Her highschool bully, Rose Millson

After getting dressed again, putting on an orange halter top and a pair of shorts, she took the notebook and flipped it open to the college’s page. When she considered the various people she could write down in the notebook, Max was quickly sure of who she’d want to pick. There were her exes who had been a bitch to her, there were her childhood crushes which proved unattainable. Hell, she could even have written down a celebrity crush and it would have worked, but there was one person she would want for this, purely because she planned to exert extensive control over them: her highschool bully Rose. Rose had been an absolute asshole to her for so many years, and now she was ready to exact her ****. And so she began to write:

New rule (College): Rose Millson is Max Valentine’s roommate and studies at the same college as Max.

Old Rule (All): Rose follows any command Max gives her, but is unable to say this to other people.

Old Rule (All): Max’s commands for Rose are not perceived by other people except for Rose unless she wants them to be.

Closing the notebook, Max immediately hears the door open. In walks a thin, smaller woman with platinum blonde hair. Immediately she recognises her as Rose from high school, who hadn’t grown an inch since then. Whereas once she may have been a smidge taller than Max, she was now a good 3 inches shorter. In some aspects she had changed, such as her septum piercing, a few small tattoos on her exposed forearms and calves. Her hair was still that silky white-blonde kept in a fringe and the rest down to her shoulders.

Rose hadn’t seen Max, but jumped when she looked, clearly not having expected someone else to be there. Walking forward, she reached out her hand, about to introduce herself when she froze, her hand halfway up. It seemed Rose had recognised her. That much was even more clear when the bully spoke up:

“What the fuck are you doing in my dorm room, Valentine?”

Max smirked slightly. It seemed that the thing she hated most about her hadn't changed: her amazing personality. Max crossed her arms in front of her and thought of a good first command to give her. On the one hand she could ease Rose into it and make her realise slowly what was happening. On the other hand she could throw her into the deep end immediately. Still being painfully horny from her make out session with Madeline, she went with the second option.

“Strip naked and stand still with your hands behind your back until I say otherwise.”

Rose gave her a confused and disgusted look, which quickly changed to a neutral one when her body began to move. First she undid the buttons of her cuffed jeans and took them off, tossing them aside. Following that was her crop top, which she lifted up over her head. Apparently she hadn’t been wearing a bra, as Max was now looking at Rose’s bare chest, pierced left nipple and everything. Lastly came her panties, but as she hooked her thumbs into the waistband Max interrupted:

“Tear them off and put them in your mouth.”

Again a brief flash of confusion on her face and then she did so, grabbing her underwear at the front of tearing them off. She then stuffed them in her mouth and stood upright, hands held behind her back. It seemed she wasn’t aware that she was executing Max’s commands until she was done, as now that she was naked and gagged, unable to move, her expression changed to one of panic. Whilst her head moved around and she looked around scared, she couldn’t move an inch. Slowly Max strolled up to her and pulled the torn underwear out of her mouth upon which Rose immediately began to scream:

“What the fuck did you do to me Val-”

With a finger on her lips, Max shushed her.

“From now you will only ever call me Miss Valentine. Now, try that again, and not so loud or people might come here and see you standing here naked. That wouldn’t be fun for you, now would it?”

The bully’s cheeks began to run red as she gritted her teeth, and spoke up again, this time at a more reasonable volume:

“Miss- I mean, Miss- What is- Why can’t I call you Miss Valentine?! Whatever, what the fuck did you do to me, why am I naked, you pervert dyke!”

This was going to be fun. Taking a nearby chair, Max sat herself down in front of Rose, crossing her legs and resting her hand on her knees. She eagerly took her time to take in Rose’s body fully. Unlike Madeline, she had a fiend build, with less filled out curves. Her chest was rather small, but still could fill her hand. What really drew Max’s attention however was the small bush of black hair just above her slit. It seemed she hadn’t trimmed in a little while. That’d have to change if she were to ever want to eat her out. Finally drawing her eyes away from Rose’s pussy, Max began to explain.

“Isn’t it obvious? You have to do everything I say. Consider it me getting even for your torment in high school. Now go unpack, but leave your clothes and underwear inside and once you’re done give me your suitcase.”

