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Chapter 53
by
ghostwriter53
What's next?
Evelyn submits to her master
"I...I...I..." Evelyn stammered unsure of what to say.
"There's no shame in enjoying what you saw, which you clearly did," Jake said making Evelyn blush.
"I... did, I shouldn't," she began, her voice barely more than a whisper before Jake gently and soothingly shushed her.
"You don't need to be ashamed or embarrassed. It's to your credit. You'll soon discover, Evelyn, that I deeply appreciate a beautiful, busty, submissive redhead," he said, keeping his tone soft and comforting. He could sense that the hook was all but set, all he needed to do was show her how pleasurable being a good submissive **** could be.
Evelyn let out a gasp as he unlocked her cage and opened the door. She was surprised when he didn't reach in and grab her. Instead, he made his way over to the cabinet where he had gotten the collar he had placed around McKenna’s neck. This time he selected one made of green leather.
"What's going on with me?" she wondered as she felt her pussy dampen at the sight of the collar she knew sooner or later would be around her neck. “I should not be this turned on by the prospect of becoming a…a…sex ****.” Her thoughts continued to run wild and her heart began to pound in her chest as she watched Jake hold the collar open in both hands.
“Feeling ashamed?” he asked with an almost knowing look. Without realizing it until she had done it, Evelyn slowly nodded her head. “You shouldn’t be. Being a member of The Royal Harem, my harem is one of the highest honors on this planet. Why don’t you be a good girl, crawl over here, and ask your master for your collar?
For Evelyn, what happened next was a strange out-of-body experience. Even though she willed herself not to, she saw herself begin to slowly crawl out of the cage and toward Jake. The more Evelyn willed herself to stop, to stand up, to make an effort to escape, to do anything, anything but what she was doing, the more fluid her movements became. When she stopped in front of Jake and went to her knees the strange sensation of seeing herself in the third person ended and in a soft but clear voice she barely recognized as her own she spoke, not daring to look up at him.
“Master, may I please have my collar?” she asked, barely recognizing her voice as her own.
Jake smiled as he placed the collar around Evelyn’s neck, and buckled it in place. He then hooked the D-ring at the front of the collar with his index finger and gently pulled Evelyn to her feet.
"Let me show you what good girls get, he whispered into her ear before placing his free hand on her pussy. "But first, can you tell me what this is?" he asked as he gently rubbed it.
"My...my pussy, Master."
"No, Evelyn. You're Royal Property now. I own you and everything about you. This," he paused increasing the pressure he applied to her pussy to emphasize his point. "is my pussy, my toy, and you don't play with my toy without permission, or you'll be punished. Now what is this?"
"Your pussy, your toy, Master, and I don't play with it without your permission."
"Good girl," Jake said with a prideful smile before he led her through his dungeon. He watched her closely as she eyed each piece of bondage furniture they passed, she looked at each one with a look of mixed wonder and terror. "Here we are," he said as he stopped in front of an oak table that was held up by a post with four supports at its base for stability so it leaned backward at a forty-five-degree angle. At the top of the table was a set of leather cuffs a short length of chain went from each cuff to a central ring that hung from another chain that went over the top of the table, also near the top of the table on the right-hand side, was a small hand crank. Near the foot of the table was a second pair of cuffs, one attached to each side of the table.
“I submitted! What are you going to do to me?!” Evelyn said in a sudden panic.
Jake switched hands on her arm, and then grabbed her hair and pulled back hard. “You wear a collar you will address me as ‘Master’ or whatever name I tell you to at all times. Is that clear?”
“Y-yes, Ma-Master! Please don’t hurt me, Master, please!”
“I’m going to allow you that one mistake, but, fuck up again and you’ll be punished.”
