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Chapter 165 by Mr Nice Guy Mr Nice Guy

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The Hunt

The colour red hovered just at the edge of her understanding.

Not the word—Steve had spoken it to her over toast and jam—but the feeling of it. What it did to the world. How it meant something.

Elorae stared out the window as the city rolled past in slow increments. The streets shimmered beneath a washed morning light, conveying a feeling of warmth against the concrete and steel. It was Sunday, Steve had told her. The slow day. The quiet day.

Her reflection in the glass startled her anew.

Hair—yellow. Blonde, Steve had said with a sort of reverence, like he was naming a miracle. Her skin had once been the dull flat tone of sand under stormlight, but now it glowed faintly with a pink cast. Rosy, he'd offered, staring at her with a deep and intense respect. Her eyes had gone the deepest, most startling brown, like wet bark, like rich earth of this strange world.

"Brown," she whispered now, watching her own gaze reflected back.

"That's me."

The thought sent a ripple of wrongness through her, and also something close to pleasure.

The car made a sharp turn. She placed her fingers against the door to steady herself. Steve drove with the single-minded patience of a man no longer burdened by his own agenda. He watched her constantly, even when he pretended not to.

"It's left, Steve," she murmured, pointing again. "That way. It's… it's turning."

"Roger that," he replied, easing the wheel.

She didn't like being in the car. It moved too fast and not fast enough, all at once. The shapes of buildings crowded her mind—repetition, glass, vertical ambition. Her kind had shaped whole floating metropolises from ether, cities that shimmered in and out of phase with the seasons. But this?

This place was… dense. Heavy and bold and stubbornly blue.

"Blue," she said out loud.

Steve glanced at her. "The sky?"

She looked up. "No. That car." She pointed to a compact vehicle with a coat like lapis. "It is blue. That is a good blue."

He smiled, boyish. "You're getting good at this, Your Grace."

"I am changing," she said. Not without fear.

He didn't respond to that. Just turned the wheel again, following her direction.

Her creation was close.

She didn't yet know what form the idea had taken, but she could feel it moving, breathing, deciding. The sensation was maddening, like trying to cup water in her hands while it shifted and ran through her fingers. One moment it was still, rooted in place, and the next it darted westward—like now.

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"There!" she snapped, arm slicing across the space between them. "It's moving again."

Steve swerved obediently.

They passed a building of gray stone, soaring and ornate, its steps populated by people in strange contrast: men in suits like coal, women in yellow, orange, violet, all new words to her, all finding easy perch in her lexicon. A crowd of bloom and shadow.

"What is that place?" she asked.

Steve glanced toward it. "Church, ma'am."

She turned the word over. "What is a church?"

"It's where people go to worship. To pray."

"To who?"

A pause. "Some would say God."

"Is there a god here?" she asked.

He hesitated. "Some think so."

She filed that away. Curious. A godless world that still practiced ritual. That, she understood. You didn't need divinity to feel need.

She turned her head as they passed the crowd. The church doors were open, revealing candles and stained glass, the echo of voices in a song she didn't recognize. Something tugged at her again. A shimmer. A hum.

Not her creation—something else. A parallel vibration. There was belief in that building, she could feel it. Deep belief, despite all evidence to the contrary.

She pressed her palm to the window.

This world is more than it pretends to be.

"How much farther?" Steve asked softly.

She closed her eyes, reaching—not with sight, but with the ancient thread inside her. The tether she had spun from raw instinct and aching guilt, back when she still believed that shaping thought was safe.

The tether snapped taut.

Her eyes flew open. "Still a while, but closer every minute."

And for the first time since crossing through the rupture, she felt something new.

Uncertainty.

What would she do when she found it? Her mind had been so certain, so structured. Retrieve the Idea. Harness its influence. Use its energy to reverse the degradation of her world. Burn out Vaelith's infection at the root.

But that was before it had taken form. Before it had nested in a human shape.

And if it refused her?

If it had no desire to return?

If it had become something… else?

She didn't let the questions bloom fully. There wasn't time. But she felt them hovering in the corners of her mind, like moths circling a flame.

"Steve," she said suddenly.

"Yes, Your Highness?"

"If I fail… if I cannot extract it..."

His eyes flicked toward her. "You'll succeed."

"But I..." She looked out again.

"Your Grace," he said, "Forgive me, but I can't imagine a world where you are not successful. You are like the sun, and the world will find its orbit in your presence. It is inescapable."

The street narrowed. A traffic light glowed green above them like a floating jewel.

She whispered the name.

"Green."

Her creation was beyond it. Somewhere up the hill. Somewhere beyond rooftops and trees.

She laid a hand on her chest. Felt her own heart, as warm and real as any human's.

Soon.

She would see her Idea.

She would see what it had become.

She would see if there was anything to be done to save her world.

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