Chapter 164
by
Mr Nice Guy
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Saree, Not Saree
The white girl who opened the door looked sick. Pale, dark circles under her eyes, an oversized hoodie swallowing her frame. She had a sour smell, like someone who had recently emptied her stomach.
"Hey Indira? Your mom's here. And she looks... really pissed."
The girl turned away from Neha, looking back at the other girl in the room. Indira. Neha's daughter. Dressed like some sort of...
"Would you like to come in?" the invitation interrupted Neha's thoughts, bringing her back to the moment, sharpening her ire.
Her stomach dropped. Her heart kicked against her ribs, slow and angry. Her daughter stood in the middle of the room, like a goat in front of a tiger.
A tiny, figure-hugging top clung to her chest. Her skirt showed far too much leg. A girl her age, still in school, shouldn't be displaying herself like a piece of meat in the butcher shop. Her stance wasn't cautious or quiet, like Neha had raised her to be. No. She stood with her shoulders back, like she wanted someone to see her. What was she doing here? In this house? Dressed like that?
Neha stepped inside.
She didn't look at the white girl again. She didn't offer pleasantries.
"Indira, what are you wearing?" she snapped, her accent sharpening with fury. "What are you doing here, in this place?"
Indira flinched but said nothing.
Neha marched forward, not caring whose house this was, not caring if she was making a scene.
"I want you to get your things. We're leaving. This is not—this is not who you are. Look at yourself."
Still, Indira didn't speak. Her face was flushed, but her chin was tilted down in shame. That only made Neha angrier. Her daughter obviously knew better.
"I don't know what's happened to you lately, but this ends now. You look like—like someone I don't know. Someone who has forgotten who she is, and where she comes from. You have always worked hard and been a good girl. Now you want to abandon it all, just to become like these girls? Like these chalu white girls?"
"Okay, okay," the white girl by the door said suddenly. "I don't know what chalu means, but could you not yell at my friend in my house?"
Neha turned, scowling.
The girl crossed her arms, leaning into the moment like a child who had just been handed the drama she ordered.
"She's here because I'm sick," she said flatly. "I threw up all morning. Indira came to check on me. Because she's a good friend. One of the only ones I have."
Neha blinked.
That... wasn't what she expected.
Indira still hadn't spoken. Her mouth was slightly open, her cheeks hot with humiliation. Neha felt the situation slipping from her grasp, but she didn't know where to catch it. The girl's words echoed again.
A good friend.
Yes, Indira was a good girl, and of course would be a good friend. Then again, good girls didn't dress like that.
"Indira," Neha said, trying to soften, "what you are wearing is not how we raised you. Do you understand how this looks? To me? To everyone? What if your father saw you? This is not our culture. You have always been respectful. And now you're going out dressing like—like—"
"I hope I didn't overstep."
A new voice descended from the stairs. Smooth, composed, and practiced.
Neha turned.
A tall woman in a navy-blue power suit appeared at the bottom of the steps. Her brown hair was swept up into a neat bun, and she radiated the kind of authority that made Neha's chest go tight. Not flashy, not loud—just confident. A woman used to being listened to, a woman who expected respect.

"I'm Donna," she said, offering a hand. "Juniper's mother. You must be Indira's mom."
Neha took the hand, a bit too late.
"I just wanted to thank you," Donna said warmly, turning to Indira. "You've been such a help. Juniper doesn't have many friends. Not good ones, anyway. I'm really grateful she has someone like you looking out for her."
Neha opened her mouth to object, but Donna continued.
"And look at you," she said to Indira, smiling. "You took my advice." She nodded approvingly at the outfit. "About owning your body, I mean. I'm sorry if I said too much, but I believe women—especially young women—need to take full ownership of how they move through the world. If we don't own our bodies, men will assume they can. And trust me, in the business world, that lesson gets learned the hard way."
She turned back to Neha, the smile softening again.
"You should be proud. You raised a thoughtful, polite, kind daughter. She's going to be a real **** in the world." Donna paused, then turned back to Indira, "And remember what I said. If you decide to pursue law in university, my door is always open. I'd be proud to have you intern with us."
Neha felt something lodge in her throat.
This woman. This Donna. She had completely taken control of the conversation. Her words were kind, but the subtext was something else. There was power in her tone, and it made Neha feel like she was being gently corrected in her own language.
She looked at Indira again. Her daughter was still flushed, still quiet. But she wasn't defiant. She looked like a girl caught between two worlds.
And maybe she was.
Neha exhaled.
"I think," she said, clearing her throat, "it's time to go."
Indira nodded, moving toward the door, not looking back. She didn't say goodbye to Juniper's mother. But as she stepped out onto the porch, Juniper called after her.
"Thanks for checking on me," she said sweetly. "I'll text you later."
Indira paused, then nodded once.
The door shut softly behind them.
And Neha—still holding back every word she wanted to scream—followed her daughter down the steps, trying not to feel like the whole world was slipping sideways.
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