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Chapter 35 by deepedia deepedia

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THE NEW COACH CHAPTER 19 (Hannah's PoV)

Hannah’s PoV:

Finally, I can get a good rest.****

I threw myself to my bed. I haven't had any good rest for two days. I was busy with keeping Scott alive. When the boy recuperated, I stayed on alert to ensure that there was nothing wrong with his condition. The electric shock had taken a toll on his body. As the one responsible for it, I was doing my best to help him so there was no lasting hidden harm on Scott during his recovery. Thankfully, aside from a slight motoric issue on his lower body part, I didn't find any problem with his body.

After sending him back to his house, I still need to make some reports to the bureau about my findings and ask the headquarters to send me complete counter-brainwashing equipment. It took me an hour to complete the document.

With no urgent stuff that needed my direct, present attention anymore, I was finally able to drift to sleep.

Ring ring.

My phone rang loudly and woke me up from my slumber. Just when I dreamed about some hot slut and I was in 69, licking each other's pussy. I used to suck cock, but I was a bisexual that actually preferred pussy than Cock. Sucking cock is part of my duty, but that's it. It didn't invoke any special feeling within me when I sucked cock, but eating another girl's pussy made my heart throb faster than usual.

Well, enough about my sexuality, instead let talk about my job; in my opinion, the worst aspect of my job as an CIA agent was I couldn’t let myself go down in a deep sleep, I needed to be on alert as you never know when duty calls. The phone rang with specific ringtones, a ringtone specifically for someone I considered important in my book.

I picked up my phone and saw Scott's name on the screen. Why did he call me? Aren’t we just parting ways? Did he fall into trouble so quickly?

No. My eyes looked at the clock at the corner of the screen, it was almost 5 p.m. already.

Wait, it is 5 p.m already?

I was rubbing my eyes and checking the clock once more. I couldn’t believe that I got almost 5 hours of uninterrupted sleep. Honestly, it’s not something I should be happy about. As an agent, I shouldn’t indulge myself in a sound sleep despite how much I hate to not be able to get some good rest. During those 5 hours while I was sound asleep, something dire could happen and I couldn’t respond accordingly. I knew well that I’m not a superhero, but I wanted to be there when it counted. I wanted to present when someone needed help to kick the ass of a big bad guy.

“Hello, Scott, what happened? Why are you already calling me? Have you found any other proof that can help us?” I asked him.

“Uhm…I think. Can you help me to undo Raven’s brainwashing right now? I think she may be a valuable help for us. She may be the one that can give us the proof to put Darel to jail.” Scott replied from the other side of the phone.

“Scott, didn't you hear me when I said that the counter-brainwashing device would only arrive in the next 2 or 3 days? And you want me to undo Darel’s brainwashing on this person you call Raven right now? Yes, I can try to brute **** it with shock treatment like what I did to you, but I can’t guarantee that it wouldn’t endanger their life. If this Raven is a woman, I would prefer to not put her through the shock treatment. You should bring her to me in the next 2 or 3 days.”

“Please, I don’t think I will have any alone time with her any more than this time. This is a golden chance, please think of a way to save her.” Scott sounded ****.

I let out a sigh, I’m weak to seeing people desperately asking for help. But I’m also not a naive pushover that would jump to help just because people beg me for help.

“What is this Raven to you?”

“She’s…my friend,” Scott answered embarrassedly.

“Is she really just a friend? I don’t expect you are so **** to save just a friend, I thought it will be your mom that you want to save first, I don’t think we need to risk it out if she was just a friend,” I teased him.

“No, I’m sorry to not tell you the complete truth. She’s indeed just my friend, but I secretly love her. She is my crush. I don’t want to see her become Darel’s plaything. Please, help me undo her brainwashing.”

“Alright, I will help you to save your lover. I will send you an address, you need to bring her there. Make sure no one is following you. Oh, don’t forget to get your hand on your crush’s phone or make sure it is turned off to avoid being tracked. I don’t know how you will do it, but you must do it. Your crush is still under Darel’s control and If Darel knows about us, it will be harder to catch him. So, do you understand what you need to do, Scott?”

“Yes, Ma'am.”

