Chapter 23 by fantaghiro
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Tommi
Sarah is remarkably methodical in her analysis of possible wishes. She divides the changes she wants to test into broad categories with sub-division (Age, occupations, persona, relationship with Tom, eroticism & kinks, "ripple effects" on Tom). She and Tom go back and forth for awhile. Sarah really enjoyed being younger, wild and free so she wants to try that again - but the real test she wants it to see just how much they can affect Tom with a carefully worded wish. And she wants him to have fun too. She writes down the exact wording they settle on.
Tom held the coin tightly, feeling the familiar tingle that always ran through his chest when a wish was about to manifest. Sarah stood beside him, her eyes alight with anticipation, fingers brushing his arm, impatient. “Just…be careful,” she murmured, “I want this to be fun for both of us, really.”
Tom exhaled and nodded. “I’ve got it. I promise.”
He pressed the coin between his palms, read her words: "I wish Sarah be transformed into a 20-year-old college student, have a fun and wild time, living in a women-only dorm with me as her roommate who is her secret admirer. This wish should end after 2 weeks, returning us back to ourselves."
The world shifted. A sudden warmth, a pulling sensation, almost like being stretched in every direction at once, engulfed him. Colors sharpened, textures changed, and the reflection of himself in the mirror beside the coin shimmered, then morphed. Where he had been, middle-aged, familiar, a slightly tired version of himself, now stood Tommi: a youthful woman in her early twenties, petite, but with a body full of energy and feminine grace. The long, glossy hair framed a face that was unmistakably young and vibrant, eyes wide with curiosity and mischief.
He staggered back, catching the edge of the table for balance. Tommi’s body moved differently—hips swaying naturally, shoulders lighter, arms longer in proportion to the new frame. The first startling revelation hit him: instincts he didn’t consciously recognize surged forward—Tommi’s reflexes, her preferences, even her habitual gestures were now overriding his.
And yet…Tom was still there. Faintly. Like a whisper in a crowded room, his consciousness could peek through, feel his thoughts mingling with this new persona. It was disorienting, electrifying, and in a way deeply erotic.
“Woah…” he breathed, flexing unfamiliar fingers, running them along Tommi’s slender arms. His voice, now hers, carried a higher, softer timbre, making him shiver with its novelty. “Oh…oh, this is…intense.”
A giggle escaped from somewhere deep in him—Tommi’s. It wasn’t just a sound; it was a feeling, an attitude. Playful, teasing, full of attraction for Sarah. He realized that even at this moment, Tommi’s heart was racing in ways that mirrored the crush she had on her roommate. And Sarah—standing across the dorm room, a gleam of delight in her eyes—was watching him.
“You look…perfect,” Sarah said, her smile teasing. “So…so obviously your new self. I can already tell you’re going to make a great admirer.”
Tom—no, Tommi—felt a rush of heat in response. The thought patterns of Tommi were so overwhelming now that it was almost impossible to distinguish which desires were his and which were hers. He wanted to approach Sarah, to flirt, to reach out—but a small voice in the back of his mind reminded him that old Tom could still act consciously. A subtle tug of awareness, a reminder: he could choose to speak as himself, if he wished, but the easier, more natural path was to simply be Tommi.
“Uh…okay,” Tommi murmured, brushing a hand through her hair nervously. Her instincts leaned forward, heart fluttering, but a quiet Tom tugged at the edges, sensing the thrill of this duality. The layered attraction was dizzying.
Sarah took a step closer, playful but commanding. “Come here, Tommi. Let’s see if you can manage being subtle. You’re supposed to be my secret admirer, remember?”
The words alone sent a shiver down his spine. Tommi—he—leaned in instinctively, wanting to approach, to confess admiration with the perfect blend of teasing and yearning. The merging of personalities meant that each glance, each step toward Sarah, was a cocktail of Tom’s conscious awareness and Tommi’s compulsive, heartfelt infatuation.
“What…what do I do?” Tommi asked softly, testing the voice, the persona, the feeling of being someone else while still knowing he was Tom.
“Just…be her,” Sarah said simply. “Feel it. Let yourself live her life—but I want to see you struggle a little too. If you try to talk as Tom, I’ll notice.”
The tension was immediate. Every instinct screamed to merge fully, to be Tommi completely, to let the persona take over. And every fraction of consciousness that remained as Tom whispered reminders: you can step back, you can speak, you can assert yourself. But why would you, when she feels so…right?
Tommi’s cheeks flushed. She—I—took a tentative step toward Sarah, small but deliberate, aware of the constant duality humming beneath the surface. Each word and gesture carried an undertone of admiration, desire, and playfulness—both Tom’s and Tommi’s merged seamlessly.
Sarah’s laugh was low and approving. “Good. Very good. You’re learning fast. Now, let’s see…can you leave me a note later? Something sweet, maybe a little flirty, so I can find it after class? You’ll have to pretend you’re hiding it, but I know it’s coming from your heart—or hers.”
Tommi’s pulse quickened. The idea of secretly delighting Sarah, sending notes from the heart of another persona, thrilled him in ways he hadn’t imagined possible. And yet…he could feel Tom’s awareness, the thrill of seeing himself swept up in this dual experience.
For the first time, he realized the full erotic potential of the coin. It wasn’t just physical transformation. It wasn’t just a mind-altering wish. It was a layered, psychological, teasing, playful, deeply erotic game of identity, in which each party could explore, manipulate, and delight in the duality of selves. And with careful navigation, neither would be harmed—unless, of course, they wanted to push the boundaries.
Sarah clapped her hands together softly, stepping closer. “Welcome to your new life, Tommi,” she said with a grin. “Now…go live it. I’ll be watching.”
Tommi shivered, a delicious mix of fear, arousal, and overwhelming pleasure flooding through her. And for the first time, he realized just how blurred the lines between himself and Tommi could be—and how intoxicating that uncertainty would feel, day after day, encounter after encounter.
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Wishes for my Wife
A tale of transformation
A man receives a wishing coin but can only make wishes that affect his wife.
Updated on May 17, 2026
by Sinburn
Created on May 17, 2019
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