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Chapter 17
by FINN 0815
What's next?
Oh how the tables have turned
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Chapter 16
"Well well well If that isn't my favorite customer Finn Lynchwood." Bella bends over the counter, her breasts bulging under her black apron and seeming to reach out to me. But I'm a man, strong, determined, brave, confident... So I stare at her perfect... round... arguments way too obviously, far too long. "My eyes are up here dwerp." But she grins as I rub my head.
"Sorry," I mumble. Maybe it wasn't such a great idea to buy little bratty Tammy her ice cream here.
"Dude..." Rose punches me in the side, not hiding her joy at all. "Looking at a woman's breast like a dirty pig? Come on..."
"Look Bella," I say with increasing desperation. All the self-confidence of the last few days? Gone in the wind. Bella is really nice and I can't explain to her that since the MCD, I see every girl potentially naked with a hot kink/fetish, sprawling on my bed and longing for me and my cock. Bella doesn't deserve that... And she's already in the MCD. "I'm really sorry," I say again and mean it. I apologize for everything. The staring, especially. And the potential danger of derailing her life.
"It should be," the girl says sternly and looks at me with narrowed eyes. But then her nose wrinkles again, just for a moment, before her face relaxes and she shrugs while pushing her glasses up her nose with the palm of her hand. “Because you haven’t called me yet.”
“Yeah, that… eh… what?” Rose next to me puts her hand over her mouth to turn her hysterical laughter into a giggle
“Say, Finn, don’t you know this?” my best bro-sister asks, looking at the large plastic cups and the black marker in a pocket of Bella’s apron.
“What?” I ask, dumbfounded, but my sister turns to Bella while Tammy just stands next to us, looking grim.
“You wrote your phone number on the cup, didn’t you?” asks Rose, her cheeks turning that healthy, happy pink again.
“Did he…”
“I didn’t see him in the house with it.” Rose can’t take it anymore and bursts into bright laughter. “Fuck Finn, you really are the most monumental idiot I know.”
“What…” But then I get it. "Oh no... Bella, I... I knew you liked me... but that... I..." My shoulders sink in defeat. "I throw the cup away without looking..."
"Too late, Finn," the girl grins with mock malice. "That was your chance."
"Bella, I'm really sorry." My face glows red with embarrassment. "I didn't mean to..." But then Rose quickly pushes past me.
"We actually wanted to buy an ice cream," she interrupts me. I try to push past her. I'm a gentleman, damn it! A lady gave me her phone number and I... But Rose holds out her hand without Bella seeing it. Maybe she just wants to stop me... Or maybe it's intentional that her fingers press against my cock. They flinch briefly, but then she moves again and holds me back while rubbing against my trousers. "So before my block of a brother messes up again..." She looks at the board above Bella, a finger in her lips, her other hand on my dick. "I'll have a white chocolate milkshake and Finn..." She turns to me and lets go of my cock, which immediately starts to stir. “Something to eat?”
“Something I don’t have to write my number on,” grins Bella, who seems unmoved by my catastrophic disaster. "Waffles with ice cream?”
“He’ll take that,” decides Rose.
“Vanilla?” asks Bella.
“Strawberry,” decides Rose.
“Hey, wait a damn moment. Don’t I have a say in that?” Rose and Bella look at each other and both start giggling at the same time.
“Bro, you threw that lovely lady’s number in the trash. Be glad it’s strawberry and not something else entirely.” They both giggle again while I just look grim.
“I’ll make you your waffles before you embarrass yourself even further,” laughs Bella.
“Thanks,” I murmur. Then we watch Bella working again, but when my eyes wander back to her breasts, I feel Rose’s hand on mine. Without saying anything, we hold hands and wait for our food.
"Finally," growls Tammy and grabs her ice cream from the tray that I'm balancing on my hands. "I thought she would keep doing this forever." As we sit down, Rose and I look at each other questioningly and I can interpret her looks correctly. She doesn't want things between me and Tammy to escalate any further, her life is finally on the right track.
Sorry sis, but I have to do this. My little sweet ****.
Rose sees it and rolls her eyes, but can't help but grin a little as she slurps her milkshake and I turn to Tammy.
"That's not nice little sister," I say with a serious tone in my voice. "Rose and Bella had a good time. Why do you have to ruin it?" Rose looks at me expectantly, but begs me not to ruin her good mood.
"It's not her fucking job to give Rose a good time" Tammy growls. "It's her job to hand me my fucking ice cream." She angrily shovels the ice cream into her mouth. "Fucking thing..." I look at Rose. She leans back relaxed and nods at me.
Thanks sis.
"Hey! You fucking..." But Tammy's voice fades when she sees my gaze. Her arms are still outstretched for the ice cream that I am now holding in my hands. "Give it back you fucking shitface!"
"Shitface?" I ask and stick the large wooden spoon into the ice cream. At least she got vanilla. "That's new." I avoid looking at Rose so as not to drag her into my little fight.
