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Chapter 10
by
Javo
Who uses their powers first?
Jamie
"F-Freeze..." the words were barely audible as they left Jamie's bruised chest, but it was enough to activate his powers in the nick of time. In a second, Rogue's body froze solid, her face trapped in a moment of snarling anger. Only problem was, she had been launching herself at him when he used his powers, at all that motion didn't just magically stop now that she could no longer move. That meant that her now still body came crashing into Jamie at full speed, pinning Jamie beneath her.
"Ahhh!" He screamed loud enough for the sound to be heard clearly from any room in the house as he felt another hard blow to himself. The pain was even more intense than before, and the crushing of Rogue's larger frame did not help alleviate that. It was almost enough to make the young man believe in the concept of Karma or divine retribution.
Jostled by the loud shriek, Mystique began rising up, clutching the side of her head in pain. "Ugh... what... happened?"
"M-Mystique..." A small croak came from behind her. "Mystique...."
She turned around, finding the scene of Rogue's frozen body pinning Jamie to the ground. "M-Mystique. Lift."
Responding instantly, Mystique rushed over, lifting the statue like woman off of her master and throwing her to the side, helping him up. "Are you alright, master?"
The second Rogue was lifted from him, Jamie took a sharp breath, eyes widening slightly. "God damn! I thought I was gonna **** to **** under there." He slowly sat up, ignoring the pain shooting through his whole body. He took deep, careful breaths as he stared over at Rogue's disgarded body, anger building beneath his gaze. "F-Fucking southern bitch... d-damn near killed me. I'll get you back for that..." He turned up to look at Mystique. "And what help you were! She had you out cold before I even knew what was going on."
"I apologize master. I promise such slip up will not happen in the future."
Jamie, not satisfied with his ****'s apology, decided she needed to be taught a lesson. "Resume time for conscious part of the brain. Then, Mystique. Cum. 10x over with each orgasm increasing in ****."
Mystique's eyes blinked slighly as awareness returned to her once more. "H-Huh? Where-" All of a sudden, she felt a powerful orgasm crash over her, sending her to her knees. "Couhg!" she trained to shakily stand up, but just then a second orgasm hit her, this one even more powerful than the previous. "Ahhhh!" She fell back down to the floor, curling up into the fetal position as yet another, even more powerful orgasm consumed her. And then another, and then another, and then another. They just came mercilessly back to back, each one hitting harder than the last. It was maddening. Mystique felt like she was about to lose her mind. "W-What is happening... to... meaugh?!" she asked breathlessly, her words sluring from excess pleasure. "p-please.. make it stopugugh!"
As Mystique laid on the floor feeling the full extent of a punishment she didn't even understand why she was receiving, Jamie staggered to his feet, moving to stand over the still frozen Rogue. "You know at first, I was actually considering being nice to you. Treating you more kindly than my other cum buckets." He said darkly, his tone carrying a hint of spite. "But after that move you tried to pull, screw it! Like mothers like daughter I guess." The sound of Mysique writhing behind him filled the room as Jamie thought of all the humiliation he would put this busty bimbo through.
"Resume."
"Ah'm gonna make you pay for this! Ya sadistic little fr- huh?" Rouge felt extremely turned around as she found herself laying on the floor instead of flying towards a weakened Jamie. "D-Damn it! Did that kid manage to get his power off?"
"Very good observation." a voice suddenly called out. "I can see your penchant for **** isn't the only thing you inherited from your mothers."
Rogue craned her neck, trying to see who the hell was speaking. Standing there in front of her, an arrogant smile plastered on his face, with Destiny and Mystique stood to either side of him, fully nude, expressions blank and arms folded neatly in front of them, was Jamie. "Morning Sugah," he put extra emphasis on the word. "You have a nice nap? Well, I guess to you it wasn't really a nap. More like a sudden blink."
"Ah'm gonna crush ya head ya little brat!" Rogue screamed, nearly foaming at the mouth.
"You are more than welcome to try." Jamie responded sarcastically, not a hint of fear in his voice.
Rogue made the dive yet again, aiming straight for his face! Until she realised, she hadn't moved an inch. Or, more accurately, her arms and legs haven't moved an inch. The rest of her body was fine. She turned to her side, looking at the limbs sprawled out on either side. They weren't covered in anything. Weren't restrained in any way, but they felt like solid blocks of adamantium. No matter how hard she tried, they just wouldn't budge. It was while trying to move that she finally realised she was stripped nude, her toned, muscular body on full display. Panting heavily, she turned to look back at Jamie. "What did you do to me? Why can't ah move?"
