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Chapter 9 by Sixes Sixes

What's next?

I quite like this place, I think I'll make it my own.

This is a notice for those continuing on this path. You can customize the names of both you and Emilia in this route. I am just warning you.


Thinking about it for more than a few seconds, you realize that you don't want to share Emilia or any other female in this coffee shop. You decide to make some changes to the rules you've already written, replacing Steven's name with your own and making the appropriate changes.

'Sorry buddy but I quite like this place, and I'm not interested in sharing.'

You even go so far as to change who Jessica Swan belongs to.

Continuing with the updates, you soon decide that you didn't like that any male employees could come down here, so you make another amendment.

Old Rule: John owns this coffee shop. I, the author of this rule, can get anything I want off the menu. I have a free pass to fuck any of the female employees.

New Rule: John Doe, owner and author of this book, owns a small human milk factory in the basement of this building. Any female employee of his that he chooses must go down there at once, where they are bound and milked by designated machines. The selected women are called 'Hucows', and once selected, they can no longer talk but can still make noises. They stay healthy despite being bound indefinitely and only eat hay and grain fed to them in troughs. Hucows are effectively immortal after being selected. John is to impregnate any Hucows if he is to increase their milk production. The milk produced by these women is sold here at the coffee shop.

There, that should handle all of the potential issues with owning this place. Now onto other matters. Looking over to Emilia in her current state, you decide to make more changes to her benefit. She's going to remain as a hucow, though. She looks good like that.

New Rule: Emilia Smith is to be known as Jane from this point forward. Her previous identity no longer matters, and the only ones that remember her original name are her family, herself, and the author of this rule.

New Rule: Jane's body is at peak human fitness and health from this point onwards. Any genetic or physical defects she has are gone completely. Jane will not physically age past her prime. Jane will always be fertile and will not suffer any pain or suffer from childbirth. Any orifices that are used immediately return to their original state before use.

New Rule: Jane is in the truest sense of the word immortal and can never die or suffer from disease or injury.

You don't want her to get hurt beyond what is necessary. But you feel like you forgot something... Oh right! You immediately start writing down a new rule.

New Rule: Jane is the prize cow of John Doe and can be given special privileges that only John Doe can give, not limited to the freedom to move around and get out of her pen.

Old Rule: Jane is incapable of growing her hair down past her neck.

"There we go." As soon as you finish the rule changes, you feel satisfied with the changes. However, you immediately hear a scream in Emilia's direction, or rather Jane's direction, and you watch as her body changes before the screams subside and she's crying. It sounded pretty painful, but at least it's over now, you might want to fix that, but you don't want to write a new rule every time something like this happens.

After thinking for less than a second, you come up with something and remember another. You have the power to shape reality, which means you can change yourself if you just write it down. There's also the fact that the Rulebook can easily fall out of your hands if you don't protect it adequately, which leads to your new rules.

New Rule: This book is, and always will be, the property of John Doe. No one else is allowed to write in this book or make changes without the owner's permission, and even then, they can only make changes the owner told them to make. The person given permission cannot **** any loopholes in this system.

New Rule: The Rulebook cannot be harmed in any way, shape, or form unless the owner harms it. Even then, the Rulebook will return to its previous state with all the rules written before that point being kept intact.

New Rule: The owner instinctively knows where the Rulebook is at all times and can bring it into his hands with a sharpened number 2 pencil with nothing more than a thought and a want to change the rules.

There's your ass covered. Seriously, why didn't you think to do this earlier? It's like you weren't thinking far enough ahead. Regardless. Onto your changes.

New Rule: John Doe is physically perfect and has no physical ailments or genetic defects. He cannot be harmed and cannot feel pain unless he wishes to unless its source can be fatal to a normal person. Even then, it feels no worse than a bruise.

New Rule: John Doe's body is at the peak of human limits. His strength is equivalent to that of an elephant, his maximum speed is equivalent to that of a horse, his sight is perfect, and he has nano-second reaction times. He cannot be restrained in any way, shape or form, and he has no refractory period.

New Rule: John Doe has the ability to enslave someone to his will by placing a collar on them. The collar can be summoned out of any pocket the user has on hand, no one can counter his enslavement, and it is permanent unless John wants to remove it.

New Rule: John Doe can reshape reality to be whatever he wishes it to be as long as it doesn't interfere with the rules.

That's all of your bases covered now onto more important shit. Now that you have given yourself the power of the book itself, you can now make the appropriate change and remove the pain that went through Jane after you altered her biology. After you do precisely that, you move on to something else. You never liked your name all that much. It was a bit too plain, so you're going to change that.

Old Rule: John Doe is now John Doe from here on out.

You immediately feel the change before looking back over the book, and you find that all mentions of your name have changed to the new name. That's concerning. You'd best deal with that for potential future changes.

Old Rule: John Doe cannot be affected negatively by the power of the rulebook.

NOW that should cover all of your bases. As you look over to the side at Jane, you decide what changes you should make with your newfound power. The possibilities are limitless, so you guess you're going to do something new.


This is a question I have decided to ask some people. If you want a scenario to continue with all of the promising scenarios out here that have been dropped, why not write your own? Because that's exactly what spurred me on to do this. I was annoyed and wanted to do something that could be considered fun. So why doesn't everyone else do this?

What to do next...

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