“You want more?” Tammy looks at me challengingly. She doesn’t want to lose the status she has had over her older siblings her whole life. She leans over the table conspiratorially. “I saw you and the little cunt this morning,” she says with the venom of a snake in her voice. Next to me, Rose flinches fearfully and Tammy looks at her triumphantly. “You fucking him? This pathetic little piece of shit? You fucking him and what? He gives you his tiny little dick?” Rose looks at me for help. “I bet he doesn’t even make you cum and…”
My hand will surely leave marks on her wrist but Tammy gasps and looks at me, leaving my sister alone.
“That wasn’t nice of you either,” I say quietly, threateningly but calmly. “Speaking to your older sister this way.”
“Let go of me or I will…” Her eyes go wide as I pull her slim body in her baggy clothes halfway across the table towards me. I move closer to her.
"We two are talking now," I say threateningly. "Rose has nothing to do with this and if you weren't such a lousy little brat, you would have noticed that Rose doesn't want us to make a scene here." The pressure on her skin gets even stronger.
"Finn you hurting..."
"I need to" I interrupt her. "Or do you think I like doing this?" Okay, I kind of like doing this. But only so she listens to me. "Rose wants to have a good time with you and me and you're ruining everything." Tammy opens her mouth. "Silence."
Tammy Lynchwood. +1 (PS -96)
This time I don't even have to scream at her. I smile. Then I smile even more.
"Besides, you're only half wrong. The answer is yes. Of course I want to have sex with Rose." Tammy's eyes go wide and Rose chokes on her milkshake in an incredibly sweet but slightly disgusting way. "Who wouldn't? She's sweet and kind and she supports me. Everything. You. Are. Not. And she thinks well of you, Tammy." My eyes darken. "Better than I do." And there is something, deep behind the fear and hatred for me. Tammy reacts to my emotional detachment. "But I told you. You are a disappointment as a little sister." And that even gets through to her. I see her eyes flicker. "If you had participated in our conversation instead of acting like a beast, then you would know that your lovely big sister was trying to correct my mistake and get me the number of that nice lady that I so stupidly lost." Next to me, Rose wipes her mouth with her napkin and looks at me with bewilderment. I tighten my grip one last time while Tammy is already half hanging over the table like a doll. Now it really hurts her, together with the stab I just gave her good little girl sense, and she sucks in air between her teeth. "So finally realize that you are part of this group, part of this family, and behave according to your role."
Too much, I ask myself as I let her go. I don't want to put the idea of being my little daughter into her head, but I have to start somehow with this stubborn little bitch. Tammy immediately pulls back, falls back into her chair and holds her arm. Then she looks around. But it's like with a little girl. No one noticed that I put my little sister on the path to please her daddy.
That's right Tammy. Nobody will help you if you aren't daddy's little girl.
So I wait. It takes time with her.
"Okay..." she finally says. Then she looks at me. "I understand Finn."
Tammy Lynchwood. +2 (PS -94)
Two whole points? That's dragging on. I suspect Tammy really does mind being treated like a little child. Cute. I can work with that.
"Okay. Now apologize to your sister for your behavior."
"What?" While Rose shrinks a little in her chair and tries to hide behind her large (did Bella also pour her more than we paid for?) milkshake, Tammy flares up again. But not as much as before. The little girl has little brains I guess. "Why? It's not like she doesn't deserve it!" I lean threateningly over the table.
"Tammy, I can drag you over this table right now, grab you by the neck and drag you through the city, the bus and our street back home and lock you in your room," I threaten with ice-cold calculation.
"You... You can't... do that..."
"No?" I put my arm on the table, a little closer to her. She looks at it nervously. "We're sitting here spending Mom's money. Do you really think she'd say something if I treated her little appendage fairly?" That was the worst thing I've ever said to her. But it helps. Jasmine is the real daughter. Tammy is only here to be spoiled. But Mom only feels pride for one of her four children. Jasmine knows it, Rose knows it, I know it... And Tammy knows it too. "Rose and I are a great team," I say.
"We're bros," my sister's voice rings out and I'm so proud of her. And, unlike Tammy, she is quiet again afterward and observes the scene like someone who sees a living, albeit slightly sick, dinosaur for the first time.
"Right so. Just bros. And you are alone in this family. Jasmine doesn't stand up for you and Mom doesn't care what the three of us do together as long as we don't interrupt her kissing Jasmine's ass. So, are you part of this team now..." I point to myself and Rose. "Or are you alone?"
It takes a surprisingly long time. So long that I begin to suspect that Tammy is not only evil on the inside. Maybe she also has her demons that she has to fight, even if she tries to drown them in a sea of black malice. Either way, from now on, from this moment, if she allows it, she has a daddy who will take good and just care of her.
"Okay... I want to be on the team... I guess..."
