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Chapter 3
by
DirtyRead
Which punishment should Mel choose?
Glorywhore
Mel wasn't sure if this was a trick question or not. What she was sure of was her bad premonition at the word 'the pit'.
She's seen how the women above were being treated. But she also remembered that there was a free spot at the far right, and that throughout the time she's been in that room, the ones on the left took most of the punishment, while the girl on the right was left alone. It's still a fucking disgusting decision, but better than something called 'the pit'.
"Come on, you fucking slut, give me your answer!"
Just as Mel finished her thought, her kidnapper grabbed her breasts, pinching her nipples hard.
"Ahhhh fuuuuck!" Mel gasped.
"I am waiting, you little slut. Give me your answer, or I will throw you into both punishments."
"Fuck, fuck okay, okay, I choose the gloryhole! Please let go of my nipples, please!"
With a laugh, he took his grasp from her slender breasts. Mels' hands were released and shackled together behind her back. Next, the man undid the ties at her legs. After he connected something to her neck, she was suddenly pulled forward. She couldn't see, so she tumbled towards the direction he pulled her to. They went around a corner, most likely out of a room, and continued straight for a while.
"Now, let's see. Which place should I give you? Since it's your first time, I'll be nice and place you right here to the left."
'The left? Did he say the left?' There was no place on the left, Mel was sure of that. Maybe they changed the order of the women here? But placing them at new places must be time-consuming; she for sure wasn't knocked out that long, right? Or maybe he just said that to scare her? Fuck, there was no way for her to know for sure. She could only hope now.
Mel was placed in front of one of the holes in the wall. She was kneeling, her legs spread apart slightly. Her knees were placed on soft material, probably so she could endure it for longer. Her hands were tied behind her back and connected to the floor just like her legs were. A leather band was laid behind her neck, connecting her to the wall. With a little pull, she was pushed slightly against the hole in the wall. Her mouth was again held open by a ring gag, making it impossible for her to close her mouth or move away from it. Which, incidentally, meant that anyone could shove their cock fully into her throat, without her getting away.
For now, Mels' lips were pressed slightly against the cover of the gloryhole. Just as she thought that her predicament was finished, she suddenly felt something being pressed against her sore ass again.
'Oh fuck, I completely forgot those pipes stuck up those women's asses. God damn no!'
Mel squirmed, but that didn't help her. A plug connected with a pipe was slowly shoved into her ass and inflated to make sure it wouldn't fall out.
"Now you are all prepared. I wish you a lot of fun with all those cocks shoved down your throat, you little slut. And you better use your tongue very well, otherwise you may get your ass pumped full with piss from the urinals."
'Pumped?! What?! Pumped up with what?!'
Mels' head raced. This wasn't at all what she anticipated. She thought the pipe was to remove anything in case she was stuck here for longer, not to pump her up in case she didn't do a good enough service!
The flap in front of Mels' face slid open, allowing her mouth to be open for use by whoever wanted to. A voice sounded in her ears, stating: "24 hours left".
'Fuck, 24 hours of this. They can't be serious. This has to be a joke. There is no way I can do this a whole day straight!'
Disregarding Mels' hopes completely, she suddenly got a cock stuffed into her mouth. Whoever it belonged to wanted it fast and rough. And he got more cock than Mel could handle at that. He **** his way deep into the back of her throat, breaking through her barrier. Mels' eyes flashed open. She started gagging and reflexively bit down on the gag, but to no avail.
That big cock got pulled out and **** back inside her mouth over and over. After two minutes of use, her abuser rammed it into her deep and left it there.
Suddenly, Mel felt something warm flowing into her ass, slowly filling her up further and further.
'Fuck, oh fuck, I completely forgot. Fuck no please!'
Without giving it a second thought, Mel started licking and sucking the stranger's cock. As a reward, the flow into her ass stopped, leaving her belly inflated slightly.
After getting fucked for what felt like an eternity, the guy pulled out slightly, pumping his hot load into Mels' mouth. Mel struggled with the taste, but finally managed to swallow it. Nobody ever threatened her with it, but she could imagine that spitting out someone's cum might get her an even harsher punishment.
