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Chapter 19 by 096831 096831

How do Luke and Olivia react to their sudden love making? Will someone find them with their pants down?

(Pause Button) Writer's Message to Readers

Hope people are enjoying my story thread so far. The mystery of the Breeding Passes is fun to explore.

Thank you Zoas Z for putting your story on CHYOA.

I actually remember reading Dave's Adventure with the Breeding Passes long ago on a different website. I always thought the story had great ideas and a lot of potential. Anyone can write someone visiting the Sunny Day Mall. I was disappointed that we never discovered the origins of the magical passes. So I am building my own branch thread to explore my ideas.

Please forgive editing mistakes and slow writing output. I am no professional.

I am building towards a town full of baby bumps and a magical explanation. But I want the journey to that end to be enjoyable. Please leave suggestions to my chapters, or better yet begin your own parallel adventures. I try to leave things a little open-ended. I also endeavor to ask questions at the end of each chapter to encourage new story branches or to get feedback. I like incorporating readers' suggestions in subsequent chapters.

Thank you Ghoul for all the comments. I have not forgotten about your vote to see Ellin first.

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