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Chapter 73 by LordScissorsXIII
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Panic in the Pit
Plastic balls were tossed and flung as Akane whirled around in a panic trying to find where her two partners had disappeared to. People don't just disappear into thin air thought the flustered girl. Pausing for a second she realized just how ridiculous that thought was after the past week. Okay, so they kind of do disappear into thin air but why did they disappear and not me? Some new trap of the maze? Or did I mess up somehow? Did they find some way out of the maze and leave me behind? Akane began to bite her nails as her thoughts spiraled further into insecurity. Candy wouldn't do that, right? She was so nice to me earlier. But I don't really know her. Remember the cheerleader incident. People being nice doesn't actually mean they like you. But Candy doesn't really gain anything from pretending to be nice here, does she? Your just being negative again. Think positively darn it. Pausing to take a deep breath Akane managed to stop shaking. Yeah, they didn't abandon you. There must be a perfectly normal and reasonable reason they are gone. Maybe there was, uh, oh I know. The floor of this pit is full of traps. I'll bet there was some kind of teleporter that only they stepped on and I missed. Yeah, that makes sense. I'll just step on the same spot they did and be taken straight to them.
Steeling herself Akane raised her leg and began to take a step to where Candy and Gwen had disappeared “What are you doing?”
“EEEEEEK” Akane screamed falling backwards and disappearing under the sea of balls. Timidly she slowly poked her head above the wall of plastic to see who had shocked her. Her eyes widened and the color began to drain from her face as she saw the most recent source of her torment in front of her. Lounging back on an inner tube floating on the plastic balls as if it was a pool of water was Sally taking a sip of a drink through a straw looking at her quizzically.
Finishing her sip Sally floated there for a few seconds staring back at the terrified girl. Akane thought she felt her heart stop beating as Sally's quizzical expression morphed into one of frustration. “Well? I asked you a question” Sally barked at the girl. Instead of speaking as Sally expected Akane just flinched and sank further into the sea of plastic until her eyes were barely visible.
Akane's could do nothing but stare as she internally panicked. Why is she here? Did I do something wrong? Oh no, she looks mad. I knew it. I'm in trouble. Akane gasped as she realized what she must have done wrong. Oh no, I am late. I knew it. Now I'm going to lose so many points and get punished. But it's not my fault. We were stuck in the maze. Unless we were supposed to escape sooner but I dragged the others down so much that it's my fault that we didn't make it. I knew I was being a burden. Does she look madder? Crap, I'm making it worse by just sitting here. Say something. Anything.
Sally was taken aback as Akane suddenly shot to her feet and bowed at so deep an angle that her head was back under the surface of the pit. “I'm so sorry for being late. I'll accept whatever punishment you have for me so please don't yell at me” the terrified girl pleaded.
Sally stared wide eyed as the woman before her trembled in fear as she maintained her impressive bowing posture. “Pfft. Hahahahahahaha.”
What? Akane dared to look up at Sally and to her **** surprise the bikini clad girl was clutching her stomach doubled over in laughter. Did I do something funny? Akane stood up straight as she stared at Sally. Sally was kicking her legs and laughing so hard it looked like it hurt.
“Hahahahahaha whoa whoa whoa!” Sally's laughter cut short as her laughing fit caused her to flip her tube and she fell into the ball pit. Akane hesitated for a second unsure of what to do when Sally's torso shot out of the pit as she righted herself into a standing position. Sally's face was burning red in embarrassment and she narrowed her eyes at Akane. “That didn't happen, agreed” Sally said with a threatening hint to her tone. Akane nodded her head so fast and hard she looked like a giant bobble head. “Good.” And with that Sally's usual large smile returned to her face. “Now I'd ask what you were doing again but I think I've got the idea now. First of all your not in trouble or late to your date.”
_I'm not! _Akane's shoulders slumped as her body visibly relaxed at the news.
“Which brings me to my next question. What are you still doing here? You made it to the end of the maze so you should be rushing off to your date with Bruce. You may not be late now but you still could be.”
“I-I was loo-looking for Candy and Gw-Gwen” Akane stuttered still terrified of the powerful psycho before her.
“Looking for? Ugh. What do you mean your looking for them? It should be obvious what happened to them. They fell down the pit that I'm standing on. The one that you almost stepped into yourself if I hadn't stopped you.”
They fell down one of the pits? But that doesn't make sense. “If th-they fell down a p-pit then why didn't I? We're supposed to be c-c-connected.”
“Duh, that's because you aren't connected anymore. You haven't been for like 10 minutes.” As Akane stared back at her blankly Sally began to rub her head as if nursing a headache. “Your date is at 6 so I set things up so that you would disconnect from the group at 5 supposedly giving you plenty of time to make it to your date. But two things have gone wrong it seems. Firstly you detached about 10 minutes ago but were clinging to that bimbo so hard you never even noticed. Secondly I can't believe y'all are even still in this maze. It shouldn't be that hard. Personally I blame the previously mentioned bimbo.”
Suddenly Sally had to lean back as suddenly Akane was in her face looking extremely worried. “It's not Candy's fault so please don't punish her. If it's anyone's fault it must be mine for dragging them down. If you have to punish anyone please punish me.” As she moved in on Sally in her desperation Akane didn't realize her mistake until she no longer felt floor beneath her feet. But instead of the fall she expected she felt Sally quickly grabbing her waist and holding her up like she weighed nothing.
