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Chapter 8 by CorpseKing CorpseKing

What's next?

The Queen's Commands

Marsha had deepened the trance with Bruce Wayne till she was ready. To test her power, she asked, "Brucie, dear, tell Marsha your biggest secret!"

As she expected his answer was obvious, "I am secretly Batman, my Queen. After my parent's ****, I have pledge all of my wealth to fight crime. I have trained both my mind and body, to upheld that pledge."

She loved how he added 'My Queen' to his answer. But now she was ready, with full control over his mind, to change it completely. Change it in her own image. So she spoke to the entrance man,

"Listen to me. From now on, that is no longer you pledge. Your pledge is to loyalty and devotion to me, your Queen of Diamonds. You are so in love with me, you would do anything from the noblest deed to the darkest deprave action. You would lie, steal, cheat, betray or kill anyone for me. You see me as the person woman, the woman of your sexest fantasies. Your wealth, skills, and eveything else is devoted to Marsha the Queen of Diamonds.

As such, you will willingly aid me in my crimes. Help me steal all the diamonds I could want. From this moment on, you will obey any and all commands I give you. You will think, feel, believe, and do whatever I ask of you. No matter if it's moral or not, all that matters is whether or not I want it.

From now on, I am not only the Queen of Diamonds, but Queen of Crime. And whether or not you are Bruce Wayne or Batman, you are now my perfect partner. The new King of Diamonds and Crime, subservant to his perfect queen.

Understand that, Brucie?"

"Yes, my beloved beautiful Queen. I live to serve you." was the monotone answer, as Marsha was deciding whether or not to wake him, or add more commands.

Wake him, or keep him under?

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