“Good. I'm rooting for you. Bring raven to Alexandrina Street number 69. I'll wait for you there.”

The call ended. I put down my phone for a moment. Despite I said that I would help Scott, but with the lack of proper equipment, there were only a few things I could do to help Scott's crush. I could give her the electric shock treatment like what I did to Scott, but I didn't want to gamble on her life. Risking Scott's life once was enough.

Right, I still have that one!

I recalled that I still have something that may be useful to help undo the brainwashing in a safer way than electric shock, but whether it would be effective or not, I didn't know.


It was almost an hour later that I spotted Scott arriving with a slutty looking girl in his tow. It must be the one he called Raven. Despite her slutty makeup caking her face, I could tell that even without the thick makeup, Raven was quite a pretty girl. No wonder that Scott had a crush on her.

Our place of meeting was a quiet cafe that was hidden in an alleyway. It was a shady bar with almost little to none visitors. There was a reason I asked Scott’s to come to this place. First, I know the bar owner personally, he was a friend, and he also knew about my actual job, so I can do my thing more freely. Second, it was near my place. The short distance was an important factor because of what I was about to do next.

“Hello, can I help you with something?” I approached the two newcomers. I was disguising myself by wearing the cafe’s waitress uniform.

“Ms. Hannah, please he—”

I glared at Scott, and shut him down, he almost broke our plan by being too impatient. The boy seemed barely able to keep his calm. Nervousness could be easily seen from his face. _Can this boy act less obviously? _I complained in my mind.

I took a glance at his companion, Raven. She had a dry smile on her face, clearly unamused. I could feel her displeasure. But I didn't know whether she was pissed because of Scott, me, or because of the place.

“This is our menu list. We have wine, beer, and coffee. We also have our in-house special that was popular with our regulars, I hope you try it.” I handed them the menu, I made another eye contact with Scott and gave him a sign, I hope he understood it.

I stepped back and waited from the side like a good waitress.

“I want the in-house special,” Scott said. Thankfully, he understood my code.

“And you miss? Do you want the in-house special too? Buying two in-house specials will get you a discount and free snack,” I said to Raven. I was deliberately leading her to pick the same drink. Well, it’s actually not a problem if she picked anything else, but it would make her work trickier if Raven ended up buying a clear colored drink.

“Give me the in-house special too,” Candy replied.

“Two in-house specials will be coming right soon.”

I walked to the bartender and gave him their order. I didn’t only hand him the paper, but also a sachet of powder. The bartender knew what to do with it without me needing to explain to him.

A few moments later, the bartender handed me two glasses of colorful cocktails. The in-house specials were ready.

I walked back to Scott’s table with the drinks and handed the drink to them.

As I stepped back, I saw that Raven was swapping her drink with Scott before drinking it,

Clever girl. Unfortunately…

A minute later, Raven’s body trembled, she looked at Scott with hatred. The girl realized that something was wrong with her body. Unfortunately for her, before she could lash out at Scott, Scott dropped **** first. She followed him to the dream land a moment later,

Whether she swapped her drink or not, the result would be the same because both of the drinks were spiked with fast-acting sleeping powder.

Next, I needed to transport them to my place.


“Help! I’m being kidnapped! Free me! This is a crime!”

Raven was the first to awake from the two, thankfully, I had already tied her to a chair. But that led to her yelling loudly that I kidnap her.

“It’s no use, even if you yell on top of your lungs, nobody will come to your help, this place is fully soundproof, nobody outside can hear our conversation in this room. So, rather than waste your energy on that, let's have a civil talk.”

“Civil talk? You kidnapped me and wanted me to calm down?”

“Yes, I want you to calm down or I can **** you to calm down. I can put you through painful **** until you lose the strength to yell,” I threatened her. “But if you cooperate with me, after our discussion, I will free you.”

My carrot and stick strategy seemed to be effective, Raven seemed to stop struggling and calmed down.

“Good. First question, tell me your name, age, and what you like.”

Candy frowned at my rather simple question. She must have thought that because I kidnapped her, I knew about her background. But in actuality, I knew next to nothing about her, except she was Scott’s crush, because this was also so sudden for me. And unfortunately, Scott had not yet woken up, so I could only pry the information through the source herself.

