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Chapter 8
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Galvan
After the blowjob what happens?
Testing part 2
Before you let go of Yang's head so she can get some air you have a little more fun.
"Okay, couple more rules. First an addendum: In the mornings, you actually can't talk until I say you can, and I'm going to be slow on that today after how you rudely awoke me. Next, I'm going to let it slide today but I'm not going to give you a passing grade from now on unless I wake up with your mouth already getting to work. Lastly, all deepthroats must be accompanied with a photoshoot I get to direct however I want." With that, you use your free hand to grab your scroll from the side of your sleeping bag. You know Yang needs to see her new markings for them to take effect and you don't know how else to do this. "Since we're in a rush, I'll settle for just one this time but you're going to get started on your routine pretty early to satisfy me in the future." You snap a photo and flip the device to show Yang. Her pupils dilate for a sec as that moment of realization takes her again. You got her. Now let's see what else you can do. "Oh, and some random tidbits. In addition to all your huntress skills and everything else, you a master in blowjobs and all sex acts, including but not limited to role play, BDSM, and every position in the book. You have a reputation as a dumb bimbo slut to everyone, including your family, which you hate but can't fix, and your self-worth is stored entirely in my opinion if you. Just for the record, I don't think of you as much more than a sentient blow-up doll right now." Yang is sitting up on her knees now, up from your cock. Her expression changes rapidly as all this information enters her mind. It's all completely true. You can't test if you can just give her skills by saying she has them right now, but everything else seems to stick. "Now onto wardrobe. I'll go through your things later but we're in a hurry. Take off that shirt fully and those pants. You can wear whatever shoes you want and don't forget your gauntlets or other weapons, but for the rest of the day, it's panties for you. Oh, and you barely passed this routine. Now go so I can get ready." Yang rushes to the door, stripping out of her pants as she goes. Were you too hard? Who cares? It's Yang. If anything goes wrong you'll fix it.
You guys make it to the changing rooms long after everyone else. By the time you arrive, it's just Ruby, who was waiting for her sister, a redheaded girl who similarly woke up late, and a boy who seemed to be waiting for her alongside Ruby. You notice that those leaving as you arrived all give Yang a glance of disgust. You'd think it's that this supposedly serious expert-in-training is late in nothing but panties and sneakers but it's not that. They don't stare at her body but into her. Yang has a look of understanding on her face. She knows what it is. Until you change how people think of her, she's always going to be a dumb slut to them. So test number 3 worked. Other people don't need to be there when you set the rules, it'll still affect them. Now for the final test for now.
"Oh Yang, the only makeup you know how to do is extremely heavy whore makeup and you're really good at it. Like, the best. You can get it done in like five minutes tops. And I require a full face of makeup to finish your routine so scram to it. Once you're done you can talk again." She looks like she wants to roll her eyes but instead just grabs her bag and pulls out a hand mirror, getting to applying. Meanwhile you mingle with the rest of the teens while you get dressed.
"Hi I'm Nora." Nora's the redhead who was also late. She's just a little bit less busty than Yang but the top she's wearing has a little cleavage window in the shape of a heart that draws your eyes to it. "You're Jaune, right? We all thought you were spooked or something after what happened in the airship. I wanted to bet Ren about it but he was all 'we should trust in our fellow classmates.'" Nora folds her arms and stands up straight as she makes her voice deeper, trying to impersonate who you assume was the fully dressed huntsman-in-training who was standing alongside Ruby when you came in. You'd probably appreciate Nora's upbeat personality and talkative nature if it wasn't an early morning where you're still groggy. And if you weren't on a power high from the marker. Instead, you decide Nora's going to be test number 5. How connected do the things you claim to where you write them?
"Hey Nora, if we're gonna be classmates we should put each other's numbers in each others' scrolls. You know, for studying and stuff?"
"Sure I guess. Ren always tells me I should study more but I never get it. Like, that's so boring when you can punch stuff!" You start to tune Nora out as you swap scrolls. You turn your back and quickly uncap the marker, writing "Jaune's Nora" on the top, with enough room for an edit if need be. Then you friend your student account on Nora's scroll.
"Here you go, Nora."
"Why'd you write my name on your scroll? And why did you give it back to me? I mean, I need a scroll but just because you have two doesn't mean you—"
"Sorry about that," You cut her off as you take the scroll back. "Lemme erase that." So you can't just claim anything on something unrelated. Furthermore, if you have your name on it without specification, the other text is just words people still notice. But what counts as related? You don't erase the name, instead adding to it. Your comment, scrunched up all over the top of the scroll, now reads 'Jaune's pictures that Nora takes.' Then you hand it back. "Here you go."
"Huh, I never knew you owned the pictures I take. That still doesn't excuse you to just write what you want on my scroll mister!" She taps you on your chest with the scroll. Success. Now you just have to see if this applies to things besides this one scroll. Before you can test that theory though, Yang pulls up, sporting a new and hilariously extra face of makeup and two ammo belts wrapped around her waist.
"There Jaune," Yang says. "Is that suitably 'whore-ish' for you?" She puts up air quotes around the word. Nora seems noticeable off-put by Yang, leaning back as Yang gets closer. If Yang notices she ignores it.
"You must be Yang. You match the rumors. I'm Nora," Nora says, looking her up and down.
"Well, what is that supposed to mean?" Yang replies, annoyed.
"Yes, Yang, that's enough," You cut in. "You're free to go. Hey Nora, if you're done getting ready, I'd love for you to take some pictures of the inside of the airship to team assignment with my scroll." You hand her the scroll. As she takes it her eyes dilate like Yang's did for half a second. Neither girl seems to notice.
"Sure thing Jaune." Nora closes her locker and heads off, almost in a trance. Test 6 is a success. Even though you wrote it on her scroll, the ownership is over an element of Nora. The two things are related but it's not just that one contains the other.
"What's her deal?" Yang scoffs as she walks off behind Nora. And by the looks of it, test 4 worked too. Yang put that makeup on in record time and you assume given her more subdued look yesterday she wouldn't have been able to do that without your commands. You slip on your hoodie and your chest plate, snap on your scabbard and grab your sword before following behind the two. You have a feeling today will be a good day.
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Written Ownership
Claim anything or anyone
A lucky protagonist discovers that they have the ability to claim ownership over anything or anyone by writing their name on it.
Updated on Jun 10, 2026
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