"See, you were partially correct about my mutant ability." Jamie began as he walked closer to her. "My ability isn't mind control; it IS time control. But not in the traditional sense. I can't just say 'stop' and have the entire world grind to a halt. But I can freeze individual people. And more specifically, individual parts on those people." he knelt down, beginning to knead her breasts in his hands as he continued explaining. "That's what's happening right now. I've left your arms and legs frozen stiff while letting the rest of you be unfrozen. That thing with your moms?" he turned over his shoulders, pointing at the two slaves behind him. "That's my own personal job."
Rogue flushed under Jamie's touch, gritting her teeth and thrashing her head to the side, **** to lift her arm and give him a good sock in the face he so clearly needed. When it became evident that wasn't happening, that his explanation wasn't a total fib, Rogue let out a frustrated groan. "Y-Ya cowered. Taking advantage of a lady while she can't even fight back. Didn't your mother ever teach you any manners?"
At her question, Jamie paused. Letting go off her breasts, he stood up, still silent for a few seconds before stomping his foot down on her exposed pussy. "MMFMH!" A mix of pain and pleasure circulating her body.
"Shut the hell up with that moral crap! You were the one who nearly caved my chest in!" As he spoke, he ground his foot against Rogue's entrance, earning several **** moans and whimpers from her.
"A-Ahh! W-Wait... stop..." she begged quietly, her voice tinged with arousal.
Jamie didn't listen to her pleas, pressing his foot down as he continued speaking. "Your moms attacked me first, you know? I was just minding my own business both times, when suddenly they jumped at me and **** me to use my powers. I'm the victim in this situation. An innocent bystander who was attacked by two supervillains. Shouldn't you, as a hero, be on my side and protect me?"
Rogue could barely follow Jamie's self-important monologue, the pleasure bubbling up inside her from his foot continued rubbing taking up most of her attention. Each stomp and rub only brought her closer and closer to her peak. The spring inside her ready to snap at any moment. "Ah... ah... p-please..." with one final rub, it finally exploded, Rogue's back bucking off the floor as she shot out a stream of fluids that covered Jamie's foot.
"Aww fuck! Gross!" Jamie screeched, having been cut off in the middle of his sentence. "You disgusting masochist bitch! Cumming just cause someone stepped on you?" He lifted his foot, bringing it down on her face. "Rogue. Lick."
Yeah, right. This damn brat sure had some balls on him, Rogue could give him that. Thinking he could just order her around like some doll. But despite her confidence, Rogue suddenly felt her mouth open. Then her tongue stuck out. In front of her shocked eyes, she watched as her mouth eagerly lapped out the pussy juices staining Jamie's foot. "Whaw tha whew?!" She mumbled against his sole, her words obscured slightly.
Once Rogue was done and Jamie removed his foot, she immediately began spitting, trying to rid her mouth of the foul taste. "Ew! Disgusting!" she said in between spits. "The hell was that? Ah thought ya said you couldn't control minds? Then what in tarnation was that! Cause ah sure as hell did not do that out of mah own free will."
Jamie rolled his eyes slightly. "Oh my god! I've explained this two times already! You know, screw it. You can have fun figuring it yourself while I continue on with my plans." he raised his hands in the air, clapping loudly. "Mystique. Destiny. Come over here."
Like lifeless puppets being pulled on strings, the two women obeyed, joining their master in standing over Rogue. "T-The hell are ya gonna do?" Rogue asked, a small, tiny, miniscule hint of fear creeping in to her tone.
Jamie simply smiled, having caught that slight weariness. Instead of answering her directly, he turned his attention to the spouses. "Mystique. Sit on her face. Destiny. Sit on her chest. Then both of you. Makeout with each other."
Rogue's earlier terror was now clear as day on her face as she watched her adoptive mothers mindlessly listen to the young mutants command, Mystique's dripping with pussy looming over her like the sword of damocles. "No! Mom! Don't listen to him! Fight it!" She yelled out as Mystique began slowly lowering herself. "Damn it, get ahold of yourself! You're the leader of the godamn brotherhood for christ sake. Snap the hell out of it and-"
"Rogue. Lick."
