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Chapter 17
by
johnsohn
Who's your choice?
The Eastern European
The blonde pulls me in, her isolation a magnet against the scattered buzz of the deck. High resistance, the app notes, starred like a warning label, but that's the thrill etched into my veins. The fight to unwind her. I weave through the lounge chairs, sandaled feet padding soft against the sun-warmed concrete, my approach angled casual as if I owned the path. She's claimed her spot under a striped umbrella, legs stretched out on the lounger, skin still damp as she thumbs through a magazine with that precise flick of her fingers. The teal bikini clings to her narrow frame, highlighting the subtle curve of her hips and the flat plane of her stomach, her pale hair drying in loose strands against her shoulders. Up close, her features sharpen. High cheekbones, a small mouth set in a line that suggests impatience, those sharp eyes the color of storm clouds flicking up as I pause a few feet away.
"Excuse me," I say, my voice low and even, sliding into the empty lounger beside hers without waiting for an invitation. The app hums faintly in my pouch, camera subtly framing her through the thin screen. "Mind if I grab this spot? The crowd by the bar's getting a little loud." It's a neutral opener, the kind that blends into the heat haze around us, but I watch her reaction close. How her fingers pause mid-turn, her gaze lifting slow to assess me, cool and appraising. There's an accent in her reply almost before she speaks it, the words clipped with that Eastern edge.
"Is fine," she murmurs, her voice a soft burr undercut by resentment, like the English feels borrowed. She shifts slightly, drawing one toned leg up, the teal fabric pulling taut across her thigh. The app overlays her profile deeper now. Viktoriya, 27, resistance at 75% and climbing, libido wound tight beneath the surface, weave potential explosive if I thread it right. Born in Riga, works as a translator downtown. Details that paint her discreet world, alone in the city, her isolation here on the deck a deliberate retreat.
I settle back, towel draped over my lap to mask the phone's glow, letting the silence stretch a beat longer than comfortable. "Hot one today," I add, tilting my head toward the shimmering pool. "You been in long?" She glances at the water, her lips pressing thinner, and there's a faint nod, her eyes darting away. Guarded. The power thrums warmer in my chest, addictive and precise, as I angle the phone lower, whispering the first command to the interface. Viktoriya, a subtle warmth begins to build low in your belly, drawing your thoughts to the stranger beside you, his presence stirring something unspoken.
The app pulses once, confirmation silent, and I see it land. The slightest hitch in her breathing, her fingers tightening on the magazine's edge. Her thighs shift together under the lounger, almost imperceptible, but there in the flush creeping up her neck. "Not long," she says, her accent thickening just a touch, as if the words cost more effort now. "Work ends early today. Needed... air." Her eyes flick to me again, lingering longer this time on my arms, the line of my jaw, before she looks away, snapping the magazine shut with unnecessary ****. The resistance ticks down in the app. 70%, the weave beginning to fray her edges.
I lean in a fraction, close enough to catch the faint scent of chlorine mingled with her sunscreen, something sharp and citrusy. "Translator, right? Must keep you sharp, languages twisting around each other like riddles." It's a guess based on the app's skim, but it hooks her. Her posture straightens, surprise flickering in those eyes. She sets the magazine aside, turning toward me more fully, her small breasts rising with a quick inhale. The warmth I've planted is working deeper now, her knee brushing the edge of my lounger by accident, or not. "Yes," she admits, the word softer, almost ****. "English is... tricky. Latvian simpler." There's a pause, her gaze dropping to my hands, resting casual on the towel, and I feel the pull sharpening, the multi-weave humming as if Sarah and Laura's threads echo faintly in the distance, amplifying this one.
The sun arcs higher, baking the air thick, and I send the second command, voice silent in my mind. Viktoriya, your skin tingles where the sun touches, but it's his nearness that makes it ache, imagining his fingers tracing the lines of your bikini, testing what yields. Her reaction blooms immediate. A soft exhale, her hand lifting to adjust the strap on her shoulder, revealing the pale triangle of skin beneath. Resistance at 60%, libido spiking, her body language opening just a crack. Leaning forward, elbows on her knees, as if inviting the conversation deeper. "You know Riga?" she asks, surprising us both, her voice laced with that burr and something warmer underneath. The challenge unfolds slow, deliberate, and I smile, the power twisting tighter, ready to pull harder.
What's next?
Mindweave Awakening
Seize Minds, Forge Your Harem
Awaken to the Mindweave Protocol, a mysterious app that grants you real mind control powers. In this first-person, story-arc driven tale of corruption, start small with neighbors and strangers, issue lewd commands to twist wills, build a devoted harem, and climb toward godlike dominance. Developmental changes unfold as your influence grows, but failure risks unraveling your own mind. No limits. Your commands shape the darkness.
Updated on Dec 31, 2025
by johnsohn
Created on Dec 19, 2025
by johnsohn
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