Author's Note -Blink

1. Feedback will be appreciated

This is my first ever work, I'm writing this note in hopes that I will improve in the future. and to reach out to you readers.

I ask every one of my readers to provide me feedback to my writing.

So if you feel something is boring. Some paragraph is clunky, I should do this or that. If you have some ideas, some new scenarios in mind or even some thrilling events that can further elevate this story. Or some suggestions for a new story, anything at all. Please let me know.

Please let me know via comments or personal message. I'll try to implement those ideas or suggestions as best as I can. I hope to improve my writing, my vocabulary and expand my imagination with your help.

2. Chapter addition

I've started writing on CHYOA not just to write a linear story-line. I want you guys to add some chapters on your own to make it a game where Amelia might get saved, might find true love. Marcus might start to understand Amelia's perspective, etc.

I've made it so that adding new chapters by anyone doesn't require my approval.
You all can add your touch as you wish, just write your first name at the end of the title [Eg: Title -Name]

I would like to see this worm get all your colors added around it. So it can fly like a butterfly. [Why's this so cringe? Answer: It was my first thought...]