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Head Hopping

Chapter 2

In modern fiction, Head Hopping is A MASSIVE NO. The narrator should only be able to access the main character's thoughts. Doing so makes the writing more exciting for the reader by adding mystery to the rest of the cast of characters. This helps build suspense and makes it a much better read.

If you want to change the point of view, you need a new chapter or scene. (Chapter ideally)

Try it, and I guarantee you'll agree,

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