Cry for help from the Cave Rat

Susan's left side was dead and unable to move. The slow but strong starfish was crawling up her body. She panicked and yelled for the dog sized rat monster. "Help!" She shouted, "HELP!"

The being must have heard her. It snarled and appeared at the shore snorting and sniffling the air. Susan yelled to it. "Help me," she pleaded trying to still pull the horrid starfish off her. "I'll do anything," she pleaded. She was ****. "I won't leave you I promise." Not that the being would understand. But Sue, normally strong and confident, was saying literally anything to save her hide. "I'll...let you finish...I'll be yours." She added, unsure what she even meant. "You can have me," she pleaded. "I promise," she sobbed being pulled away towards water. Would the fucking rat thing even understand she was offering herself?

Despite its primitive nature, it moved to the waters edge quickly and leapt towards Susan. Its snout open wide exposing sharp teeth. Sue felt sudden fear but the rat bit into the starfish.

Susan felt the beast pull the tentacle creature towards the shore. She felt a wave of relief, that was short lived. Soon, the last tentacle wrapped around the back of the rat monster and the being was yelping in pain. Susan began pounding her fist as the two fought the large starfish. The large rat creature had a tentacle in its mouth. Susan fell then, and luck was on her side. She found a rock and began beating the starfish.

Dragged to the waters edge, and being smashed and bitten was all the starfish could take, it reluctantly let go and slunk back into the calm waters.

Susan's left side was holding onto the spiny quilled back of the creature as they both lumbered painfully to shore. Susan needed the creature, and vice versa to move. The pair hobbled along the shore to a path, Susan seeing red marks from tentacle suckers on her arms, torso and legs. The sharp pain radiated around her body. She knew this creature was leading her away to some fate she dared not think of. The blonde beauty had promised herself to it. There was no way it would know, right? Susan shuddered at the thought.

The creature slowly brought her to a thick patch of thorn bush. It moved its snout and bit small red rasberry like berries. The red juice flowed from its mouth. It turned and growled and yipped at Susan, who found herself reaching for a berry with weak hands. The Invisible Woman pulled one off the stalk and then put it in her mouth. The sweet taste was actually wonderful, but it's what happened after that surprised Susan. The pain in her body waned, and went to a numbness. The berries had a narcotic effect, thought Susan as she peeled more off. The rat monster was ripping them off and chewing.

Soon, the pair began to move again. Sue still needed to lean on him, but her strength and movement on her left was returning. With her mobility and feeling in her left side returned, she found herself crawling after the beast. Rough thickets of thorn above the small game trail they followed prevented Susan from standing.

She noted the long moving rat like tail on the creatures back, and while the face resembled a rat from New York, the beasts arms and legs were thick and muacular, almost a cross between a canine and an ape, with finger like claws at the end. What scared her most were the white and grey quills, like a porcupine or hedgehog on its back. They seemed to ripple now and again, like a muscular reaction.

Susan followed, keeping her eyes from the thing between the beasts legs, it hung down, pink and long, extending from a sheath. It was like a large pink worm, with a conical end, no mushroom head like a human, just a sort of worm like growth from between its legs. It had been inside her, Susan sighed, and she feared it may again. What embarrassed her was how the strong smell coming from the phallus affected Susan's body. Reed would say its natural, the male musk working on Susan's more primitive portions of her brain causing arousal. Still, it was embarassing.

She wasn't sure where this beast was taking her, and it made her nervous. Suddenly, the beast moved into a clearing and the thickets of thorns above her head were gone. The clearing was filled with a grove of fruit growing out of the ground. The fruit looked like tomatoes crossed with apples, dark red in color. The rat beast began to feast, and Susan, starving herself began to eat beside him. The fruit was sweet and utterly delicious, tasting like strawberry flavored melon somehow. Sue noted an area of rotting fruit in some patches, and what appeared to be puddles. The beast walked over and began lapping at the puddle next to them. He picked his head up and looked at Susan.

My cue, thought The Invisible Woman and she crawled to his side. She bent down and smelled the strong scent of...****. Susan seemed to nod, fermented fruit puddles. The beast wanted more "painkillers" from their fight. Susan bent down and licked the red puddle. Sweet and strong in **** it tasted almost like a MaiTai like drink. Susan slurped up the drink, wanting to ease up herself. She suddenly felt hot breath on her pussy, which she hadn't remembered was bare. A snout dug into her folds then, and Sue tried to amble forward, but was met with a growl, deep and nasty. A warning! Followed by a nip, a lite bite of her white ass that made her yelp.

Susan recalled the promise she made before this creature saved her. She bent her head down and slurped up what was the equivalent of four strong shots and kept drinking to avoid what was occuring behind her. She felt a tongue enter her. It was rough ans long, snapping in and out of her now wet puss. The beast began to tongue fuck Susan with vigor. Licking and lapping at her womaness. A rat tongue in a human cunt. Susan hated her bodies response then, and she felt a wave begin to build. "Wait," she pleaded, "no", she called out again. But the rough tongue was rolling over her "spot", a sensitive anatomic button even Reed failed to activate inside her. "Ohhhh nooooo," Susan moaned lowering her head, and her hands squished fruit as she gripped for something. "Ohhhhh noooo," she moaned rolling her hips back into the snout. She was cumming right in its mouth.

