She Earns a Perfect Score

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Ancillary to your ability to grade attributes of women is the universal acknowledgment of the scores you give the women and the belief that your scores are correct. If you rate a woman's appearance highly, she must be beautiful. Society will adopt your standards if you adopt a criterion and grade women consistently. Consequently, you view this ancillary ability as more substantial than your primary ability.

There's a movement in America to broaden the definition of 'beautiful.' Vogue had featured plus-sized models on its cover. Artists like Jax had published songs arguing female beauty standards were imposed on women by men. Ted Talks hosted in universities decried fat shaming. The beauty movement was the culmination of a century of work done by the brightest minds in feminism. Knowing you can undo all their progress in less than a year is a heady feeling. All you have to do is rate plus-sized women poorly, and rate fit women well.

You have reason to do so, as well. Caitlin- your fitness model sister- had been your first fantasy. You know you like fit women with thick asses and big boobs. Grading Caitlin's physical appearance poorly- discouraging women from trying to look like her- would be counterproductive. Consequently, you give her a ten in every physical category.

Grading her skills is more complicated. Unlike physical attributes, skill attributes are personal. Giving Caitlin high or low skill scores will have no impact on society. You are free to pursue an alternate plan. Like Dana, you don't want your sessions with Caitlin to be a one-off. If anything, you desire to repeat these sessions more with Caitlin than with Dana. Consequently, it is tempting to repeat the tactic you used on Dana- giving her a low skill score before offering to help her improve her scores by having sex with her. The only thing that stops you is knowing the tactic won't work.

Caitlin's not a virgin, and she doesn't live with you. She's slept with other men and will sleep with more men in the future. If you give Caitlin low skill scores, she will practice with other men, not with you. The only time you'll get more sex is when she decides to retest. You don't want that. You want a steady stream of sex. Consequently, you give her the skill scores she deserves and instead turns to a different section of the score sheet.

It takes almost two minutes before Caitlin stops mooning over how well she scored and turns to the additional notes section. Her brows furrow. "I've never heard of the Helen Syndrome before."

She wouldn't have. You made it up. "It's a rare disease. It only develops in women with at least one 'ten' score and can only be detected by a Female Body Inspector during the inspection process."

Caitlin looks worried. "How do I cure it?"

"The affliction can't be cured. Only managed."

Caitlin looks resigned. "It's going to kill me, isn't it?"

"Why would you think that?"

"The disease is named after Helen of Troy. She died at the end of the Trojan War."

"If this disease were terminal, I'd be much more panicked. However, you're right about Helen Syndrome being named after Helen of Troy. Helen's face was beautiful enough to launch a thousand ships to war. Given this disease only affects women with a ten in a physical category, it seemed natural to name the disease after her."

"If it's not going to kill me, what will the disease do to me?"

"It will lower your skill score. You can think of the Helen Syndrome as nature's attempt at imposing balance. The more tens a woman receives, the faster her skills will deteriorate. If you had gotten a single ten, you'd lose a point in each skill category daily until they reached zero. If you had received two tens, you'd lose two points. Because you've received four-"

"I'll lose four points daily," Caitlin completes.

"Exactly."

"You said the disease can be managed?"

"Halted or reversed," you elaborate. "The syndrome will stop permanently when you reach menopause" -once Caitlin becomes too old to fuck- "and will temporarily stop progressing if you're four or more months pregnant" because you don't want to fuck visibly pregnant women.

Caitlin's lips tighten. "And if I don't want to get knocked up constantly?"

"I can reverse the disease's affliction," you reassure her, and Caitlin relaxes. "All we have to do is have sex."

"What?"

"The disease doesn't deteriorate your scores over the course of the day. The decline happens all at once, as soon as the clock passes midnight and a new day starts. After your score drops, I need to apply the treatment- a load of cum- to each afflicted hole. You'll need to swallow a load to reverse the damage done to your oral skills, take a creampie to reverse your vaginal score, and an anal creampie for your anal score."

The Helen Syndrome was an elegant solution to the issue of not having a convenient way to score repeat sex with gorgeous women after the initial inspection. As the sole Female Body Inspector, you control all the inputs for the affliction. You control which women get ten scores- the prerequisite for the syndrome- and the only way you'll give a woman a ten score is if you find her intensely physically arousing. After giving women the Helen Syndrome, you are also the only person who can treat their affliction, ensuring a steady stream of sex.

You had given yourself a powerful harem-building tool by creating the Helen Syndrome. The only question is: How aggressively do you want to deploy this tool?