“Thank you, Master,” Evelyn replied, tears of a mistress of pain from having her hair pulled so roughly, and relief wetting her eyes. Jake turned her around gently guided her back against the table and placed her wrists and ankles in the leather cuffs. He then turned the crank making Evelyn’s heart pound harder and harder with each sound of the metallic clank the crank made. “Oh, God! He’s going to stretch me out!” she thought, thoughts of unbearable **** racing through her mind a million miles a second. To her surprise she gently slid up the table, the chains of the ankle cuffs sliding in small groves in the side of the table until her feet were well off of the floor
“This is a reward for being such a good girl and submitting to me without any argument,” he said before spitting on his index and middle fingers and then using his other hand to spread the spit out. Once he was happy with the state of his fingers he slowly slid them into Evelyn’s wet pussy and began to slowly pump them. He leaned forward until his mouth was near her right nipple and began to softly lick around the sensitive nub before wrapping his lips around it and softly sucking on it.
“Oh, fuck, Master it feels so good,” Evelyn moaned as she began to sway and buck her hips slowly, in perfect rhythm with the timing of Jake's gentle thrusting. Even through the fog of pleasure, she was amazed that he hit every sensitive spot inside of her like he was on a guided tour.
“I’m glad you’re enjoying it, Evelyn. As I said, this is a reward so cum as much as you want until I stop,” he whispered in her ear as he slightly increased his pace. “I think I’ll allow you to think of another name you might want to address me as. So many girls call me ‘Master’ now. If you come up with something I approve of that will be my name just for you,” He continued before going back to sucking on her nipple.
It wasn’t long before Evelyn had her first orgasm as a collared ****, soaking her master’s fingers in her juices. He then began to suck on her nipple harder and pump his fingers in and out of her faster and faster, the air of the dungeon filling with a wet squelching sound. He finger fucked her to three more orgasms before he pulled his fingers out of her and held them up to her mouth.
“That was incredible!” Evelyn thought as she lifted her head and began sucking his fingers clean without even thinking about it.
“That’s a good girl,” Jake said affectionately as he watched the beautiful redhead suck her juices from his fingers. “Have you come up with something you’d like to call me?” he asked when she let his fingers slip from her mouth and she lay her head against the table.
“No, Master, I-I’m sorry.”
“You’re of Irish descent, correct.”
“Yes, Master,” she answered eyeing him suspiciously.
“How about something in Gaelic?” Her mind began to spin as she remembered all of her Ancient Language Lessons.
Evelyn's mind raced as she tried to recall her Gaelic lessons from long ago. Suddenly, a word came to her. "Tiarna," she said softly, looking up at Jake with a hint of hope in her eyes. "It means 'Lord' in Irish Gaelic. Would that please you, Tiarna?"
A slow smile spread across Jake's face. "Tiarna," he repeated, savoring the sound of it on his tongue. "Yes, I quite like that, Evelyn. From now on, you shall address me as Tiarna. I am your Lord and you are my obedient ****."
"Yes, Tiarna," Evelyn breathed, feeling a shiver of pleasure course through her at his words of possession. Something she would never have imagined enjoying until he had caught her masturbating to the sight of him forcing McKenna into submission.
Jake reached out and gently caressed her cheek. "You've pleased me greatly today, my sweet Irish rose. But, giving you your reward has left your Tiarna’s cock rock hard. What do you propose you do about that?”
Evelyn’s mind jumped to an option that she hoped would prove to Jake, to her Tiarna, how much she had quickly grown to want to obey and please him now that her long-hidden and dormant submissive side had fully awoken. She would willingly give him the one thing she had never let any of the men she had ever been with ever have. “Tiarna, may I suggest using my…,” she paused as a wave of fear came over her. She took a deep breath to calm herself. She knew it would happen sooner or later and part of her wanted it so badly. “my virgin asshole for your pleasure?”
A smile curled Jake’s lips. He leaned in and passionately kissed Evelyn as he released her wrists. She whimpered with need as he pulled away. “A wonderful idea,” he said before kneeling and releasing her ankles. The leather squeaked as Evelyn slowly slid down the table and her bare feet came to a stop against the cold stone floor. Jake stood, took her by the hand, and led her over to a padded sawhorse. Without being ordered to do so, Evelyn bent over it, placing her wrists and ankles near the leather cuffs built into the legs of the sawhorse. “You're being such a good girl, my beautiful Irish rose,” he said as he ran his hand down her back as if petting a cherished pet. He then quickly locked her wrists and ankles in the cuffs before retrieving a tube of lube. He took out his hard cock and coated it in lube before he used his free hand to spread Evelyn’s cheeks apart and let some lube run down between them. “For that, I’ll let you in on one of my key plans for you, McKenna, and Sydney over there,” he said as he wiped the excess lube off of his hand. “Would you like that?”