Rogue's tongue escaped her mouth despite her best attempts to prevent it, flapping wildly back and forth as it awaited for Mystique to finish docking her face. Rogue could only mumble incoherently, praying to whatever god might be listening for a miracle."Uh! Mawah! Hmhm! Hmmhm!"
her **** pleas turned into muffled groans as Mystique finished sitting down, burying her daughter's face between her lips. Destiny followed suit, sitting down on her soft chest soon after, the large pillows beneath her acting as comforters. The two lovers looked at each other, not a hint of emotion in either face. They both brought their hands to the sides of each other's heads, moving in close while opening their mouths. The kiss that followed was both empty and lustful at the same time. Both the women involved still showed zero awareness of passion on their faces as their tongues danced with each other inside their mouths. It was routine. A show. Something they didn't quite understand, but were still doing because their master had ordered it. All the while their daughter sat underneath them, barely able to breathe as she licked the one spot on her mother no daughter should ever lick.
The feeling was excruciating. With one of her mothers sitting right on her face and the other on her chest, Rogue could barely breathe under their full weight. Since her mouth was fully preoccupied lapping at her mother's vagina, that left her nose the only place for her to take in oxygen. To make it better, her nose had ended up snuggly in between Mystique's ass cheeks, making for a 'lovely' scent as she breathed in what little air she could.
Jamie watched the display from the side, smiling to himself. The sight of Mystique and Destiny, plainly and passionately making out at the same time while one of them rides their daughter's face, combined with the sounds of Rogue struggling while obediently licking was enough to get him fully hard in a matter of seconds. He crouched down, positioning himself between Rouge's open legs. "Alright Rogue, I'm gonna shove my cock in now. I remember you mentioning having a husband before. You still cool with me doing this?"
A series of loud, muffled groans emerged as Rogue squirmed around what little she could. The sight only served to amuse Jamie even further. "It's funny, your mom said the exact same thing."
Lining himself up, Jamie thrust forward. The sudden entrusion caused Rogue to do a sharp intake of air, which had the unintended side effect of sucking extra hard on Mystique's clit. The sensation finally earned some sort of reaction from the stoic doll, causing her to let out a small moan against Destiny's lips while pressing her rear harder against Rogue's face. Then the entire thing resulted in a chain reaction that produced shameless moans from all three women involved.
Moving inside Rouge, Jamie set a brutal pace, slamming in and out with wild abondon. "How does that feel, huh? Hurt? Good. I wasn't originally going to do this. I was gonna treat you nice." he hissed, punctuating each one of his words with a hard slam, producing a series of muffled, whimpering moans. "But you just had to get all pissy about your moms. Well fine! If you're so damn concerned about them, then I hope you enjoy being as close as you possibly could be!"
Meanwhile, under Mystique's perky ass, Rogue's eyes were rolling into the back of her head. This was too much. Destiny crushing her chest, Mystique's ass in her face and vaginal fluids in her mouth. Jamie furiously using her pussy. It was overwhelming. A full frontal **** on her senses. She was getting close again... she was gonna...
"Oh, no you don't!" Jamie suddenly interrupted, having felt the way she was spasming around his member and knowing what was about to happen. "After the shit you pulled, you don't get such permission anymore. Rogue. Do not cum until I give permission."
She was right there... she was almost over the edge... just a little more! But it never came. She stayed there, just on the precipice of an orgasm. But it refused to happen. No... no... no! Not this! This was absolute ****! Did this boy's cruelty know no bounds? "Mmhmhm! Hmhmhmh!"
Savoring Rogue's **** moans as she was trapped in a limbo of almost climaxing, Jamie turned his attention to the couple above. He roughly grabbed Destiny by the hair, pulling her head back until she was looking up at him. "Ignore her. New command. Destiny. Kiss me."
Like an AI being giving a new line of code for a different task, Destiny immediately switched her attentions, going straight from Mystique right to Jamie, cupping his face and bringing his lips closer, letting his tongue explore her mouth to his heart's contents. Mystique meanwhile simply sat back and watched. For once being the one sitting in the cuck chair. Or, more accurately, sitting in the cuck daughter's face.
After several more minutes of the perverse show, almost all participants were nearing their finish. Well, Rogue had technically been "nearing" hers for a while now, but some of the others were finally catching up. Mystique, whose nether regions had been being thoroughly cleaned by Rogue, was now emitting audible gasps. And Jamie could feel it in himself he was only a few strokes away from dumping his load deep into Rogue's defenseless insides. Pulling back from his long kiss with Destiny, he turned his attention towards Mystique. "You're getting close, aren't you?" He asked breathlessly.
