Author's Notes

I just wanted to make a few quick remarks about this story. I recently played it on Porngameshub and truly enjoyed it. The characters were distinct, the models were attractive, and the story was really cool. Upon getting to the end of the current update I went to look for the Patreon of the creator and found it inactive. I was saddened to know that I would never know the resolution of the game, and decided that if it has been abandoned I would write my own ending to the story and trying to get some attention to this game and the unique story.

I promise I am making no attempt to claim that this game is my own work, nor do I ever plan to take any credit or profit for this, I just thought it was a cool story and hope you do to. I know it is a bit of wish casting, but I almost hope the original creator jojo3d sees this and feels there is enough interest to continue development on the game. For the time being I will be making a few quick changes, just my preferences, so there will be a some difference between this story and the game itself.

I may update this chapter as I continue to go through the game summarizing what happens, removing plot lines that I don't see a benefit too and once I get to where the game "ends" and start to craft my own narrative.

Currently there are only a few changes:

1. Veronica is a friend of the main character's dad in the game but I made them a friend of their mom to avoid any suspicion of what I call "The landlady" problem where games or stories try to work around potential themes that some enjoy and others detest. Here Veronica can't be his mom because his mom is back across the country with his dad, so landlady problem solved.
2. I changed Valerie's name to Joy. Only because I confused the two of them constantly when playing the game. Veronica & Valerie already look so much alike and the similar "V" names drove me a little nuts, so now she is Joy. If that bothers you, sorry.

That's it for now (as I've only written 2 chapters) but I will come back to this as I continue through the story.

Thanks for reading!

-Harv