“Yes, please, Tiarna,” she asked her heart now racing with anticipation.
“The three of you will each be given an injection,” he said as he began rubbing the head of his cock along her ass crack, watching her puckered hole tighten and quiver as the head grazed against it. “The injection will rewrite your genetics to be Staphosian. As a result, you will keep looking young and beautiful well into older age. Another thing it will do, Evelyn, is that when I breed you and I will breed you, your pregnancy will only last a couple of weeks and your body will return to normal afterward. What do you think of that?”
Evelyn's mind reeled at the implications of what her Tiarna had just revealed. The idea of being transformed, of having her very genes rewritten to make her an even more perfect **** for his pleasure, sent a thrill of fear and excitement coursing through her. The notion of being bred by him, of carrying his child inside her womb, even for a short time, made her ache with a deep, primal need she had never known before.
"Oh Tiarna," she breathed, her voice trembling. "That sounds...incredible. To be yours so completely, body and soul. To bear your offspring. I...I want that more than anything."
"I had a feeling you would, my obedient little rose," Jake purred, continuing to tease her puckered hole with the tip of his cock. "You were made to be bred, to be used for my carnal desires. And very soon, that is exactly what will happen." With that, he began to press forward, the head of his shaft slowly stretching open her virgin ring. Evelyn gasped at the intense pressure, her body instinctively clenching against the intrusion. “Don’t clench, push out like you're taking a shit,” he advised, inching deeper with each gentle thrust until finally, with a low groan, he hilted himself inside her impossibly tight heat.
"Tiarna!" Evelyn cried out, tears springing to her eyes at the burning fullness. It was a pain unlike any she had experienced, and yet beneath it pulsed an undercurrent of dark pleasure that left her breathless and wanting. She followed his advice pushing against his cock, forcing her virgin hole to stretch more around the invader.
"That's it, take your Tiarna's cock," Jake growled, gripping her hips tightly as he began to move. Each drag of his thick shaft against her sensitive walls sent sparks of sensation radiating through her core. "You're mine now, Evelyn. Mine to fuck, mine to breed, mine to use as I please."
"Yes, yours!" she sobbed, lost to the overwhelming tide of submission and ecstasy. Her untouched ass gripped him like a vice as he pounded into her, claiming her most forbidden passage, her deepest, darkest place, as his own. "Please Tiarna, fill me! Breed your ****!"
Jake's thrusts grew harder, more erratic, as his climax approached. "Get ready, my rose," he panted. "Here comes your reward for being such a good girl."
With a final, brutal plunge, he buried himself to the hilt and let out a roar of release. Evelyn screamed as she felt his seed pumping into her bowels in hot, potent spurts, her body milking him for every last drop. The depravity, the utter submission of the act, combined with the knowledge that soon his cum would be filling her fertile womb instead, pushed her over the edge into a mind-shattering orgasm of her own.
“Oh, God, Tiarna,” she said breathlessly as he pulled his cock out of her and his cum began to slowly leak out of her asshole.
“I’m impressed, my little rose. Not many girls cum the first time their assholes are used.
Evelyn gasped, suddenly remembering that the orgasms she had been given on the table were a reward. “If I belong to Tiarna…” she thought. Fresh tears welled in her eyes, tears of shame, but to her fading surprise at the depths of her knew found submission, the shame was not from cumming from getting her ass fucked, but from cumming without her tiarna’s permission. “Tiarna, I am so sorry for cumming without your permission,” she sobbed.
“You did, and I am going to have to punish you for it,” he said placing his left hand on her back and his right hand against her ass. “But, since you’ve been so good, I’ll just use my hand this time and not a whip, cane, strap, or my favorite a paddle. Are you ready for your first spanking, Evelyn?”