"Y-Yes master. I am rapidly approaching an orgasm." Mystique replied, a slight shakiness creeping into her usual monotone.
A sudden idea then crossed Jamie's mind. With a devlish grin, he said to Mystique. "Well in that case. Resume time for conscious part of brain."
In an instant, Mystique returned to reality, looking around confused. "A-And what is it now?" Feeling someone licking her from below, she made the assumption that it was Destiny, and that Jamie was looking forward to watching them pleasure each other. But looking across from her, she found both Jamie and Destiny, her beloved's eyes completely empty inside. But wait a minute... if both of them were over there... then who? The blue skinned woman turned her gaze downwards, a chill running down her spine. No... it couldn't possibly be...
"A-Anne Marie?!"
Rogue, who had been on the verge of passing out due to oxygen deprivation, suddenly purked right up as she heard her mother's terrified scream. Despite not being able to see her face, she could tell it was genuine. Her mother was back. "Mhmmm! Figghhh mwma!" Rogue tried to communicate back. But with her tongue still logged deep in her mother's pussy, that wasn't happening.
Wanting to spare her daughter, Mystique tried to get up.
"Uh uh. Mystique. Sit down. And when you come, make sure to do it right in her mouth."
She cringed as she felt her legs give out, coming crashing down back onto Rogue's face. "P-Please...d-don't make me do this..." she begged, but it was already too late. Despite her attempts to hold back, Mystique felt it coming on. "Ahh... R-Rogue honey.... p-please forgive meehshshsh!" her sentance trailed off into a loud moan as her orgasm finally came, shooting straight into her little girl's mouth and down her throat. Rogue, in turn, let out her own series of horrified moans. "NOMMGN! MMGMG! MHMHMHFHFH!"
The incestuous spectacle turned out to be just enough to give Jamie that final push, the young mutant proceeding to bury himself to the hilt inside of Rouge. "Fuck! Take it all! Take my cum and get knocked up!"
Finally, after the most agonizing and humiliating moments in the mother daughter pair's life, it was finally over. Mystique fell backwards onto the ground, breathing heavily and with a sense of deep shame inside her. Though not strictly told, Rogue's body assumed its orders were complete and stopped her exhausted tongue from its endless back and forth. She too laid on the ground (though not of her own choice) and panted deeply, her constant near orgasm now almost painful. Jamie pulled out of Rogue's abused hole, watching his semen slowly trickle out. At least it was over for now, Rogue assumed. He was gonna go lie down now after exhausting himself, and leave the three of them to stand silently. She could use that time to figure out a way out. To free herself and give this little brat just what he deserved. But Jamie had other plans. See, there was still one member of their little group who hadn't got to come yet. Destiny. And that just wasn't fair now, was it? Thankfully for her, Jamie knew juuuusssssstttt the thing he needed to push her to the brink.
Standing up, Jamie moved to a chair just above Rouge's head, in direct line of sight to Destiny. "Mystique. Crawl over here."
To defeated to offer any resistance, vocal or physical, Mystique let her body take her, crawling up right next to Jamie's half-erect cock. Rogue watched on suspicious (not like she could do anything else). Just what the hell was he planning now?
"Resume time for conscious part of the brain. Destiny. Get off Rogue and eat the cum out of her pussy. As you do, keep your eyes glued on both me and Mystique."
Destiny shook her head slightly, trying to regain herself and figure where and what she could be currently doing. "Ugh, just what could he have planned-" her words were cut off as she looked down, seeing Rogue's tired face beneath her. "R-Rogue!? Honey, what are you doing here? You look worn out and you're covered in... oh don't tell me..." Irene could not even stomach to finish the thoughts.
"Momma! You're back!" Rogue panted, relief filling her voice. "Ya have to fight it ma! Whatever control he's got ya under, ya gotta resist it!"
"Oh Rogue, darling. I truly wish it were that simple. The control he has, it's..." her voice trailed off as she noticed her body moving, slinking further down Anne Marie's body. "What a minute... what am I doing? Where am I headed?" Her questions soon got their horrifying answer as she came face to face with her foster daughter's cum filled pussy. "No... not even you would do something so..."
