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This is the last part of this chapter and deals exclusively with the things you, as the reader, decided through polls.

As you can see, with a budged of 1600 Tokens (minus the 3200 tokens for invisibility I decided to buy for the greater good of the story) we will have Choice of sexuality, sensitive vagina II and exibithionism turns on. A perfect fir. Thank you. I can work in many ways with this, formost with Rania, Candice and Lynn in the later chapters, but the next Lynchwood Family Orgy (with maybe Lisa and Sonya) will profit in a good way from sensitive vagina II. Sage and Sofia will profit as well long term in terms of their sexuality and Rania will get the help she deserves on her big mission. Speaking of wich...

Come on guys. You did it again? :) Well, I will keep the poll open after the next chapter and we will see then. What I can say is that I really look forward for the chapter with Rania. She will do a big step in her PS and you can decide her future in a poll. Lynn will help the story grow, as the chapter with Bella will too. And Candice I look forward to it because here too we will decide what will become of her in the future. I think she will get some new perks to mix things up with her pain addiction.
About the next chapter, I'm already about 3k words into it and really happy with it. IDK what it is, but I really like the way I can write with Bella. it seems she always helps me with writing. I want to start a major arc with her and her family. I love her dad and I am really looking forward to the first Progression points for Heather (The Joker) as well.
I really, like really hope you like this chapter. I love, like really fucking love Sage and Sofia and wanted to make their path important and worthy of their characters as such great girls. The poll is slightly in favor for Sofia to be in the lead of their path right now but I will wait a but till closing it. For now, I hope, like really hope you see the massive amount of thought I put into their path as well as with Ryan too! I'm really, like really (last time with this word play, promise) glad I came up with a better way of specialising his path (and sexuality). So I will start a new poll for him at the end of the chapter.
Now, please enjoy (and don't mind the stench)...
Chapter 85. Part IV
New York Subway at night. The worst idea in the long line of bad ideas. It's late. It's dark. It's dirty.

But that doesn't bother me as the grimy walls outside rush past the window and the smell of… something disgusting fills my nostrils.
Congratulations! You have brought a subject to -50 with persuasion, tricks, and energy!
Sofia Wilkins and Sage DeSanto / Two in One "We're so alike!"
With increasing progress, the two subjects will slowly merge into one entity. This includes the five senses as well as all other (sexual) feelings of the body and, rudimentarily (and with increasing PS more and more precisely) also their thoughts, until each of the subjects can control the body of the other and the two finally become one entity with two bodies.
PS -11
After tonight, it's absolutely clear to me that they'll both be staying with me, and I'm really looking forward to it. It's also high time I checked their progress score now that I've learned how to interact with them, and they with me.
Choice
Mindbending Jedi Sisters
If the subjects combine their focus and concentrate on an activated or not activated person defined by the user (preferably with a picture and personality), they can control that person's body chemistry for a certain period of time, causing their target to experience the emotions the user desires. The duration and intensity of the chemical/emotional takeover depend on the level of the Progress Score, starting with 3 hours up to 24 hours.
Bodybending Sith Twins
If the subjects combine their focus and concentrate on an activated or not activated person in their immediate vicinity (the target must be visible to the subjects, but not to the user), they can take over that person's bodily functions for a certain period of time, causing their target to obey the user's will against it's own. The duration and intensity of the physical takeover depend on the level of the Power Level, starting with one minute up to two hours.
"Oh wow," I murmur, my voice lost in the screech of the mostly empty subway car. Even the bum sleeping some distance away isn't bothered by my presence. "This isn't just bordering on magic. This is fucking magic!" I shake my head in disbelief. You fuck about 10 girls. Everything in your life is magic, Lynchwood. I take a closer look at the options. "Not much difference." Wait. That's not true.
Mindbending Jedi Sisters seems more like I can manipulate certain situations to my liking. If Rania, Candice, or Lynn resist, I can use this specialized path to make them become the way I want them to be without forcing them, at least for a short time. And it works on other people too. This could be useful if I ever find myself dealing with angry or uncooperative individuals or want to **** my path in a gentle way.