“Yes, Tiarna,” she said lifting her head to accept her punishment with the pride she imagined a member of The Royal Harem to have. She let out a nervous breath as Jake began to rub his hand in a circle over her ass cheeks.
“Then I want you to tell me what you did wrong, and ask for your spanking.”
Evelyn took a deep, nervous breath, steadying herself for what was to come. The shame of her transgression burned through her, but beneath it simmered a dark thrill at the prospect of being punished by her Tiarna. She had never before imagined that pain could be pleasurable, but everything had changed the moment he had collared her. Now, the idea of submitting to his discipline, of atoning for her disobedience, filled her with a twisted sense of rightness.
"Tiarna," she began, her voice wavering slightly with a mixture of fear and anticipation. "I came without your permission. I let my body's base urges override my duty to obey you. I humbly ask that you punish me for my failure, so that I may learn to be a better **** for you."
Jake's hand stilled on her flesh. "Very good, Evelyn," he purred. "I am pleased by your honesty. In the future, a simple ‘I came without permission’ will do. You will receive ten swats. I want you to count each one out loud and thank me after each one."
"Yes, Tiarna," she whispered, bracing herself.
The first blow landed with a sharp crack, sending a jolt of pain radiating across her skin. "One! Thank you, Tiarna!" she gasped out.
Again and again, his palm struck her upturned bottom, alternating sides and each swat harder than the last. Evelyn counted dutifully, tears streaming down her face as the fiery sting built to an almost unbearable crescendo. And yet, to her shock, she felt her pussy growing wet once more, her clit throbbing in time to the rhythm of her punishment.
"Ten! Thank you, Tiarna!" she sobbed out at last, her body shuddering with the **** of her catharsis.
"You took your punishment well, my rose," Jake said, gently caressing her inflamed cheeks. "I trust you will remember this lesson in obedience."
"Yes, Tiarna, I will," Evelyn said fervently. "I promise to be a good **** for you.”
"I know you will," he said with a note of pride. "Now, I'm going to release you. I want you to kneel before me."
Jake unbuckled the cuffs and helped Evelyn slide off the sawhorse to the floor. On trembling legs, she positioned herself on her knees in front of him, head bowed in deference. He reached out and lifted her chin with his finger, forcing her to meet his intense gaze.
"You have pleased me greatly today, Evelyn. In such a short time, you have embraced your true nature as my submissive ****. I have very high hopes for you."
He leaned down and captured her lips in a searing kiss, plundering her mouth with his tongue as if to lay claim to her very soul. Evelyn melted into the kiss, surrendering herself fully to him.
“Tell me, my budding rose,” he said after breaking the kiss, and before kissing her forehead. “Would you like to earn your dildo gag?”
“My dildo gag, Tiarna?” Evelyn asked in confusion.
“A badge of honor in my harem. McKenna hasn’t earned it yet, but she will. It is a symbol to show that you are willing to take my cock in your mouth to clean it after I fuck you or one of your fellow harem members.” Evelyn’s eyes darted to Jake’s cock. She gasped in surprise that it was hard again, or perhaps was still hard.
“Tiarna, how can you… I mean you just made McKenna suck your cock and then you fucked my ass,” she said in amazement.
“Your Tiarna can fuck you all day and all night, pump you full of cum in all of your holes, and still have plenty of cum to spare. Now do you want your dildo gag now, or later?” he asked his voice taking a harder sterner edge. A tone that sent a wave of desire through Evelyn’s body.
“Now, please, Tiarana,” she replied.
“Then clean my cock of my cum and whatever was in your ass, and make me cum.”
“Y-yes, Tiarna,” she said before leaning forward. She crinkled her nose at the smell of her bowls and she nearly gagged at the taste of her asshole on the head of his cock.
“You’ll get used to it in time, Evelyn, now get to it.”
Evelyn took a deep breath to steady herself before parting her lips and taking Jake's soiled cock into her mouth. The pungent taste of her ass nearly made her gag again, but she fought down the reflex, determined to please her Tiarna. Slowly, she began to bob her head, running her tongue along his shaft to clean away his cum and her filth.