But her fears were once again proven right as she felt her mouth drift closer and closer, her tongue creeping out to begin lapping out the semen inside Rogue's canal like a thirsty dog. As she did, she found her eyes being **** to look up at Jamie sitting down and Mystique obediently kneeling beside him.
This entire time, Mystique had just assumed she was only there to watch, but she would soon find the true reason as Jamie issued another command.
"Mystique. Clean."
Her mouth opening wide, Mystique began moving up and down the half limp pole, making sure to use her tongue to clean it thoroughly. As she did, Destiny watched on, feeling a familiar tingle down below. Damn it! Remembering the changes he had done to her brain when she was first captured, Irene was only now realising what he was trying to do. He was gonna make her orgasm! She tried to fight it the best she could, but with her body not listening to her, her mouth deep inside Rogue and her mind filled with involuntary cuckquean dreams, there was not much she could do.
As Destiny's tongue continued its exploration, Rogue thrashed around on the floor, her cheeks flushing a bright red. She rolled her head back, glaring up at Jamie. "A-Ah won't forget this. Ah swear, once ah'm free, I'll-" She clenched her teeth as Destiny hit particularly deep inside her. "Even if I don't get loose, mah friends are gonna kick your ass. J-Jean can shut ya brain off without you ever even seeing her. L-Logan's gonna cut ya to pieces and grill you up something good. A-And mah man, oh boy. Once he finds out, he's gonna charge up something mighty big and hurl it straight at-"
"Rogue. You are now allowed to cum."
Rogue paused, her eyes widening. What? No. Not now! He had been keeping her wound up for so long. Even the smallest breeze would be enough to.... As Rogue's mind spiraled endlessly, Destiny's tongue performed a particularly deep probe, hitting her right in the g-spot. Her vision darkened, her hearing going out. And then, the dam broke. An ocean wave came rushing out of Rogue, threatening to drown Irene. All the while, her back bent so hard off the floor you could almost hear the sound of her bones popping. Loud, harsh sounding, almost bestial moans could be heard escaping her throat, making her sound almost more sow than human.
"AUUGUGHG! STOP! MAKE IT STOP! PLEASE GOD, MAKE IT STOP!"
Destiny swallowed as much of the climax as she could, her eyes still focused on Mystique cleaning Jamie. Watching her deepthroat him, she could no longer hold herself back. Her own orgasm came not long after Rogue's, soaking the carpet below her and most likely creating a stain that would never wash out.
Once both ladies were finally done, they laid exhausted. Both mentally and physically. Deciding it was clean enough, Jamie shoved Mystique to the side, walking over to the two limp figures on the floor. He picked Destiny up by her hair, her eyes unresponsive and her mouth filled with the cum cleaned out of Rogue. Faint gurgling noises could be heard.
"Oops, seems she passed out. Oh well." he shrugged, letting go of her head and letting it fall to the ground with a loud thud. He then turned his attention over to Rogue. Despite being on the verge of passing out, he could still see that anger and hatred in her eyes.
"Woah, you managed to stay sane through all that? Impressive. Both of these girls would've definetly cracked." he gave a slight kick to Destiny's ass, earrning no response.
"K-Kill ya... Ah'm gon freaking kill ya..."
"Oh, scary. But I don't think that's gonna be happening." he stood up to his full height. "You seem like a really hard case to crack. Even harder than both Mystique and Destiny. While forcing you to do what I want while you glare at me angrily is super hot, I'm sure it's gonna get old quick. So I'm just gonna freeze you and then start messing with your head to make a separate personality more fitted for my needs. Hehehe."his laugheter echoed throughout the room. "Don't worry. You won't be totally gone. I'll let you out every now and then. Maybe on holidays or special occasions?"
Rogue's chest was heaving with anger at this point. If only she could move. Just an inch was all that she needed.... "Y-You bastard. Ya won't get away with this. Ah swear, I'll-"
With one last cocky grin, Jamie uttered the last words Rouge would be hearing for a while. "Freeze."
