Is it time for the trip or something else?

It’s time for the trip!

Chapter 5 by Theyol Theyol

30 Minutes later

Mara stood near the front of Bus 1, practically bouncing on the balls of her feet. Her long auburn hair was tied in a loose ponytail that swung every time she moved. She was grinning ear-to-ear.

“This is going to be so much better than regular classes,” Mara declared, adjusting the strap of her crossbody bag. “No lectures, no notes, just wandering around an old village. I have a really good feeling about today.”

Beside her, Sofia smiled softly, arms crossed over her chest. The petite girl looked cute in her floral blouse and jeans, one hand shielding her eyes from the morning sun.

“You said. Besides, you always have a good feeling,” Sofia teased. “Last time you said that we got stuck doing group projects for three weeks.”

Mara nudged her best friend playfully. “This time is different. I can feel it.”

A few feet away, Brooke jogged over to join them, her wavy chestnut hair bouncing. “Hey! Did you all save me a seat? I refuse to sit near the back again — last trip someone spilled soda all over my shoes.”

“Already saved you one,” Mara said, looping her arm through Brooke’s. “Right behind us. Prime window real estate.”

Hannah approached the group more calmly, her long dark hair neatly tied back. She was holding a clipboard — clearly having been roped into helping their teacher organize the class.

“Mrs. Bennett wants everyone in their assigned groups before we load,” Hannah said, sounding slightly stressed. “And she’s already threatening worksheets if anyone wanders off.”

Brooke groaned dramatically. “Ugh, she is such a control freak.”

Chloe Bennett, Mrs. Bennett’s teenage daughter, walked up with an eye roll that could be seen from space. She had the same brown hair as her mother but wore it in a messy ponytail, with a streak of pink hidden underneath.

“Yeah, well you don't have to live with her” Chloe muttered. “She made me help count everyone twice already. I am this close to faking sick to go home.”

Mrs. Bennett herself appeared moments later, clipboard in hand and wearing a light blue sundress. She looked frazzled but determined.

“Girls! No loitering. Chloe, stop complaining and help me check the attendance list. Mara, Sofia — you two are in Group A. Brooke and Hannah, you are with them. We leave in exactly fifty-five minutes, so please stay near the buses.”

Mara gave Mrs. Bennett her brightest smile. “We are ready when you are, Mrs. Bennett! This is going to be the best field trip yet.”

Mrs. Bennett sighed, but a small smile tugged at her lips. “Your optimism is noted, Mara. Just try to keep the chaos to a minimum today.”

As Mrs. Bennett walked away to check on another group, Chloe leaned in toward the others with a conspiratorial whisper. “Bet you ten bucks she makes us do a scavenger hunt with worksheets again.”

Sofia giggled. “I’ll take that bet.”

Brooke grinned. “As long as we get to explore the old buildings and take pictures, I don’t even care about the worksheets.”

Mara looked at her four friends, eyes sparkling with excitement. “Whatever happens today,” she said, putting her arms around Sofia and Brooke, “we’re making it memorable.”


The two yellow school buses rolled steadily down the winding two-lane road toward Oak Grove Historical Village. The Windows were cracked open, letting in the warm, humid Florida breeze. It was a perfect spring morning — bright sun, scattered clouds, and that rare kind of light that made everything feel carefree.

Inside Bus 1, the noise level was loud and joyful. Tyler Brooks hung over the back of his seat, grinning as he roasted his friend Noah Patel.

“Bro, you seriously brought a Switch on a field trip? What are you gonna do, play Animal Crossing while we are learning about dead inventors?”

Noah shoved him, laughing. “At least I brought something fun.”

Hannah sat beside her younger brother, long dark hair neatly tied back, occasionally glancing over at Noah with an exasperated but fond look. “Noah, at least pretend you’re paying attention when we get there,” Hannah said, nudging him with her elbow. “Mom will kill me if you spend the whole trip on that thing.”

A few rows away, Mara, Sofia, and Brooke had claimed a row together. Mara was practically vibrating with excitement, her long auburn hair swinging as she turned around.

“I’m telling you guys, today is going to be awesome,” Mara said, grinning. “Old buildings, possible ghost stories, no real classes — what more could we want?”

“Saturday,” Sophie deadpanned.

Brooke, by the window with her wavy chestnut hair catching the sunlight, laughed. “I just want good pictures for Instagram. Those old gardens are going to look amazing.”

