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Chapter 16 by WBD
What was it like when he immerged?
A brighter blue coloured chamber with tones of other eggs inside
Jacks egg like spherical form descended till the end of whatever internal pipe this was, then squeezing out the end with a pop to fall into some place filled to the brim with other future children like him. He was squashed in and more orbs like him had came where he had come from since piling on top of him and pushing him against the membrane of the edge of this containment place. 'Oh' he remembered, he was now inside his dads 'uterine sack' as she called it, a ball less ball sack ironically filled with eggs of spherical nature and his sack the one he was in had a blue tint, it let in lots of light and seemed packed with others. Putting that together Jacks mind even in a form where it shouldn't even have a brain yet could figure out he was going to become a male insect man thing. His new home for an unknown amount of time was now full, all the boys had crammed in there were more than a lot there were tones of eggs fertilized to become male. Jack could see out the walls of his sack confinement, it seemed as though the thing below the males crotch was a tank filled with liquid of some kind and since the eggs had filled his nuts the sacks now hung lower submerged into the water?. It was warm and something about the container it was in was making it vibrate gently, the feeling was nice? Being warm and massaged for a bit, but the thinness and transparency of the walls let in light and even thought he wasn't a being just yet it felt to Jack like the light wouldn't let him sleep keeping him awake restlessly. Naturally he wasn't asleep anyways as an egg, it was just a feeling he didn't actually know if the other male eggs felt it also. He looked up to see the mans penis shadow and the woman doing stuff, talking about stuff, the male occasionally moaning sexually.
It was spooky and kind of nice at the same time, a new mummy and daddy, only just really weird alien insectoid ones. He didn't really know much of what was going to go on, how long he would be in there and he didn't really have a sense of time either, his mother came and went at random, daddy moaned at random and things felt a bit sped up from his perspective, was he growing, he wasn't sure. Then at some point something happened, mummy had got daddy up, moved him to another room that was darker. Jack couldn't see well anymore but he smelled something weirdly good, he was hungry and tired and he wanted out of this place. He could hear daddy's moans and his new mummy's voice saying, "Its dead already, just stick your penis in already and let the boys out before they all burst out over the floor, push as many of them in as you can before that happens or they will just burst and fall out to die." Jack felt a shift and a need to go up, he wiggled his form even though it didn't move, he felt himself being squeezed up by the sack walls and at some stage he was **** back up the tube he came from, a slow journey out of it, out his dads dick and into some warm, fleshy space that kind of smelled like a mix of rotting flesh and shit and boy oh boy was it making him feel right at home for some reason. He was joined by a large proportion almost all of the numerous number of his egg brothers, but he heard a loud sexual moan again and something that sounded a bit like a water balloon bursting. His mind unable to relate or connect anything thought wise to this only feeling sleepy and hungry. After this the new dark location actually made him feel like he could rest but he also felt super hungry for some reason, but eventually he fell asleep dreaming of eating some delicious treat.
When he awoke he sat up? Wait he was alive again? The room was light too, seemed like there was him and a couple other boys either still asleep or doing the same as him. Wait he was not human anymore, feeling his face and then looking down at his now recognisably large but flaccid insect appendage like a big pink floppy worm on an other wise chitinous insectoid brown looking body. His skin if he could call it that felt so strange and also his vision too after he noticed it wasn't the same as before, it was different to what he remembered. Some of the awake boys were leaving threw an open door, others were touching each other up, some were still waking and others still asleep. None of them looked fully grown as such compared to the male he saw before, but they weren't child or egg stage if you could call it that they were smaller, malnourished adult males, young males that needed to taste something? get bigger, taller, get fat on food. Jack got up and looked around the room, there was a large kind of stain on the floor, reddish brown and a smaller stain at one point which was more a bluish cream colour. The room smelled kind of like shit but somehow nice like if he had fingered his ass an smelled it, but something stronger smelling came from outside. It was almost a smell that told him to go find it and grow up.
He ventured out the room, finding it only lead to a hallway leading outside. Once he left he saw he was no longer on earth anymore that was for sure, some alien world and close by a club which he seemed oddly drawn to.
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Jack and Kelly's excellent adventure
A spinoff of "changing the rules" by street0
(Changing the rules by street0) story line but just from one route, story follows Jack who downloads a app onto his phone that claims it can rewrite rules of the world. He is shocked to learn that it is real and it can. In this story Jack is a closet straight submissive with ideas of being in a more female lead world, various fetishes may occur depending on story branch. Idk I kinda just have ideas sometimes and write random rubbish.
Updated on Apr 26, 2026
by WBD
Created on Mar 27, 2025
by WBD
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