Several months passed. Without their leader or oracle, the brotherhood dissolved rapidly. Attempting one last swan song, they were eventually thwarted by the X-men and taken down for good. But it wasn't all celebration. A long time back, Rouge had gone to investigate the disappearances of the two missing brotherhood members and her mothers, and gone dark just the same. Well, that wasn't entirely true. Just before all communications ceased, they received one last message from the heroine, telling them that she was "alright" and that she "just needed some time out here to herself to try and find what happened to her missing parental figures." The X-men should carry on as normal and not come out to assist her. She would reach back out when she had anything of note to report. At first, the message eased everyone's worries. But as the weeks passed, their concerns began to grow. This had been a really long time without an update of any kind. Surely, she must have found something noteworthy by now. None of them wanted to worry. Rogue was strong and competent. There weren't many threats that she couldn't at least escape from if the situation got too grim. But still, several entire months without even a "by the way y'all, still alive!" Perhaps it wouldn't hurt to send a quick check-up. Just to really make sure nothing was wrong.
Jamie's mother was getting ready for work, gathering up her belongings and doing up her hair. All the while, she could hear the sounds of thumping and slurping overhead. That son of hers. Ever since he got those new dolls of his, he's been cooped up in that room from sun up to sun down. Oh well, as long as he wasn't getting into trouble. And also, she had no right to complain. He was her master after all. If that is how he wished to spend his time, she must simply allow it. Doing one last check over her things, Mrs. Brooks exited the house and locked the door behind her.
Up in his room, Jamie was sitting on his favorite chair. This nice, blue model he recently acquired. It was kind of old, but still felt just as good as any new one on the market. It's nice, soft pillows made for an exceptional back rest. And it paired nicely with his new coatrack. Standing in the corner, arms stretched to the side, it neatly held all Belle's outfits when not in use. School girl uniform, nurse, police uniform, catsuit. It held them all up with no difficulty. Speaking of, he could feel himself getting close to finishing. Looking down, he saw Belle, his ever loyal s̶l̶a̶v̶e girlfriend, pumping her large tits up and down his shaft with a big, satisfied smile on her face.
"Master, ah can feel ya getting close now," she drawled, picking up her speed. "Would ya like to do it on mah face, or should ah open mah mouth instead?"
"Neither. Stand up and turn around. I wanna glaze your cheeks."
Belle happily obeyed, standing up and bending over, her massive ass so close to him Jamie could feel the heat radiating off of them. "Of course master. Please, paint mah behind with your lovely cum. Please and thank you."
His hand pumping his already sensitive member furiously, Jamie came in no time, splattering the round globes. "Fuck yeah..."
Belle simply giggled, happy that she could bring her beloved master pleasure. Though it was strange. Sometimes when she looked at him, she felt this deep... burning inside her chest. As if something was trying to claw its way out. She ignored it, attributing it to just being the deep love she felt for him.
"What would ya like me to do now, sugah?" she asked in a sultry tone.
"Lets just take it easy for a while. Shake that booty in front of me until I tell you to stop."
Belle gleefully did as ordered, squatting down with her hands on her knees, shaking her bubble butt up and down. The motion caused her ass cheeks to smack against each other, creating a loud clapping noise.
He knew this wouldn't last forever. That he couldn't keep Rogue like this forever. After all, she was part of a superhero team that was aware she had gone to this specific location. That half-scrambled together message was only going to keep them at bay for so long. Sooner or later, they were going to come knocking on his door. But Jamie didn't concern himself with that right now. He'd cross that bridge when he got to it. Right now, his only focus was on 'Belle's' cheeks bouncing up and down for his enjoyment.
The end...?
Hi yall, Javo here! I just wanted to say thank you for reading my first ever CHYOA story. This is not only the first time I've ever uploaded a story on to here, but also the first time I've ever written a story like this period. I was very nervous to upload it, but seeing the reactions and reading people's comments really makes me happy! I have some plans for brancing paths for earlier in the story, but I can't say for sure if they're gonna be written any time soon as I don't have as many ideas on where they should go unlike this path. Also, if you yourself wish to add a new chapter to any part, please feel free! Since this is my first ever big writing project, also feel free to leave any thoughts and criticisms in the comments below. English is also not my first language, so if any parts feel weirdly written, that's probably why lol
I also wanna give one last thank you to the people who commented on my chapters. Some of the ideas that you gave helped me push the story forward when I got stuck at certain parts. So thank you greatly!
(Also, if you're wondering "Hey, how come Jamie can touch Rouge without her zapping his powers?"... Okay to be up front, I forgot her powers worked on ALL skin to skin contact, not just hand to skin. That's my mistake lol. Lets just say this is an alternate reality where Rogue's powers work differently and only activate if she's touching the person with her hand.)
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