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Chapter 5
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Moot
What will happen when they get to the ride attraction?
Vanessa's new life...the ride!
The bowler suit woman bounced into the attraction entrance, followed by Vanessa who just walked in. There was a lady stood behind a gate. The gate was attached to a fence, where the track to the ride was on the other side. "Jane! We have a customer here who wants to ride!" The woman in the bowler suit bounced up and down with joy. "Oh really? That's a first!" The gate lady responded.
"Wait no no no I'm not here for this ride I'm here for something entirely different actually." Vanessa tried to clear up the confusion, there was no way she was getting on that ride. "Well that's a shame, was really hoping you'd be our first customer." The gate lady said, pulling a sad face. Vanessa was shocked that they'd had no customers, but she didn't care. "Yeah not really my problem, look a pink haired clown took my briefcase have you seen her?" Vanessa asked.
The gate lady paused to think, while making a subtle gesture with her head to Vanessa's head without her noticing. "Hmmm, nah haven't seen anyone like that sorry." She finally responded, giving Vanessa a big smile. "UUUGHH You people are fucking useless! Lying fucks! I'll find her by myself shall I!? Fucking hell!" Vanessa complained, her voice suddenly bellowing around the area.
Vanessa turned around to leave, but stopped dead in her tracks when a row of very large security guards blocked her only exit. "Yeah I wouldn't do that if I were you. See, here we have a policy that if you come all the way to the gate for a ride, the customer must ride that ride otherwise they are wasting everyone's time. And they also affect queue times when you people do that so it's beneficial." The gate lady explained.
Vanessa looked at the gate lady in shock. "What kinda dumb rule is that! If I don't wanna ride a ride anymore imma leave, plus how can it affect queue times when THERE AIN'T ONE!" Vanessa yelled back at the gate lady. "Ma'am, gonna need you to remain calm please, if you'd like to leave you can just pay the ride price and our lovely guards will let you past.
Vanessa suddenly changed her whole tone, money had gotten her out of every situation in her life so this was no problem at all. "Alright that's cool I'll get my purse--" Vanessa suddenly froze, as she felt her back jeans pocket she couldn't feel her purse. She frantically searched her whole body for her money, panicking as she realised that had been stolen too. "That fucking bitch took my money too! Ohhh when I find her...." Vanessa angrily told herself.
The gate lady desperately tried not to laugh, she couldn't believe that actually worked! Luck was on her side today, bit sadly not for Vanessa. "Well it looks like you'll be riding your new life then ma'am!" The gate lady told Vanessa.
Vanessa was **** to accept that she had to ride; I'll just have to suffer and get it over with, she thought. Vanessa was about to step through the gate when she was stopped a final time by the gate lady. "Ah ah ah! One last thing, you have to be naked to ride this!" She smirked, trying not to laugh at Vanessa's face.
Vanessa was completely stunned. "You're kidding me right? I'm not getting naked right here forget it!" Vanessa refused, folding her arms and looking away. "I'm afraid I'm not kidding, see the whole idea of this ride requires you to be naked, it does say it very clearly at the entrance but I'm sure you didn't read that. So yeah either you give me your clothes or the security guards call the cops!" The gate lady told Vanessa, she was gaining the upper hand and was loving every second of this.
Vanessa took a look at the guards, and then back at the gate lady. She didn't want to get naked and go on the ride, but the cops coming would be really bad seeing as she's trying to avoid a prison sentence. She let out a humongous sigh, before beginning to take her top off. "Fine, fuck it. This ride better be worth it! God I can't believe I'm doing this!" The bowler suit girl clapped and squealed with joy.
Vanessa took off all of her clothes and handed them to the gate lady. She stood with one hand on her wide hips and the other covering her big voluptuous boobs. She really was an amazing sight. "Well? What now?" She rudely asked. The gate lady dumped Vanessa's clothes down a metal chute that was next to her. "Don't worry you'll get your clothes back at the end of the ride, but now you can come on in!" The gate lady explained, opening the gate and gesturing for Vanessa to come through.
The sexy naked woman strutted through the gate, her hand still covering her tits. "Alright now stand here and we'll see what cart you get!" The gate lady pointed to a white circle on the platform next to the empty track. Vanessa did as she was told, she was just praying for it all to be over soon.
Blue lasers suddenly appeared all over Vanessa's face, something was scanning her. "This is really cool by the way, what that's doing is determining what your new life will be. To put it lightly, this scan calculates what lies inside, as the ride is never the same for any person. It is constantly changing depending on who is riding it!" The gate lady explained to Vanessa, who was already confused.
The scan finished, causing loud rumbles behind the attraction walls. "That would be the ride changing! You've got a new life waiting for ya! Now let's see what your cart will be, and more importantly, what your new life will be!"
What cart arrives?
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Downfall
Vanessa's sentence
Vanessa Sinclair is your typical rich CEO, who only cares about her money and is rude to her employees. But when she is caught stealing money from employee wages, her life is about to be changed for good with a new kind of sentence.
Updated on Mar 10, 2026
by LittleBoyLeo
Created on Dec 3, 2018
by Moot
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