Tammy Lynchwood. +2 (PS -92)
I know she wants to, or wouldn't have gotten the points. But I although now that Tammy can pivot back on this promise when her bad girl attitude comes out again.
"Then apologize to your sister." As if in a trance, Tammy turns to Rose, who, as if in a trance, looks at her sister. And I can understand the two of them. If Owen Brady were to race through this mall on a motorcycle with four raptors at his side, I would still find it more believable than what is about to happen... right... now.
"I'm sorry, Rose," Tammy murmurs, unable to look at her sister. But she looks at me. For approval.
"Not enough, Tammy. More." She takes a deep breath, raises her head and looks at her sister.
"I'm sorry that I was so mean to you. I shouldn't have said those things." Another look at me. I nod.
Tammy Lynchwood. +3 (PS -89)
Okay. Another hundred tokens. How many do I have now? 300, I think. But who cares? My little sister apologized to Rose! Well... Okay, I care. I have to think about what I'm going to buy next.
But not now! First of all...
It's Rose's turn.
"That's... That's really nice of you... Tammy..." Rose also looks at me, just like my sister.
"Oh how the tables have turned" I chuckle and spread my arms. Tammy flinches a little. "Why are you looking at me? That was a great moment!" Rose lowers her head and grins slightly while Tammy blushes. Then she squeaks sweetly while I pat her shoulder. "You did well, Tammy. I'm proud of you."
"... ... ... Thank you..."
Tammy Lynchwood. +4 (PS -85)
"Now hug it out." And, it's like a miracle, the two do. Arqwardly but they do. They hug for a moment and separate right after, not looking into each other's eyes.
I stand up and, surprisingly, Tammy and then Rose do the same. What a good day!
"Then that's it. Tammy, clear the table and Rose will give you your ice cream." My little sister gasps and wants to protest, but has no strength to do so. That was an intense first day with some good points for me. Let's see how Tammy will react to the possibility of playing on a team in the next few days. For now...
Tammy Lynchwood. +1 (PS -84)
For now, Tammy clears the trash off the table while Rose holds her ice cream cup.
"Finn, that was unbelievable," she whispers to me as we watch our little sister take the trash to the trash can.
"Believe it," I say to her, then I flinch when I feel her hand on my butt.
"What are you going to do now?" I look at her. There are people standing, sitting and walking around everywhere, but I don't care.
"I'd love to drag you to the toilet, take off your jeans and fuck you so hard that the whole mall can hear you," I grin. Rose blushes as she allows and accepts the images in her head. And then she looks at me in surprise as I move away from her. "But I respect you too much for that."
"What are you doing?" I grin over my shoulder.
"I'm trying to get that damn phone number... bro."
Message from the author: So, little Tammy is on her way. And I have to say, I had almost 50 messages in my newsfeed this morning. The support I get is always incredible. Thank you very much for that!
Okay. about this chapter. I'm really proud of it, if I may say so. In the last chapter, I couldn't get all of Tammy's points and I managed to do it all the better here. Actually, the real enemy here isn't Tammy but the cup that Rose gave Finn. It wasn't until today that I realized that I hadn't explained what happened to the number on it and I hope that with the scene between Rose and Bella I was able to give Finn (me) a nice and entertaining lesson to pay more attention to the signs of girls. :)
And even if Finn doesn't have time for it yet, you certainly do. So here are my choices for the next perks that could help Finn (you) on his way:
Sensitive Breasts 200 Tokens
This could help someone with ticklish breasts, especially since Finn won't be having sex anymore...
**** Honesty 800 Tokens
I definitely want to have this for later, as I have some secrets hidden in the characters that Finn could reveal.
Chance of Pregnancy 400 Tokens
Maybe
More Stamina 800 Tokens
Always good to have. Not only affects sex, but also the amount of time Finn has to sleep per day
Choice of sexuality (This perk is brand new) 400 Tokens
Let the user specify which gender the subject is attracted to. Only Men. Only Woman. Both.
I'm also currently working on a massive expansion of the perks, but I don't yet know if I can implement it because I basically take attributes from the subjects' paths and sell them separately so that I can apply them to other subjects.
As soon as a subject has acquired a special kink through their path, it is available for purchase in the perks for other subjects. That would certainly expand the pool massively over time.
I imagine it like this: Finn and a girl have anal sex even if the girl doesn't really like it. It has nothing to do with the girl's path and the sensitive ass perk is not activated for her! (So she doesn't particularly enjoy anal sex). From now on, the MC can buy the Anal compulsion perk for all subjects. The subject feels the need to always be anally penetrated by the user during sex and generally has a greater need to satisfy himself anally.
These perks would therefore focus on the sexual preferences and compulsions of the subjects.
What do you think about this? I think that this gives the reader (under my control) the opportunity to go even further off the path. For me, it's a good way to be able to use things that don't necessarily have anything to do with the path.
Here is the poll for the next perks:
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