A Word from the Author

Hi everyone. Firstly, I’d like to thank everyone who’s read this story, especially those who have liked favourited or bookmarked it. Your support is appreciated.

This is my first attempt at erotica and as such I’ve learnt a lot writing it, especially the difference between fantasising a scenario and writing it. The major difference is the need to make every scene feel unique. That has been hampered by my choice of characters (I just chose 10 of my favourite models, but I have a type and they’re all relatively similar), and by several early decisions (primarily the creation of the super-orgasm to explain why the girls are willing to share you, and later the decision that denying a super-orgasm was a form of punishment). The feeling of repetitiveness has been further compounded by making this work story light.

As such I’ve decided to put this story on hiatus. I will return to it, because it’s my ultimate fantasy and because I have plans for future events (a visit to the doctor’s to register your 4 pregnant girlfriends, the recruitment of a midwife to join the household, and your birthday, celebrated with a 2-day orgy, each day a different theme).

In the meantime, I’ve been working on another story (Perverting St Perpetua’s). This has more variety, with women (in age, experience, ethnicity and body shape) and with scenes (in location, position, fetish). It’s also a genuine story. Also, because I’ve always thought single path stories don’t fulfil this site’s potential, it is a multi-path story managed through variables and conditional branches.

If you enjoyed this story, please try out this new one.