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Lauren grinned as she eyed her new body, running her hands over her large DD's and tight firm ass before posting the chapter. Fully enjoying her new body, Lauren went to add another chapter.

"Ooh, maybe I can have Vanessa completely naked in public with my old body!" She thought to herself aloud, clicking the "Add A New Chapter?" option again.

However, just as she did, she was surprised to see that she had received four new notifications. Curious, Lauren clicked on the notification icon and saw that they were all from users who followed and/or contributed to the story, all of them commenting on her new chapter. Clicking on the chapter again, she opened up the comments to see what they said.

"Uh, you are aware of what this story is about, right?"

"This chapter is just changing Lauren's appearance to something else entirely. And where's the set up?! How does she get humiliated like this?!"

"To be fair, we can still embarrass Lauren even if she doesn't have the body Splotch described. However, I'm not sure this person is planning on doing that..."

"I admit, I was interested in where this branch was going before this new direction." A user named Mr. E commented, "I mean, I don't want to be rude, but this doesn't even look like an actual chapter. Just you changing Lauren's appearance."

Lauren growled in annoyance. These freaks were actually expecting her to write a chapter that would humiliate herself, causing it to happen to her in the real world?! And they were planning on humiliating her as well?!

"Oh, I don't think so!" Lauren spat as she hit comment and began to type. As she typed, she said aloud, "If any of you dorky, creepy freaks even think about adding any chapters to my mine, I'll report you so fast your head will spin! Especially you, Mr. E! I've read your chapters on this story, and never in my life had I ever seen such a talentless and brainless hack of a writer! Who told you that you could write? Because they were lying to your face! Seriously, you're almost as bad as the idiot who wrote this story to begin with!"

With a smug smile, Lauren hit "Add Comment" before getting back to work. For the next few minutes, Lauren thought about what to write. She knew that Vanessa was going to be the new target of the embarrassment, but then she thought about Vanessa's cute boyfriend as an idea popped into her head. She hit the "Add A New Chapter?" button again...

And was surprised to see another notification. Groaning, Lauren clicked on the notifications again. This time, however, she was greeted by a message in her inbox from the author of Lauren's Little Secret.