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Chapter 8 by Benjackalope Benjackalope

What happens at school?

Authors Notes

This chapter is meant to indulge my interest in describing various thoughts, feelings, and plans, for what I intend to do with my storyline.

I’m excited to try writing an erotic story for the first time and hope that you enjoy what I have to offer. I enjoyed reading Duduvar’s and Neo_Kenka’s storyline for David.

As always, many of my content, ideas, story elements, characters, etc., come from Duduvar and Neo_Kenka. Please take the time to read their stories as they have various unique aspects and story writing very intriguing styles. This would also give me more time to write more content before you come back to reading my storyline ;)

I thought I’d try writing a few chapters for David, about as often or as long as this newfound desire takes me.

I intend to include various fetishes, but I do not yet know when, how, or even if these fetishes will make it into the story… but in case they bother you:

  • Pet Play: Humans acting/thinking/behaving like animals.
  • Exhibition/Voyeurism: Nudity and sexual acts while in public.
  • Forniphilia: Humans being used as though they were furniture.
  • Humiliation: There will be lots of it (hopefully ;P)
  • ****: The story is already gearing up for this to happen.
  • Lactation: Milk from breasts (not sure it’ll be a big thing, though)
  • ****: This is a mind control story. Sorry, but it will happen.
  • Urination: I might come up with a scenario where I can make this seem somewhat erotic in a pseudo-humiliating way… but this also weirds me out enough to where it might just be vaginal juice/lubricants instead.
  • Other: I can’t think of other fetishes that might be off-putting now, but I will try to add/update the list as I go on. Let me know if I missed anything, though.

Anyway, I enjoyed varying aspects of both stories: skip the remainder of this author's note to avoid spoilers… please.

Spoilers:

Duduvar:

  • Frequently manipulated and adjusted the awareness settings.
  • Girl's point of view.
  • Alice’s personality was more passionate and loving with David before and during her customizations.
  • Gem girls, I plan to re-include this and possibly develop other apps.
  • Other: various punishments/customizations/story scenarios unique to Duduvar’s storyline.

Neo_Kenka’s:

  • Unique characters like Ivette and Ginger.
  • Achievements and Avatar gems.
  • The way the assistant principal started punishing students and faculty.
  • The Succubus seems to have a more substantial presence in the story and manipulates things behind the scenes.
  • Other: various punishments/customizations/story scenarios unique in Neo_Kenka’s storyline.

I will try to incorporate various elements from both storylines, all the while changing things up and adding new stuff for a “new and fresh” experience.

I hope to do some of the following:

  • Seeing through other characters' perspectives on various events and oddities.
  • Be careful what you wish for… things won’t always go as planned and may get out of hand.
  • New apps, like custom girls
  • Surprise me: There are also a few other “secrets” that I want to add, but I feel it’d be best seen only once they’re fully realized.

The first chapter or two will loosely follow what Dudavar’s storyline involves. Still, I will start developing the story to feel new and unique throughout said chapters, adding new scenes, playing around with gem usage, and ultimately taking a life of its own.

I welcome any ideas and suggestions for improving my story writing. I’m hoping you might go easy on me as I’m still trying to figure this out.

I’m also more than open to others splinting off of my story arch, creating new ideas, or reusing anything I may come up with.

Lastly, given that I’m attempting to reuse various elements from both writers, I encourage you to read their stories first and give them a thumbs up if you like them.

I do not claim any credit for anything other writers already use, nor am I sure how credit should be distributed, but most of my ideas come from Duduvar and Neo_Kenka.

Anyway, thanks again for taking the time to read these notes.

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