Sally moved her back onto the floor once again looking amused at the nervous girl's antics. “I told you no one is in trouble yet. Now if you had fallen down that pit you probably would have been as I would have considered that your fault when you were late to your date. Speaking of...” Sally paused as she made a big show of checking the nonexistent watch on her wrist “..you're still in danger of being late. At this point you have about 45 minutes to make your way to the master suite if you want to be on time.”
Akane blinked as Sally's statement sank in. The girl almost tripped as she quickly began to wade her way to the edge of the pit. Sally chuckled to herself as she watched the girl run from the room as fast as her beautiful legs could take her.
Nikki took a bite of her hot dog as she rested on the bench that she had dragged herself and the now sleeping woman attached to her to. Thankfully it was right next to a hot dog vendor because she was starved. Hot dogs have no business tasting this good. If there is one good thing I would have to say about this stupid place its that the food is heavenly. As she took another bite of her hot dog her eyes landed on the sight of their earlier torment. Sally has to have a twisted mind to devise such a ride. Seriously, I barely had the strength to drag us to this bench. Of course that's might be because I literally had to drag sleeping beauty here. I guess her transformation made that sexual **** ride effect her worse because she passed out almost as soon as it was over. The puddle under her seat when I pulled her up certainly implied she enjoyed the ride at least. Nikki ignored the juices staining her own clothes as she took another bite. I just hope she wakes up soon because I am not dragging her all the way back to the hotel.
Spotting a bunch of maps of the park on the vendor's cart Nikki grabbed one to pass the time with. _Let's see what other messed up rides make up this park. _Scanning the map Nikki began to almost feel glad that Sally had chosen to trap them on this coaster. What is wrong with that girl. A coaster with built in dildos on the seats? A tunnel of love that forces the riders to make out? What's next? Is the log flume going to be shaped like a penis? Oh I guess not. According to this the log flume is actually normal. I guess that would be going too far even for Sally.
Nikki was broken out of her thoughts by Lydia stirring from her slumber. “Hey there sleepy head. I'm guessing you enjoyed the ride” Nikki teased with a chuckle.
Lydia half opened her eyes as she slowly turned towards Nikki. “Oh yes, it felt amazing” Lydia said in a sleepy tone. Nikki smirked at that response as Lydia stretched the best she could with her hands cuffed behind her. Lydia then froze and her eyes flew wide as she registered what she had just said. “I-I mean it was awful. One of the worst experiences of my life.” Nikki just burst out laughing as Lydia began to turn red. “I mean it. I hated every second of that ride.”
“Sure, I believe you” Nikki said in a tone that conveyed she did not believe her at all. “Let's get you a hot dog so we can get out of this stupid park.” Lydia continued to spout off excuses while Nikki ordered her a hot dog. Upon receiving it she turned to Lydia and decided to shut her up by sticking the delicious dog into her mouth. Stunned for a second Lydia slowly began to chew while Nikki broke out into laughter once more.
Jenny hummed happily as she took a bite of the cookie in her hand. As she chewed she nuzzled her head against the brown fox like creature she cuddled in her lap. I don't think I've seen that girl look so content once over the last week Jessica thought watching her. Not that I'm much better. I think we both almost had heart attacks when Gatomon brought out a set of an Eevee and all of it's evolutions.
“Eevee” the adorable little fox cried out happily enjoying the attention it was getting. The very sound seemed to cause both girls to melt a little. They were both sitting at a table with with cups of coffee and various snacks littering the table. Jenny had won the fight to hold the Eevee but Jessica was just as content with the warm Flareon curled up in her lap. Napping contentedly on the table was a Sylveon and an Espeon. Jessica kept having to fight off the Vaporeon as it kept trying to drink from her coffee cup. The Jolteon of the group stood proudly as it rode around on the back of the bear cub from earlier while Umbreon perched high up on a shelf overlooking the cafe. Lastly Jessica found herself having a hard time tearing her eyes away as the Leafeon and Glaceon playfully wrestled in the middle of the cafe. This moment alone almost makes the transformation and other awful events of this week worth it Jessica thought as the Vaporeon gave up on her drink and began to gently lick her face.
Daisy was still passing the time by reading her rule book when Sylvia's head shot up from out of her nachos. Daisy jumped at the sudden movement and turned to look at her friend who was swaying on her seat.
“Hel -hic- lo Daisy. How are you to -hic- today?” Sylvia asked looking almost at Daisy.
“Sylvia? Are you alright?” Daisy asked not expecting this kind of behavior when Sylvia woke up. I expected moaning in pain and complaining about everything being too loud. Not for her to still be acting drunk.
“I'm fine” Sylvia declared swaying in a way that absolutely did not imply being fine. “WAIT” Sylvia suddenly yelled as if Daisy was suddenly far away. “I'm not -hic- fine.” Narrowing her eyes she leaned in closer to Daisy until their noses were touching. “You **** me so I'm not speaking to you.” she scream whispered. She then broke out into a fit of giggles as she fell off her seat onto Daisy.
Barely managing to hold onto her seat Daisy stared wide eyed at the normally composed Sylvia. “Your still drunk” Daisy realized. “You've been sleeping for hours. How are you still drUNK?” Daisy's question turning into a scream as Sylvia pulled her off of her seat onto the floor with her. As Sylvia broke out into another fit of giggles on the floor Daisy came to a realization about her situation. I'm stuck to a drunk Sylvia. This is not good.
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