(Pause Button) Writer's Message to Readers

Hope people are enjoying my story thread so far. The mystery of the Breeding Passes is fun to explore.

Thank you Zoas Z for putting your story on CHYOA.

I actually remember reading Dave's Adventure with the Breeding Passes long ago on a different website. I always thought the story had great ideas and a lot of potential. Anyone can write someone visiting the Sunny Day Mall. I was disappointed that we never discovered the origins of the magical passes. So I am building my own branch thread to explore my ideas.

Please forgive editing mistakes and slow writing output. I am no professional.

I am building towards a town full of baby bumps and a magical explanation. But I want the journey to that end to be enjoyable. Please leave suggestions to my chapters, or better yet begin your own parallel adventures. I try to leave things a little open-ended. I also endeavor to ask questions at the end of each chapter to encourage new story branches or to get feedback. I like incorporating readers' suggestions in subsequent chapters.

Thank you Ghoul for all the comments. I have not forgotten about your vote to see Ellin first.