Married At Midnight (Modern Fantasy)

"This one? Ah, yes, such a pity. It was a good story, showed a lot of promise, but he let himself get bogged down in minutia and trying to play with the variables system. Not to very much purpose either as he never branched the story after the first chapter. Now it's basically abandoned. Similar tale in every instance, he starts strong, then... He loses focus and abandons the project. If he just had more staying power he might be a decent author, but unfortunately he is without the strength of will to persevere when the writing becomes a challenge," Paige sneers.

"What's it about? He intended it to be a modern-fantasy/harem-anime, thing, but as it stands its more an over-sexualized tale of a man who's inherited a farm taking advantage of some **** college girls that crash into his fence..."

Married At Midnight