"It's like I have my own Jedi army," I realize. "These aren't the droids you're looking for. Hehe." My grin is reflected in the sticky puddle on the floor. "You like me. You want to hire me. You want to give me free rides." But I also have to consider that this control, at least for now, is only temporary. That applies to both specializations, although Jedi Sisters gives me the ability to use my powers remotely over a longer period of time. That's good, since my "powers" are currently limited to activated individuals. And I don't want to activate the ticket inspector at my station and add him to my harem just so she can let me ride the subway for free.
"Hm..."
Then Bodybending Sith Twins is probably the more sinister method, I think, but I'll correct myself. It's probably more of a direct method. That can also be helpful to me. Especially in direct, kinetic situations. I look around the subway. If I had the two girls with me, I could order everyone in this car to leave me alone. I could make my enemies turn away from me. I could accomplish good or evil with it.
So, to summarize. Jedi Sisters is used at a distance and manipulates the targets so they don't notice, but they don't necessarily have to obey me. Even if I make the girls make someone fall in love with me, they don't have to act on it. Sith Twins is more direct, at close range and short time. If I command a body, it will certainly obey, but deep down the goal knows something isn't right.
Jedi Sisters is used at a distance and manipulates the targets so they don't notice, but they don't necessarily have to obey me. So, I can choose the gentle, less effective but sneaky way, or the efficient, drastic, and guaranteed way.
"Hmm..." This will take time. Especially since Sage and Sofia mean so much to me. "Maybe..."
Yes. There's someone I'm sure I'll do.
Ryan Shaft / The wingman. "Talk to me Goose"
As the subject progresses, he develops the need to help the user acquire new subjects for his adventures. To achieve this, the subject develops the perfect body and attitude to complement the user and his goals.
PS -7
Then I'll look at the choices.
"Oh... shit..."
My gay best friend Ryan
The subject's sexuality is set to homosexual, so he is mostly (95%) attracted to the user's gender (male). Bystanders (primarily not activated) of both sexes will find the subject (My gay best friend Ryan) extremely attractive, with men quickly feeling strongly sexually drawn to him and women seeing him as the perfect, trustworthy, non-threatening gay male best friend. Any existing relationships of the user's (primarily not activated) potential subjects and sexual partners will inevitably be severely strained, damaged and almost guaranteed severely changed. Depending on the female subject's mental strength, she may seek comfort, **** (in the form of becoming fuck buddies), or trust from the user due to the loss of her boyfriend/partner to a man, or she may even realize her feelings for the user through this crisis.
Note: With increasing PS, the subject (My gay best friend Ryan) has more control over the final results and subsequent feelings of potential female and male subjects towards the user and him (My gay best friend Ryan).
My big brother Ryan
The subject will adopt the mentality of a "big brother" who cares for the user in a masculine way. The subject's sexuality will be set to bisexual with a slight to strong preference for male sexual partners. Potential subjects (as well as, to a lesser extent, already activated subjects) will greatly enjoy the presence of the subject (My Big Brother Ryan), although a sexual relationship is not necessarily inevitable. However, if a relationship does develop, the subject (My Big Brother Ryan) will grant the user free access to all potential female subjects (you deserve this, little brother) while "eliminating" the male partners in various ways. This can be done through sexual acts, intimidation, bribery, or distraction of the boyfriends/partners. The potential female subjects will feel a strong attraction to the subject (My Big Brother Ryan) and will follow the same methods when he eventually leads them to the user. Potential female subjects will feel obligated to help the subject (My Big Brother Ryan) and thus open up to the user, but they can also remain uninvolved or even fall in love with him. ("You were right. He's really a cute guy. Okay. I will do him just for you.")
Note: With increasing PS, the subject (My Big Brother Ryan) has more control over the final results and subsequent feelings of the potential female and male subjects towards the user and him (My Big Brother Ryan).
"Okay... Cool... Wow..." Fuck making this decision easy.
