Vanessa's jaw dropped in shock. "Y..you can't be fucking serious right!?" Vanessa asked, she let out a small chuckle in disbelief. "Absolutely ma'am, this is a one of a kind experience, you are not just getting a ride, the silly house will change you forever! So $400 or no entry!" The woman told Vanessa.
Vanessa twitched her entire body, she could feel the hypnosis reaching into her back jean pocket. She didn't want to go in there anyways let alone pay that ridiculous price!
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Downfall
Vanessa's sentence
Vanessa Sinclair is your typical rich CEO, who only cares about her money and is rude to her employees. But when she is caught stealing money from employee wages, her life is about to be changed for good with a new kind of sentence.
Updated on Mar 10, 2026
by LittleBoyLeo
Created on Dec 3, 2018
by Moot
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