Rose, despite being confused and still trying to process things, felt her body move. Max hadn’t changed anything about the rules, but it seemed Rose now seemed aware while she executed commands, which meant the rulebook adapted rules to her wishes. It was even more powerful than she ever expected, but that might also be dangerous, something to keep in mind. Moving her naked body to the room next to Max, Rose had begun unpacking. After a very short while she returned to Max and held out her suitcase.

“What are you going to do with it?”

Taking it out of her hands, Max looked inside briefly, seeing a lot of clothes inside. Satisfied with the contents, Max walked over to a kitchen cabinet and put the suitcase inside and then went back to Rose:

“You will never open that cabinet in any way, either by asking someone to or getting someone to do it by accident. If you see anyone try and open it, you will do everything in your power to stop it. Now, follow me, I’m gonna take a shower and I’d like you to wash me.”

With that, she moved toward the door of her dorm room and opened it, Rose followed and waited for her to exit, but clearly horrified as she realised what was about to happen. Max saw her move her hands to try and cover up. She considered stopping her, but it was arguably more fun to see her struggle with covering up.

“Everyone’s gonna see me naked!”

The lesbian grinned from ear to ear to see her beginning to squirm already and had a fun idea.

“They are, and when anyone asks why, you’ll tell them it’s because you’re an exhibitionist. Don’t worry, nobody will report you.”

To quickly make sure of that, she went and scribbled down a rule she could erase at any time.

New Rule (All): Rose is legally allowed to be naked anywhere so long as Max says it’s okay.

With that she began to walk out into the hallway, and Rose followed behind her, one hand nestled partly between her legs, and her other arm swung around her chest. Rose was rather lucky her chest wasn’t that big, so she could cover up somewhat well. Even though the distance they had to cross wasn’t that long, someone still spotted the two of them. About halfway down the hall a girl with long black hair in a sundress exited her dorm room and spotted the two. Greeting them with a smile, she asked Max: “Is she allowed to be naked?” Max nodded, so the woman with black followed up by asking why, and Max told her to ask Rose. Upon asking the naked blonde, she gaze Max an angry glare and then said:

“I’m an exhibitionist, I love being seen naked in public by others!”

Rose looked like she wanted to be swallowed up by the earth right then and there as the black-haired woman looked at her with disgust, calling her a pervert before making her way down the stairs. Max saw Rose’s cheeks light up red and her shoulders sagged. She almost felt pity for her, but then walked into the communal bathroom. Seeing that all of the showers were empty, Max began to strip down as Rose simply watched. Once she was completely naked, clothes put aside, Max briefly felt between her legs. She was still completely drenched. With a look of lust and mischief she looked over at Rose and said:

“Lay down, on your back, hands at your side.”

Begrudgingly and unable to refuse, Rose walked over and lay down on her back on the bench, arms at her side. Not wasting a moment, Max raised her leg over the naked blonde and lowered herself down so she was now sitting on her face, pussy on Rose’s lips.

“Eat me out and masturbate, but you will be unable to cum until I say so.”

Letting out a shocked sound into her labia, Rose’s arms moved between her legs. One was placed right next to her slit, whilst the other gently moved toward the top of it, and moved to rub her clit. Meanwhile Rose’s tongue reached out and licked the outside of Max’s pussy at first, getting a feel for it, but eventually moved her tongue inside. Meanwhile, Max reached her hands down and fondled Rose’s chest, pinching and gently pulling on her nipples as she began to put a finger into herself.

Wet sounds filled the bathroom as the two began to really go at it. Max leaked nectar into Rose’s mouth as she ate her out to the best of her abilities, whilst at the same time she was driving three fingers in and out of herself and had her other hand work the excited nub at the top of her cunt. Still being so horny from earlier, Max was already fast approaching an orgasm. To aid herself even further, she moved one hand away from Rose’s chest and began to furiously rub her own clit. Her climax was now moments away.

Max began grinding her hips onto Rose’s tongue and finally, after a lot of waiting and hard work, she came. Her voice had been a cacophony of moans, but now she let go fully and let out a scream of excitement as her body shuddered, her body completely on fire as she lost all ability to think for a moment. Max had just had the most powerful orgasm she had had in a while. Just as she opened her eyes, ready to tell Rose to cum and then stop herself, she looked forward and saw they were no longer alone: somebody had seen them, but rather than say anything, she was stood there, masturbating to the two women going at it, jerking her cock with passion.