What's next?
Tension
Keep your main characters seperated for as long as possible. Don't get straight to the fucking. Keep throwing obstacles in the way of love and conquest.
Doing so will keep the reader interested. Your story will become a page turner because the reader will want to find out what happens next.
Don't rush to the finish. You can have plenty of fun along the way.
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