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Chapter 20 by Mr Nice Guy Mr Nice Guy

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The Unraveling of Lisa

There was no time in the void — only pulse. Only pattern.

Lisa floated inside it, wrapped in threads of colour that hummed like distant choirs. Each strand shimmered with potential, and she could feel them moving through her, brushing her skin, singing in frequencies that her ears could not hear but her bones understood. She was not body, not really — not anymore. Just awareness, intention, and the trembling ache of becoming.

The lattice spread before her like a vast living map: veins of light, curving and intersecting, an infinity of futures folded into one another. She had learned how to move along it, to push gently at certain junctions and feel the consequences ripple outward.

Two points glowed brighter than the rest. They drew her, called to her like magnets through fog. They pulsed with possibility, feeding each other's light — two small hearts trembling in the dark. Even when she couldn't see them, she could feel them. They were her, she was them. In them her essence was imbued, split between the points, growing, thriving.

Lisa reached for them.

Her fingers were not fingers, but filaments of self. She wove them carefully through the glowing lines, coaxing, tightening, binding the two points closer. It felt right — as if their connection was a door she was meant to open. Each time she drew them together, she could feel the lattice bend, reality stretching, the web tightening around her will.

And then — the spark.

For them, it would be a moment. A blink. For her, it was eternity.

The light surged through the lattice like a living tide, a flash so pure and fierce that it cut through her, filling her with a soundless scream of joy and terror. The lattice trembled, and she felt herself pulled into it — not entirely, but enough that her edges blurred, her essence thinning like silk unraveling.

She was pouring through.

For the first time, she felt weight — not memory, not matter, but gravity, the promise of a world that could hold her. Sensations flooded through. Smells, textures.

Names.

Wyatt and Gary.

Names so real she could taste them.

When the portal snapped closed, silence rushed back in.

Lisa drifted in the dark once more, gasping though she had no lungs. The glow around her was fainter now; her form, translucent. She was less than she had been — but freer. The void no longer held her as tightly.

"Almost," she whispered, though there was no air to carry the sound. "Almost there."

She could feel the echo of the two bright points, of Wyatt and Gary, pulsing faintly across the lattice — their connection alive, their spark a crack in the wall of this place.

One more like that, she thought. One more and I'll be free.

And for the first time, she felt something that might have been hope.

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