Either I make Ryan gay, meaning I drastically change him, in which case he'd be the center of attention, always surrounded by people who like him. My harem and I are included, of course, but the clear advantage for Ryan would be that once he's embraced the gay lifestyle, hopefully, he'd be just like me. He'd have free access to many potential partners and adventures, just like me, as he follows his path and hands over the guys' girlfriends and wives to me. All in all, it seems like a good option. The cost, however, is a complete change to his lifestyle and, though I don't expect it to happen, the potential crisis point of our friendship changing. I mean, I'm not gay or anything, but I won't cut him out of my life either. No matter how much he helps me with girls, Ryan will always have a place in my heart as my best friend. I can only hope he feels the same way after I change his life in such a drastic way.
So, making him my big brother might be the safer option. It wouldn't be a big adjustment for him. From a friendship perspective, it's the right choice. But would his life be better that way than if I made him gay? Him protecting me is normal, and the kiss earlier was pretty much exactly what I'd expect from him in this situation. If he were my Big Brother Ryan, he'd bring women to me in a more direct way. Women would be attracted to him, but he'd bring them to me. It would certainly be hot to have a one-night stand with a girl who sleeps with me because she wants to please Ryan, only for him to then say she should become my girlfriend. And with this solution, I could also give something back to Ryan, instead of "just" having boyfriends who would become gay for him. I'm sure he's interested in Sofia. Okay, probably not as much as I am after this incredible night, but still, it would be okay for me to let Sofia and Ryan determine their own relationship. I won't **** Sofia to choose between Ryan and me, nor will I impose my feelings on her if she comes down from the high she felt for me today. But even if Sofia should decide to stay with me which, to ba fair, would rock my whole world, I could share other girls with Ryan. Girls I don't love as I do with Sofia. Girls I want to fuck hard from both ends. Ryan could help me with this.
Whether gay or bi, best friend or brother, I know for sure that Ryan won't come between me and Sofia and Sage. That's beyond question. Both of them belong, if they decide so, only to me in heart and soul, not necessarily in body. And that's a decision I alone will take on my shoulders. I have no problem in doing so. Both girls are capable of doing what I ask of them, I know. They showed me this evening with their looks and bodies alike. What I have to ask myself is how much I want to change my best friend and wingman, what advantage I have in doing that, and how I can help him be happy. Because I owe him that.
"Heh," I grin. "And what I find hotter. Comforting a lovesick hot chick in a club whose boyfriend suddenly disappeared into the bathroom with Ryan, or having sex with that lovesick hot chick in the bathroom with Ryan. Maybe there's something that can help me," I muse and swipe around on the MCD. "5100 Tokens? Get shit!" Okay, I really haven't been shopping in a long time. I can afford so much. Fantastic. My fingers swioe accross the display in a shopping frenzy.
Choice of sexuality 400 Tokens
Let the user specify which gender the subject is attracted to. Only Men. Only Women. Both.
Speaking of Ryan, of course. I wonder if the MCD would prevent me from using this perk if I later decide I want to change his sexuality. I mean, that would disqualify this whole choice. In any case, I can use it to help some of my girls if I want to build a well-functioning and harmonious harem. And I can also play some pranks on my naughty girls, whom I'll soon be checking to see if they've fulfilled my last demands.
Extremely Sensitive Vagina II 800 Tokens.
The subject is always horny, and the production of vaginal fluid is massively stimulated. Always wet and horny, the subject's blood pressure drops significantly, and they are more often ready and willing for sex.
This is a no-brainer, even if I don't understand the blood pressure part. But the second level is useful for all of my girls, whether I use it kinky or loving.
Bought. What else?
Exhibitionism turns on 400 Tokens.
The subject is turned on when people or cameras watch it.
No question that I'm thinking of Lisa here. I'm going to prepare her for her online career at our next date at her place, and she's even brought it up with me already. I don't know exactly how far I'll let her go yet, but the recognition from other people besides me will definitely help her. It's high time she realized that I'm not the only one who sees her as a valuable person. I'm also thinking about Bella and our little session in Central Park. She obviously enjoyed coming on my knee, and tomorrow is our second date...
And… Sensitive Mouth could…
At that moment, the train pulls into a station. Two more stops, then I can get off, lie down in bed with Rose, and…
But it doesn't necessarily have to come to that.
Life has a nasty surprise in store for me.
I can already see the four figures on the platform.
Trouble. Fuck!
They radiate an almost sinister aura that seeps through the humid, warm air of the station and the metal of the ever-slowing silvery train. They're young, dressed in typical attire, and show all the signs of a gang of petty criminals who definitely haven't paid their fares.