The creature was tasting the most delicious juice in the Grove then. The sweet, tangy taste of her sex was wonderful, and her pussy flowed into his mouth and lapping tongue. Finished, the beast stepped back and licked its slick wet lips now covered in Sue's own feminine juice.

The Invisible Woman found herself rolling onto her back, fruit smashing beneath her body. Red juice rolling over her nude body. Susan suddenly, of all reactions, began to laugh out loud. Maybe the narcotic berries, or the pungent alcoholic juice, or the absurdity of the ordeal. She couldn't stop.

The heroine then felt a presence that broke her mirth. The now hulking rat beast was on top of her, she looked up in its dripping jaws, dripping with her own honey. Sue moved her lower body to the side closing her legs, and she felt something pushing on her asscheek. Something warm and moist. She didn't look down. She knew what it was. Her eyes met the beasts. He was old, she could tell. In her drunk state, she reached up to touch a scar that cut across his face and left eye. A battle no doubt.

The thing rubbing her ass was still there, but Susan wasn't afraid, and in fact, she felt pity. There was an eagerness in the being she'd never seen before. A yearning. Susan looked up at his maw, and realized what he was. "Skaven!" She muttered. The name referring to beasts of legend and lore. She knew of legends of large cave rats, here in the Savage Land, some must have survived. But Sue hadn't seen others, nor has Reed cataloged this species. She'd heard Shanna complain of them long ago. Hadn't been seen in ages.

She heard it yelp and welp in need pushing itself back and forth over her ass cheek. "Your the last one," she realized then. She suddenly understood. He's trying to save his species, she thought. He doesn't know it won't work. Susan felt such sadness. She reached up. "Will you be gentle?" Would he even know what that meant. But she knew she owed this creature a debt. And in her heart, ever the kind heroine, she wanted to help. Even if his intentions would never be realized. They couldn't, Sue told herself, he's not even...the girl stopped her insane thoughts and slowly opened her legs until they were outside his back legs. "I'm yours," she said rubbing its long ear. She felt the beasts cock slide up her slit and back down causing Sue to moan. Then he pulled back and entered her switfly. The rat monster was mating the human beauty and it squeeled in glee.

"Aaaauhhh," Susan moaned, her wet pussy taking in the creature's member. His hot long cock slid inside with ease thanks to his licks. Hwr legs came up around his hind quarters and her arms around his neck as he pushed the length of his dick into her. The rat wrapped its strong arms around her waist and began to hump into her. He was in heaven, feeling his need being sated, feeling her pussy on his cock.

Susan was getting fucked for dear life, and hung on. The heat built and within a minute she was already on an edge. No longer feeling apprehension she let it take her, "Oh god I'm gonna cum!" Her hips pushed up and her shoulder blades fell onto fruit. Her hands gripped his quills as her body convulsed. "Uuuuunnngghhh!" She shrieked into the daylight of the grove.

Her spasming pussy was too much for the old rat and he buried his pink phallus up into the human female's tunnel. His hot seed sprayed out into the female.

"RRRRREEEEEE!" The beast squealed meeting Susan's loud moan. Birds flew off around them from the noise.

Deep in the Savage Land, Susan Storm's breasts heaved as she caught her breath. Above her the rat monster was doing the same as they rode out a shared orgasm.

Deep in the Savage Land a human female and a large mythical cave rat mated...the Land was happy.

Susan's mouth was open in a lustful manner, staring up at her strange new lover. This was her third "intimate" partner. Her high-school boyfriend, Reed Richards and now this being. No, never Namor or T'challa as some guessed. Mere kisses. This monster had enjoyed an intimacy with the heroine only two people on the planet knew. She was rubbing his face affectionately as the rat beasts stomach moved up and down, the creature catching its breath. Sue felt pain slightly when the being pulled its member from her womanhood. It slipped out, dripping cum, and leaving Susan's pussy an open hole. A hole which began to push out hot potent seed, slowly at first then in spurts.

The beast went tk eat fruit, to regain strength. A drunk Susan merely watched, still stunned she had made love to the creature, and oh..how she enjoyed it. One of the better orgasms of her life.

No one can know about this, thought Susan. An incident in her life that would REMAIN invisible, she laughed in her head at her pun. Sue watched the rat feast, its hind quarters facing away from her. Its tail flopped side to side, and between its legs, a second pink tail-like protrusion hung down, flaccid, but still out and long.

Susan Storm-Richards walked on all fours up to the beasts back. No one will ever know, she kept telling herself. This will be our secret, she said in her head as her eyes were suddenly on the cave rats large hairy ball sack. No one will know, she repeated. She recalled what the monster had done early as she feasted. With smile, she whispered, "paybacks a bitch". Her head moved forward and she sucked on his right hairy ball, planting her face near his ass as he had done earlier.

The cave rat had never felt such stimulus, and be looked down to see the female beneath his legs. Her strange paws rolled his balls. Then, the beast was shocked when the pink skin female put his hanging "pisser" in its mouth. The warm sensation was unlike anything this cave rat had experienced. He watched his member be engulfed by the female's mouth and it began to harden.

"AAAARRRIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!" The cave rat screeched out in utter delight, sending more birds flying.

In the distance, Reed Richards recorded and noted the screech of an unknown animal on his computer. It was about 250 miles south. While there was no time to categorize this new species, it was notably in the same general direction as Susan, his lost wife. Ben was piloting the Fantasticar. Reed was calculating Sue's position. Johnny was flying, "flamed" on, scouring the ground with his own eyes.

"We need to hurry," Reed informed Ben looking at Susan's bio-readings. He openly admitted he had placed nano-bytes in his team, to track and monitor life signs. It was underganded, but now necessary to find Susan. "Every thirty minutes or so, her heart rate, body temperature, blood pressure, and oxygen levels spike."

"What does that mean egghead?" Ben asked his friend.

Reed sighed. "I don't know. But I believe she is in some sort of continual distress."

For once, Reed Richard's assessment about his wife was dead wrong. Her heart rate, body temp, blood pressure and oxygen intake were constantly elevated for a much different reason.

250 miles south, Susan was screaming into an open cavernous space inside a mountain.

"OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! OH GODDDDDDDD!" She mewled like a whore, her eyes staring forward, her left hand tweaking her left nipple, her right hand holding the muscular front limb of the cave rat as it pushed its entire cock up inside her. Her body convulsing in a another orgasm.

Above her head, the beast was shrieking itself, holding her waist with its other arm like limb, mounted on the beauty from behind.

"RRRRRRREEEEEEEIIIIIIIIIIIGGGHHH!" The animal squealed, its cock exploding once more in Susan's love tunnel.

The two intersepcies lovers were sharing yet another orgasm. So much of the beasts cum was up in Sue's pussy cave, that jets of cum sprayed back from their union, trying to make space for this new potent load. The beast bent its snout down and the female's lips came up to meet his own. He puckered his lips like he was fishing a grub from a deep hole with his tongue. The female seemed to enjoy locking lips and moving her tongue in his mouth, as he did the same.

Susan moaned as she strangely kissed her new lover once more. Who would have thought the Invisible Woman would share a post-coital kiss with a rat creature. This new lover, though not human was slowly becoming the best of her life.

The cave rat began pulling his cock from Sue's cunt, but it was tightly squeezed like a fuck glove. So she had to grip his strong arms to brace as pain and emptiness filled her. He pulled free, his cock dripping and hanging low. Susan looked ahead to the rolling waterfall from the upper ceiling of the cave, and then down between her legs, a very similar flow, but not water, poured from her pussy. White hot cum splashed down like a faucet had been turned on.

The rat beast left Sue huffing and puffing for air. His confidence was high, he'd found a suitable mate, more than suitable, and he hadn't mated in decades. The aging creature was, for the first time in a while, content. He was hungry, and walked over to a pile of dead crunchy cave spiders.

Susan just rolled onto her back, legs open, cum flowing out and onto the dirt beneath her. "You're insatiable," she laughed running her hands through her sweaty hair. Susan reached for the pack of smokes she'd found in the airplane wreckage rcently. They found it down the river, an old warplane with skeletons in the cockpit. They found a flint, some smokes, and some canned foods including candy. A good score.

The Invisible Woman lit her smoke and took a puff. She never smoked, but she needed them now. This beast took her promise and ran with it. How long had she been here in his cave? When they were in the cave, there was no way of knowing. Little, if any sunlight shown through, other than the area down the tunnel that fed to the waterfall. Instead, the creatures provided light. Bioluminescent pink slugs all over the walls, blue fish in the stream that flowed from the waterfall, spiders, and even the beasts quills lit up the area. It was like constant black-light, but very visible in this lair of his, with even a fluffy willow stuffed nest area to sleep. All they did was sleep, eat, and fuck.

They slept already, they just fucked, and as Sue's stomach growled, she knew it was time to eat. She lit a small fire, cum still pouring out in small spurts from her pussy. Not too bright, as it would kill their night sight. She put the purple glowing crabs on a stick. She didn't like the glowing purple spiders, unless they were cooked. She loved the fish, not cooked. Sort of a cave sushi.

The rat watched her burn her food, but he then let her feed him. It tasted rather good, but he preferred fresh kills. Susan laid her head onto the beast as he himself lounged on the shore of the flowing river.

Sure there were dangers, as Sue had seen LARGE dead spiders, and further down this cave's river were LARGE catfish like creatures, but in here she felt safe, comfortable and relaxed. She rubbed the rats ears, and then looked to him, still seeing that yearning and wishing she could help. As there eyes met, the waterfall seemed to get more intense, but the two unique lovers didn't care. Soon, they were kissing again. Somehow, Susan found herself on her back, her legs held up by her head by the rats strong front limbs, and he was ready to fuck again. She let out a moan as it entered her.

But the shoreline began to collapse. It happened quickly, and a flood began. Susan and the rat disconnected and began to race for higher ground, but Susan was swept away, screaming as she reached for the rat.

She began flowing far down the cave. To what and where, she didn't know.