“I’m Candy, 19 years old, I love to fuck,” Candy replied

She called herself Candy, and not Raven.

I took a note.

“I don’t think Candy is your real name, I want to know your real name.”

“My real name is Candy, do you think because the name is so cutesy, it can’t be my real name?” The girl insisted

Darel seemed to have brainwashed her to think of herself as Candy.

“Alright, next question. Do you know who Raven is?”

“Did that loser Scott tell you to call me Raven? The name gives me an ick, I already told him to call me Candy, but it seems he still insists on calling me that immature edgy name. It's just a cringey nickname I have before, but I prefer to be called by my real name now, Candy, please ignore the loser that tells you otherwise,” Candy answered in an aggressive tone.

“Scott will be saddened if he hears you call him a loser. He has a crush on you and is **** to save you.” I told her about Scott’s feeling, maybe the power of love would bring a miracle in this situation.

“Who cares? I had known that the loser loves me since long ago, but I just consider him as a friend, well, not anymore after what he just did, he might need to hypnotize me to make me love him back,” Candy replied sarcastically.

Too bad, there is no miracle of love working here. Poor Scott, but well, what did I expect? I let out a sigh.

“Alright, let’s move on to the next question. Who is Darel Lebron to you?”’ I asked her another question.

“He’s my Mast–coach in school, he is such a dreamy man, a lot of girls and teachers in our school have a crush on him, you will know how great a man he is if you meet with coach Lebron,” Unlike the previous question, Candy answered this one enthusiastically.

Darel had made the girl infatuated with him, but Candy might not realize it, but her enthusiastic answer had given me some kind of clues. Darel’s preference of mind control. It seemed he liked to make others lusting for him.

“Don’t you find it weird that you suddenly have a crush on Darel? Have you ever thought about the possibility that Darel was doing something to your mind? That your feeling wasn’t natural, but was the result of his mind control? Darel was mind controlling you," I told the girl.

“No, I don’t think it's weird at all, it’s all natural. It’s natural for a woman to love and submit to a big strong alpha man. Do you prefer a loser or a strong alpha man that can protect you as your partner, Ma’am? Most women would choose the latter because it’s our nature to seek someone reliable and able to protect us from harm. And even if he was truly mind controlling me, I don’t care, I’m glad that he mind-controlled me to love him.”

I shook my head in pity. She is completely head over heel with Darel.

I stopped asking her questions, at this point, I knew that Candy was deeply conditioned, reasoning with words would never be enough to shake her belief that Darel didn’t do anything wrong.

I took out the thing I had prepared for her. A cigar. This was not your usual cigar, the content inside it was so potent. It had a strong mind calming effect. Its main use was to pacify someone and make them act more cooperatively. Yes, it’s no different than hypnotic ****. Honestly, I dislike resorting to using this. First, I was not a big fan of smoking. Second, I felt that I was no different than Darel if I resort to countering his mind control with another form of mind control. But this was the safer way than putting the girl through the dangerous electric shock.

“Do you smoke?” I asked Candy as I lit the cigar.

“Yes.”

“Good, at least, you will like this one.”

I took a long, deep drag of the cigar. Instead of blowing the smoke out, I keep it inside my mouth. Next, without letting Candy resist, I **** my lips on her lips. I pried open her lips and pushed the smoke from my mouth down her throat.

I could feel her struggle weakened with each moment passed. The **** was working its way on her system. I released my kiss and stepped back once I thought it was enough. Candy’s eyes were dull, and she had a dopey smile on her face. I could see juice leaking down her bare pussy. I couldn’t tear my gaze from her pussy. The cigar was a double-edged sword. I also felt its effect, but thankfully, I was trained so I could resist its effect and not be entranced by it. I still felt overwhelmingly horny.

Candy would be in this ‘high’ mindless state for around an hour. Maybe I could play with her a bit before I work on her mind control.

No, I shouldn’t take advantage when she was unaware.

Oh, come on, Hannah, it’s okay, just a little bit, a little lick, how can you work if your mind is filled with lust?

The angel and Devil within me was battling for control on what I would do next. What should I do?

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