As she worked, she felt a strange sense of pride blossoming within her. This was the ultimate act of submission, of devotion to her tiarna. To willingly debase herself in this way, to take his cock fresh from her most intimate passage, was a powerful symbol of her commitment to obey him in all things.
Jake groaned above her, tangling his fingers in her fiery tresses. "That's it, my rose," he praised. "Clean your tiarna's cock. Show me what an obedient **** you are."
Emboldened by his words, Evelyn increased her efforts. She hollowed her cheeks and sucked him deep, relaxing her throat to take him further. Tears streamed from her eyes as she fought her gag reflex, but she persevered, driven by an all-consuming need to prove her worth.
"Fuck, Evelyn," Jake growled, thrusting shallowly into her mouth. "You're a natural at this. I knew from the moment I saw you that you were meant to serve me. Meant to be mine."
Pride surged through her at his acclaim, spurring her onwards. She reached up to cup his heavy balls, massaging them gently as she worshipped his cock with her lips and tongue. The salty-bitter taste of his pre-cum mixed with the musk of her ass, creating a potent cocktail of submission that made her head spin and her pussy clench with renewed desire.
"I'm close," Jake warned through gritted teeth, his grip tightening in her hair. "Get ready to swallow your reward."
Evelyn moaned around him in acknowledgment, bracing herself. With a final, brutal thrust, he buried himself in her throat and unleashed a flood of hot seed directly into her stomach. She gulped it down greedily, not spilling a single precious drop, savoring the taste of his essence as it coated her tongue.
Finally, he withdrew, leaving her gasping and spluttering. A final rope of cum landed across her face like a badge of honor, marking her as his. Evelyn remained on her knees, head bowed, awaiting his approval as she used her fingers to wipe the cum off of her face, then greedily suck it from them.
"Well done, my rose," Jake said, caressing her cheek. "You have more than earned your dildo gag. Rise and come with me," he said as he hooked the D-ring at the front of her collar with his index finger.
On shaky legs, Evelyn stood and followed him to a nearby cabinet. In it was an assortment of gags and harnesses, but he selected a specific one - a thick, realistic dildo attached to a sturdy leather strap. He held it up for her inspection.
"This is yours. Now open up.”
Evelyn immediately opened her mouth and fought her gag reflex again as Jake inserted the gag into her mouth, and then buckled it tightly in place. The feeling of being thoroughly filled and silenced made her squirm with desire. Jake then reached into the cabinet and pulled out a chain-link leash with a looped handle made of black leather and clipped it to her collar.
“Guards,” he said as he turned his attention to the two women standing by the door to the dungeon. “Take my new **** to The Harem Tower/”
“Yes, Your Majesty,” they said before coming over to Evelyn. One of them took her leash and gave a gentle tug. Evelyn began walking behind the guard head held high with pride, not caring that she would be led through her now home completely naked, collared, and on a leash like an animal.
Jake put away his cock before walking over to Sydney’s small cage. The tall blonde cowered in the cage, trying desperately to put as much distance between him and herself as she could. “Before I deal with her,” he said pointing to the blue-skinned alien who was still standing, bent over her wrists cuffed to the spreader bar that kept her legs spread wide apart, and her mouth **** over a metal phallic-shaped pole. “I’m going to deal with you. What’s it going to be? Do I have to **** you to submit like McKenna, or are you going to be a good girl like Evelyn?”
Sydney looked at Jake with a look of hatred, even as she cowered in her cage. This man had turned Katelyn into a ****, she had witnessed him torturing McKenna into submission, and she had even watched Evelyn give herself to his will, without a fight. She knew no matter what happened, eventually, she would be a ****. But, she didn’t know if she could just let herself become one without trying to resist, no matter how futile it was in the long run to do so.
“Well?” he asked impatiently as he kicked her cage.
Will Sydney be made to submit, or will she willingly embrace her new life as a member of Jake's harem? Answer in comments.
A) Sydney submits to Jake, knowing it is inevitable.
B) Jake forces Sydney into submission
Will Sydney Submit willingly, or will Jake her to submit?
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