And I'm sitting alone in the car.
And the group starts moving toward the door of my car. They're talking loudly and laughing even louder. **** is definitely involved, and I don't even have to look at their loose-fitting shirts to know that while New York has strict gun laws…
I could get off. Quickly and frantically, without looking at them, like I always do. Then they would see me.
I could stay put. If I act inconspicuously, maybe they'll leave me alone. I quickly glance at the homeless man who's just getting to his feet, sees the four figures, and with a slurred "Hell no," changes cars without looking at me.
If even a drunk homeless man is clever enough to make a run for it... then...
Too late. They already wouold block my exit and if I run out of the car, they would see me and...
I react quickly, almost instinctively.
Invisibility 3200 Tokens.
The user is hidden from all eyes for ten minutes. This applies to activated and not activated subjects, as well as bystanders. Animals and minors are exempt from this effect.
At that moment, the doors open and the four figures stream in, loud and reeking of **** and pot. But I don't pay attention to them. Instead, I look at my reflection in the disgusting puddle of disgusting liquid.
Invisibility Perk activated. 9:59… 9:58… 9:57…
I can't believe it. Body, face, and even clothes!
I'm invisible!
"Fucking hell…" I whisper.
"Did you say something?" One of the crooks asks his partner. They're standing close to me… and they don't see me. Now I can only hope they don't sit on the bench where I… "Hey!"
Of course, they sit down here, and I manage to jump up just in time. In doing so, I bump into one of the young men.
"Watch out, you fucker!"
But he turns to his buddy and snaps at him.
"I didn't do anything!" he replies. "What do you even want?" The two scoundrels are about to attack each other, they're so drunk.
"Shut up!" As I gasp for breath, clinging to a pole some distance away and pressing my hand over my mouth, the car starts moving again. Everyone turns to the young man who spoke. He speaks with the youthful, brusque authority that wasn't earned but rather stolen by ****. "Spike made it perfectly clear that we have to behave ourselves here," he admonishes his companions. One of the boys shrugs. "That's Vaine's turf."
"There's nobody here," he says casually, defiantly. "And even if there were, I'd..."
"You wouldn't do anything, you son of a bitch," he's interrupted loudly. "I don't want to get punched in the face because of you." He glances casually around the empty car, looking directly at me... and right through me. "We'll wait until we get to the final stop, then we'll light a fire under those fuckers, got it?" The gang nods while I try to calm my nerves. "Come on," the leader says then. He's about my age, which seems to be the only thing we have in common. "We've got plenty of damage to cause today. Goal is this store at Chestnut and Wilshire." With that, he leads the group of troublemakers out of the car.
“Fuck,” I gasp as I feel the fresh night air on my face as I step out of my home station. It’s not far from home, but I cover the distance even faster, my adrenaline pumping. Taking the train so late was a stupid idea.
The front door of Lynchwood Home swings open by itself, letting me in.
Lynchwood Home +2 (PS -64)
Warm, yellow light envelops me, and I call out that I’m home. Quick footsteps sound, and I smile when I see Rose.
“Hello?” she says, looking around. “Honey? Finn?”
“Hey babe,” I say… and almost get hit in the face. Rose screams, and I don’t understand. “Wait, wait!” I deactivate the invisibility perk and materialize right in front of my girlfriend.
“What the… fuck?” Behind Rose, who gasps and puts her hand to her mouth in surprise, Tammy pushes her way over to me and hugs me. I take my daughter in my arms as the door closes behind me.
"I'll explain everything," I say to Rose. "In bed. I'm exhausted." After this day, I don't even want to fuck anymore. Adrenalin has driven the lust out of my system and after the Subay, I need a shower with Rose or Jasmine, grab Tammy and Mom and go to bed, cuddling till I fall asleep.
And tomorrow Bella and I have our big date.
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Not gonny lie here folks, this feelt really good. I think with this we have a great time with Ryan in the future and even if his sexuality choice is the same, his additions Ryan will defenitly become a great friend and supporter to Finn.
