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Princess-Knight → Knight-Captain
Maybe if I emphasize her 'knight'-ness more the helmet will show up? I eye the 'Princess-Knight' phrase and consider how to do that, with the first though to come to mind being to change it to 'Knight-Captain' or something and... The Prompt takes that and locks it in in a blink.
I find myself a bit further away as the hall shifts and paints itself again, with its end returning to view.
Arma's stance shifts and she holds her sword up and more at the ready, an easygoing smile still in place. Her shield grows larger and more ornamental, while her leather is dyed a deep purple that better complements what seems to be Armelia's general color palette. Her fauld even gets a little pink coattail... then her braid falls loose and...
...Still no sign of a helmet. Well. What now?
(knight-captain, pink hair, braided hair, kind expression, tilted head, one hand forward, holding a shield, standing proudly while holding a sword, plate armor, skintight leather pants, half open knight helmet, inside a castle hallway)
[AN: The sword hand's gotten a little weird, but the blade is actually being held instead of floating in the aether so I'll take that as a win.]
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