Mel continued sucking on the stranger's hard cock. She would do anything as long as her ass wouldn't get pumped up any further.
After another few minutes of sucking that half-hard cock, suddenly something flowed into Mels' mouth.
'Wha...No, what the fuck no no no no, fuck no! That dude can't be serious. He's pissing into my mouth?!'
Mel stopped sucking instantly. There was no way she would do this. The guy seemed to have noticed that as well, as he stopped using her mouth as a urinal. Though it was not to back off. Instead, Mel started feeling something flowing back into her ass again. Her insides got filled more and more until she couldn't take it anymore. With a resigned groan, she started sucking again, soon feeling piss flow down her throat, filling her up even further.
'Fuck, once I am out of here, I will kill this fucker! Fuck this!'
For now, Mel had no other choice but to keep on swallowing, though. Drop by drop, she sucked the guy's piss out of him, till the last bit flowed down her throat.
After he pulled back out, Mel heard a voice again in her ear: "satisfaction 7 - resttime 15 minutes, time left 23 hours and 33 minutes."
A moment later, the panel in front of her slid back down, and the fluid in her ass was slowly drained out again, easing the burden on her stomach.
'At least they are giving me some kind of rest here. 15 minutes is not much, but better than nothing. I wonder if the satisfaction rating has anything to do with it.'
Mel tried to relax while she could. The last guy really did a number on her. And the thought of doing this for another 23 hours was terrifying.
After the 15 minutes were up, the panel opened back up as well. And not long after, another cock was shoved into her mouth. This time, though, it was a relatively small one. Well, relative to the last one at least. It still managed to push all the way to the back of her throat.
This time, she started sucking right from the beginning, not giving any reason to "motivate" her further. And shortly after she finished this time, she again heard the voice in her ears: "satisfaction 8 - resttime 20 minutes, time left 23 hours 04 minutes."
It looked like Mels' assumption was correct. The better her rating, the more time she got to rest. Though this also meant that to get a good rating, she would need to suck off random guys earnestly.
While Mel was thinking about what to do, she suddenly felt something flow into her ass.
'What? I am in my rest phase, aren't I?
"Here's a little extra for you, my little toy. I thought you might be hungry, so I filled you up with a bit of nutrient paste. Now you can enjoy your 24 hours without any problems."
'That...What?' Mels' head raced, and suddenly she connected some dots. She has been here for at least two days. How come she didn't feel hungry throughout this time? They probably **** this nutrient paste into her body every time they fucked her poor ass.
Over the next two hours, Mel had to suck two further cocks. Til now it's been relatively easy. It looked like it started to get quite late, so fewer and fewer people frequented the gym. And even less used the glory holes.
A while later
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Mel drained the last drop of cum, just like she did the last few times. And as usual, she heard the same voice in her ears: "satisfaction 10 - rest time 30 minutes, time left 8 hours and 23 minutes".
It's been nearly 16 hours now. For the last few hours, there was close to no one at the gym. She heard gagging noises a few times throughout this time, but they were all coming from the girl right next to her.
Poor girl probably got a bad rating, since she's been nonstop fucked for the last hour.
Mel instead perfected her movements. She wouldn't brag about it, but she has always been quite good with her tongue. The last few times she always got a rating of 9 or 10, which allowed her to take longer breaks and sucking less cocks.
According to Mels' estimate, it should be around lunchtime now. Meaning, for a few more hours, there won't be much traffic in the gym. The last few hours, though, there would be a lot again. With her ratings, though, she won't suck much cock anymore anyway. Mel smirked inside. This might be quite the abstract and disgusting situation, but she definitely was outplaying her kidnappers.
5 hours later
As Mel expected, over the last 5 hours, there weren't many people at the gym. Actually, throughout all this time, her hole only got used once. She's been quite lucky if she had to say so herself, which, against all rationality, got her into a good mood.
According to the voice, her rest time would be over any minute now, which meant she would now have roughly 3 hours left of this. And just as she thought about it, the panel at her mouth opened back up again.