Thanks to all my readers and supporters who gave me their thoughs, wishes and helped me in shaping this specialised choice of path for Ryan. Here, I'm with you and this time even I couldn't decide if I wanted him gay or bi. I only hope this time I was good enough in making it a bit more clear in the end with giving you little hints of the future adventures of Finn and Ryan. The club scene was my salvation with this. Thank you. :)
Oh and Sage and Sofia. Their specialised patth (inspired by my favourite genre, Star Wars, who's only Films are Episode I-VI and after that Rogue One!) is one I'm really giddy about. I gave them a more prominent place in the harem in the future and their path (if Sith or Jedi) will help Finn in the comming strugles and take Sage and Sofia into his inner circle, a choice, I must do to protect my dear Sofia from her fear.
Speaking of fears, I found a chart by **** (this medicine/philosopher guy IDK). Basically, he gave me 12 archetypes of characters, their goals and subsequent fears and I characterised all girls and boys of this story in this chart. This will help me form their character way better and even give them long-term goals and ways of becoming happy (or not, if their way doesn't work) in the long term. This is a great addition.
And another addition would be the sex between Bella and Finn in the next chapter. I'm not there yet, but almost certain it will happen. Maybe Heather will watch.
I think it would be a good idea to let you decide what will happen there.
The sex would be in a standing position, fully clothed (Bella in a dress), well lit, with people around, on a flat surface and would consist of four parts. Foreplay, Position I, Position II and Cumshot. I will make a poll containig all four with different choices. Multible choice of course. The most voted win the different parts.
I think I will hide the results of the poll til after the chapter so you all can enjoy but all in all I think this is a really cool idea and could be done more often if you like.
Foreplay.
Loving. Pressing Bella against a wall/on a surface, kissing and fondling her breasts.
Passionate. Hugging Bella from behind, nibbling on her neck, giving her a hickey and fondling her breasts.
Risky. Standing beside Bella (with people in the room!), fondling and fingering her under her dress. (Exhibitionism turns on activated)
Position I
Loving. Bella sitting on a surface. Finn licking her pussy to orgasm. (Vagina I activated), while caressing her body and breasts. (Breasts I activated).
Passionate. Bella blowing Finn (while someone is in the room!), hiding in plain sight while Finn pretends to do something else.
Risky. Dryhumping (dick between tights) from behind (while someone is in the room!), making her come. (Exhibitionism turns on activated)
Position II
Loving. Fucking face to face. Bella sitting on a surface (ass getting wet), legs spread and stuffing her pussy. (Vagina I and Breast I activated)
Passionate. Fucking her from behind (Ass I and Breasts I activated), dipping her naked breasts in cold water.
Risky. Fucking her bend over in the Ass (while someone is in the room!), spanking her loudly and making her moan. (Exhibitionism turns on activated)
Cumshot
Loving. Pulling her dress up, nutting on her ass, whipping it away and pulling dress down with some spunk left for dark patches on dress.
Passionate. She tries to swallow but it gets messy and her breasts get showered. No time to cleasn up, someone is almost in the room.
Risky. Get drivin' away, nutting all of it in her face, making a mess out of her so she must clean up fast and (if I manage) in a really funny way.
TBH, writing this, this sounds like a really cool idea! I hope many of you will vote on this so I can do this in the future with other models as well. And, if you want, tell me if you stayed with one theme or had a variation of some sort. I can see Loving, Passionate, Passionate and Risky for example but am really proud that all combinations will... should work... ;)
Okay. Time for the polls.
Specialised path for Sage and Sofia.
https://strawpoll.com/e7ZJaqe1Bg3
Specialised path for Ryan.
https://strawpoll.com/e6Z2AbjaJgN
Sex Scene with Bella.
https://strawpoll.com/XOgOVqwX0n3
Okay. Next, I will continue writing on the chapter, setting up an important person in the story, setting up Heasther and then, after the poll, letting Bella and Finn fuck in a loving, passionate and/or risky way. If the poll with the Vollayball Bitches isn't getting a decicive end, I will start with Rania, then Candice and then Lynn. I already know what Rania (and the school characters) is up to and want to write about Candice, Lynn can cet more complicated but I already have some good ideas.
Till then, have a great weekend, fly safe and have fun voting.
See ya'all.
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