Sofia Ramirez, seated between them, smiled softly and raised one hand to shield her eyes from the sun. “I am hoping the tour guides actually tell some real haunted stories. This place is from the 1800s, there has to be at least one tragic romance or murdered widow legend.”

From across the aisle, Chloe leaned over with a dramatic groan. “Ugh, do not get my mom started on ghost stories. She will probably make us do a whole worksheet about ‘historical accuracy’ instead.”

Mara laughed and reached across to high-five Chloe. “Join the rebellion! We can start a secret club: ‘Students Against Field Trip Worksheets.’”

Chloe grinned. “I am in. As long as we don’t get caught. My mom has eyes everywhere.”

In the very back, Emily Harper and Kayla Reed were sharing earbuds and singing off-key. Up front, Mrs. Bennett stood up, gripping the overhead rail with one hand while clutching her clipboard with the other.

“Listen up, everyone!” she called out. “We’re less than ten minutes out. When we arrive, I expect you all to act like respectful young adults. Stay with your assigned groups. No wandering off. And please — keep the language clean!”

A half-hearted chorus of “Yes, Mrs. Bennett” rose up, followed at once by snickering once she sat back down.

Back in their row, Mara leaned in toward her friends with a conspiratorial whisper.

“Whatever happens today, we’re making it fun. Deal?”

“Deal,” Brooke, Sofia, and Chloe all replied, laughing.

Hannah glanced back at her brother, who was still focused on his game, and shook her head with a small smile.

The buses finally pulled into the gravel parking lot of Oak Grove Historical Village, kicking up a small cloud of dust that sparkled in the bright Florida sunlight. Mara was one of the first to bounce down the steps of the Bus, practically vibrating with excitement.

“This place is actually cute!” she said, shielding her eyes as she looked around at the old wooden buildings, blooming gardens, and winding paths. “It feels like we stepped back in time.”

Sofia stepped off right behind her, brushing a strand of dark hair from her face. “It’s prettier than I expected. Think they’ll let us explore on our own?”

Brooke hopped down next, already pulling out her phone. “As long as we get good pictures, I’m happy. Those flower beds are going to look amazing.”

Chloe followed more calmly, adjusting her backpack. “Just remember what my mom said — stay in our groups. She’s already stressed enough.”

Hannah groaned as she exited the bus. “If she makes us do worksheets, I’m pretending I got heatstroke.”

The group laughed as they joined the growing crowd on the central lawn near the old stone fountain. Mrs. Bennett was already trying to organize everyone, clipboard in hand.

“Alright, everyone! Gather around!” she called. “We’ll start with a short orientation from the village staff, then break into groups.”

Mara stood near the fountain with Sofia on one side and Brooke on the other. She tilted her head back slightly, laughing at something Sofia had just whispered about asking the guide if the village was haunted. Sofia raised her hand to shield her eyes from the sun, smiling that soft, playful smile of hers. Everything felt warm. Alive. Normal.

Then, without warning… Silence. Absolute, unnatural silence.

Mara’s laugh cut off mid-breath. Her head was still tilted back, one hand frozen gracefully brushing a strand of auburn hair from her face. She couldn’t move. Couldn’t speak. Couldn’t even blink.

Sofia’s hand remained raised near her forehead, her gentle smile locked in place. Her thoughts simply… stopped.

Brooke’s fingers hovered over her phone screen, mid-swipe. Her cheerful expression froze.

Chloe’s hand was still on her backpack strap. Chloe’s eyeroll was captured perfectly in time. Tyler’s mouth was open in the middle of a joke. Jasmine’s selfie pose became permanent. Emily and Kayla’s shared earbuds hung frozen between them.

Every student and teacher on the lawn, all fifty-five of them, became perfectly still in a single heartbeat.

A single set of footsteps crunched loudly on the gravel path. Elias Crowe stepped down from the low rise and walked slowly into the center of the frozen tableau. His boots were the only sound in the area. He moved among the motionless figures with calm, clinical interest, his eyes scanning each face and body, evaluating valuable merchandise.

He stopped in front of Mara Ellison first. A thin, satisfied smile spread across his lips as he reached out and gently brushed a strand of her curly hair back into place. His hands lowered, down to where her breasts were. He just could not help himself and gave them a light squeeze. Mara for her part didn’t notice.

“Perfect,” he whispered.

Then he turned his gaze across the rest of the frozen crowd, his eyes gleaming with cold hunger.

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