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Chapter 4
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Blackhand
Polls
Poll 1: Include Variable Indicator?
As stated in my explainer on how variable text works in this game, when there is text in bold, it will be an indication that the specific segment is specific to the prior choices you made.
Currently, for the sake of reading flow, I have left it with just that. However, one concern I have is that someone might not know *what* the variable in question is, and might wish for some indication what's effecting it.
The current method looks something like.
You’d always thought Kaori was incredible. Her passion was what made her such a target for bullies, but it also gave her an enviable, vibrant energy. You wished you felt half as much excitement about anything as Kaori seemed to find in the smallest of things. It made her special, precious even.
vs.
Didn’t they realize that they had an angel in their midst? She was a soft, sweet girl who just wanted to be appreciated for who she was. The sort of girl who wouldn’t hurt a fly. She was something precious, in need of protection. Seeing her there even made you feel guilty. How come you weren’t doing more to help this truly special person?
The alternative method would look like this on the page.
(Normal) You’d always thought Kaori was incredible. Her passion was what made her such a target for bullies, but it also gave her an enviable, vibrant energy. You wished you felt half as much excitement about anything as Kaori seemed to find in the smallest of things. It made her special, precious even.
vs.
(Romantic) Didn’t they realize that they had an angel in their midst? She was a soft, sweet girl who just wanted to be appreciated for who she was. The sort of girl who wouldn’t hurt a fly. She was something precious, in need of protection. Seeing her there even made you feel guilty. How come you weren’t doing more to help this truly special person?
On the comments page, tell me which version you'd rather I use to format the text. Start your response with "Indicator" or "No Indicator", then you can explain your reasoning.
Which version do you prefer?
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Your Wife, His Toy
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A detailed Choose-Your-Own-Adventure. There's a man whose put your wife on his leash. Did you allow him to dominate her? Or did he her? Are you standing up for yourself? Or are you a cuck who loves it?
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