Shortly after, a new cock slid in between her lips.
'Perfect, after this only 5 more times and I'm out of this hole.'
Mel sucked like she did the last few times. She moved her tongue in circular motions around the guy's tip. After a short while, he rammed his cock down her throat and started fucking her at high speed.
Mel nearly struggled with getting enough air when he kept his cock in her throat for over a minute. After he pulled out again slightly, Mel got right back to work, sucking and licking as good as she could. But, against what she expected, suddenly something warm flowed into her ass again. Mel panicked. She sucked even harder, licking her tongue around the bottom of his tip, but whatever she did didn't seem to satisfy her client.
She slowly filled up further and further. The pressure on the pumped-up plug increased, and her belly was already bulging slightly. After a total of two liters, it finally stopped.
Mels' mind was exhausted. The pressure in her insides was unbearable, and even though she sucked as if her life depended on it, her client didn't finish. After a total of 35 minutes of this ****, he left her hanging and went to the hole next to her. Mel heard the voice in her ear again: "satisfaction 0 - punishment time 30 minutes, updating time, time left 3 hours 27 minutes."
'P..Punishment? After all this, a punishment?!'
And worst of all, even though the pressure on her ass was finally eased again, the panel in front of her mouth never closed. And since she was still open to use, a new cock found its way back into her throat just a moment later.
Tired from the last fuck, Mel tiredly sucked on the cock. She licked slightly over the tip with the hope that this one might be easier to please than the last one. Well, at least that's what she hoped for. But instead, the guy picked up pace, fucking her throat again and again and again, leaving her no room to even use her tongue.
Mel gasped for air in between the times he wasn't filling up her throat. And this continued for minutes.
After a good 23 minutes, he finally pushed deep into her one last time, pumping everything he had down her throat. Mel was at the brink of exhaustion; she really needed a break right now. Otherwise, she wouldn't be able to satisfy any of the other upcoming cocks. And with each one she failed, she would be doomed to stay like this longer and longer.
After the last push, the guy pulled back his cock slightly, leaving it inside her mouth again.
Mel sucked on it slightly, draining the last few drops of cum out of him in the hope of a better rating. But instead, just like the first guy she had, he pumped more than just cum into her mouth.
Mel was irritated for a short moment, but she knew she had ****. She swallowed. Every drop. Every single last drop.
After the guy left, she thankfully got another rating of 10, which meant that she would have to roughly spend another two and a half hours with this.
She took all the time she could get to relax her mind and body. Those last two really did a hefty toll on her.
Thankfully, the coming two hours weren't as harsh. She got a few quick finishes and was able to get another hour of rest.
Then finally, she heard the final line she was waiting for all along: "time left 0 hours 0 minutes".
Mel closed her eyes. She was finally able to sleep. The last hours were hell. She was able to rest a bit throughout the night, but it wasn't nearly enough for her to fully recharge her batteries.
Mel slowly drifted off into an exhaustion-driven slumber.
When she woke up again, she was unrestrained on a mattress in the dark. There was a bit of light coming through a slit at the door, so she could make out a light switch on the wall. She still had her headwear, which was secured by a lock, but her eyes were free, and her mouth was ungagged. She was wearing a pyjama, and at a table next to her, she found some food. She slowly reached for it hungrily, stuffing a bun into her mouth. After a few bites, she bit on something hard. Mel stopped eating, breaking apart the bun, and inside she found a key.
'A key? Are they trying to trick me into another punishment again? If not, who was trying to help her?'
Mel pondered what to do; she could either stay put, waiting for her kidnappers to come back, or use the key to maybe escape this place.
Should Mel use the key?
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Mel's Story
Escape from hell
Mel, a young woman in her mid twenties is to experience something that will change her life forever. After being kidnapped, you, the reader will help her decide her fate. Either down towards the path of no escape and submission, or towards the path of freedom.
Updated on Dec 20, 2025
by DirtyRead
Created on Dec 11, 2025
by DirtyRead
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