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Chapter 36 by Dexabyssin Dexabyssin

Mystery Question ...

Story

Elizabeth: The mystery question is a bit different because there isn't exactly a right or wrong answer.

Sakura: What, no right or wrong answer?

Elizabeth: I'm getting there. You will write a short story of a few pages which will then be graded out of 10.

Ino: And I imagine you'll be the one grading our work.

Elizabeth: Absolutely not. I'm way too busy for that. No, for this task we will bring in an expert. It is my pleasure to welcome the most popular writer in all Konoha, Jiraya.

Jiraya suddenly appeared in the room. But strangely he seemed particularly calm.

Naruto: Ero Sensei

Tsunade: Jiraya you better get us out of here ASAP!!!

Elizabeth: No need to talk to him like that for him it's all just a dream, we've suppressed his ability to recognize that it's reality.

Jiraya: Hello to all my dear contestants, so I will be the reviewer of the artwork you are about to write. From what I understand the time allowed is 6 hours.

Elizabeth: Indeed, we are not going to ask you to write a masterpiece in 5 minutes. However, for audience reasons, we will allow ourselves to speed up the time. Questions, right? Perfect! Let's go!

Naruto: Wait how?

Elizabeth: I just put them in a time bubble 1 minute here is also 2 o'clock there so in 2 minutes now the test will be over. Our judge Jiraya Sensei will then judge the quality of the achievements. But if not, Judge, what do you expect from his achievements?

Jiraya: I would obviously be lenient and open-minded. They are just beginners; I can't expect them to have spent as much time as me researching their works.

Elizabeth: I'm sure they'll appreciate your mercy. But how time flies more than 30 seconds. A last word Naruto before we discover the literary talents of our candidates.

Naruto: You don't have to do that you know. We can find a solution to solve your worries. Together.

Elizabeth: The famous blabla no jutsu, but don't worry the producers took care that I was immune to this most formidable talent. On these good words let us discover the first work. Jiraya Sensei, I gave you an accelerated reading ability to save us time what do you think?

Jiraya: So, on this first work which is called 'The fox and the rabbit', I am divided. The story of the seduction of a young princess by the thug is well written but the intimacy depicted is way too sweet it seems like whoever wrote it doesn't know how it happened. So I give it a rating of 6/10.

Elizabeth: It was the work of our favorite Milf Tsunade which brings it to a final score of 12/20. Will that be enough to get first place? Now let's continue with the second story.

Jiraya: This work is called 'A rose for the most beautiful of all'. It is the story of a princess whose beauty is without equal who loves a prince who loves another. The prince is engaged to the princess but ends up running away to marry a commoner and the princess commits suicide out of grief. I don't really like this story which is far too sad for my taste but it's well written, so I give it the average.

Elizabeth: Which makes a total of 7/20 for Ino I'm sorry but for you it's 3rd place at best. Next story.

Jiraya: This story is called 'Adventure of a Determined Kunoichi'. It is the story of a young girl in front of the strongest ninja of all time after a difficult beginning where she is mistreated by her village of which she wants to become the leader. This story is deadly boring and moreover how is it that the heroine manages to make the bad guys give up nothing but by talking to them. I rate it 3/10.

Elizabeth: Which puts Sakura at 5/20. Hopefully the next one will be better.

Jiraya: What can I say other than congratulations? It is worthy of one of my greatest works. This story called 'The Harem of the Hermit' is fantastic, the orgy is described in great detail and the ending is breathtaking. 10/10 I cannot put less than the maximum score.

Elizabeth: Congratulations to Sasuke even if the note of 11/20 does not allow you to be first it is particularly impressive.

Jiraya: On the other hand, the following work is particularly incomprehensible. Honestly, ' A walk in the woods' is not about anything other than a walk in the forest and from time to time you have words that are placed there randomly. And no, I'm sorry, but storks don't bring babies. 1/10 and again I am generous.

Elizabeth: Which puts Hanabi with 1/20 in last position. Which leaves us with Hinata's story.

Jiraya: I enjoyed this story. 'The Master's Servant' is the story of a Maid who serves a young nobleman who is looking to get engaged and then through disappointment the young nobleman ends up understanding that it is his faithful servant who would be perfect for him and they have sex together. The story is interesting and the descriptions thoughtful. But the work is unfinished the author was still writing the end which makes me give him the score of 7/10.

Elizabeth: And so, we have our big winner with 15/20, Hinata!

1st Hinata Hyuga 15/20

2nd Tsunade Senju 12/20

3rd Sasuke Uchiha 11/20

4th Ino Yamanaka 7/20

5th Sakura Haruno 5/20

6th Hanabi Hyuga 1/20

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