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Chapter 3
by marvelfan
What does Susan Richards do?
Sue Flees
With all her might Sue took up a run. She needed every ounce of strength so she reappeared. The stress of using her powers would not help her flight away. She heard the large beast cackle mightly in the air. She ran as fast as her feet would carry. She needed to get to some open area to battle the monster. He was too quick, and to powerful to fight through trees. Further, if he caught her, he cold hypnotize her easily.
Susan ran as fast as her feet would carry. She finally came to the mouth of a cave at the bottom of an ominous mountain. Words she could not understand were sprawled in the walls. Though she was weery of entering it was her only hope.
Sauron watched the helpless beauty enter the cave. He dared not follow. The evil inside that cave was far to great, even for the mighty mutate. He surmised that soon Sue would sense this as well and flee the cave. So he perched upon an ancient tree and waited. He had time to secure this female. All the time in the world. It was his mating season, and this female would be perfect to carry his offspring. He would not let her go.
Susan walked further into the cave. It became pitch black. She needed light. A torch would be nice. She had trainig in survival tactics and could like a torch with the fallen wood around her. But there was no material she could use. Her suit was flame retardant to high levels. Then she realized she had some material. Reluctantly, she stripped down and pulled off her bra and panties. She wrapped them around a large stick. Using two rocks she was able to start a small fire. Then she pushed her garments into the fire. "Finally...some light", she thought. She was aware after putting on her tattered unifrom that her right breeast was showing. She tried her best to cover as she walked further.
"Oh dear!" Sue cried out as she stumbled over the remains of a fallen solider. Moving the torch she saw the bodies and skeletons of many beings. Not all of them were human. This frightened Susan. She used her powers to go invisible, but the torch light remained. At least she didn't have to cover her breast.
As she walked she came to the entrance of a large grotto. Above on the rocks in large letters, cut deep into the rock, words of warning Sue could not understand shined without light. If she knew the old Hyborian, she would have seen that this was the temple of an elder god, and all who entered would die. She still marched forward. Skulls and bones lined the room. In the center was a large gaping hole. All around the room were pole holes, probably for candles. Sue moved the torch along the walls, and noticed the paintings. The art depicted large battles, and many incantations. As she moved along the wall she came to a centerpiece. A large snake was fighting hundreds of soliders and wizards!
A voice spoke loudly, "Welcome back Sssssssusan!" Sue looked around to see where the voice was coming from. It was as if the voice were inside her head.
"Excuse me," she said startled, "Is someone here!"
The voice spoke, "I have been here thousandssss of yearssss. I am older than all your godsssss!"
The voice was all too familiar now. Susan began to back away from the wall. She almost fell into the gaping hole. She screeched when to large red eyes appeared above the paintings. "SET!!!!" she cried out in fear. This was a mighty being who had once possessed Susan and many other heroines in order to make them his brides.
"Yes my former fiancee," he hissed, "I have waited for your return! We never did get married!"
Susan wanted to run, but her gaze was transfixed on the eyes and she could not move. "The others will come for me Set!"
"I doubt it my dear!" the voice permeated Sue's mind, she tried to close her eyes to block it out. "You're not even in the Savage Land any longer!"
When Susan opened her eyes she was aghast that new torches surronded the pit. Light penetrated the room. She looked down in fear at the once black whole. A bright orange light burned from below.
"SSSSSussan," Set hissed in her head, "Your clothesss are tattered. Please wear the nice gown!"
Sue turned to see a gown lying flat on an alter that was not there before. It was close to the pit. "I will never wear that gown again," Susan protested.
"But it looksss sssso niccce on you!" Set's soothing voice hid his evil.
Susan was livid, "These mind games will no longer work on me, I am free of your spells". Even as she spoke Susan was already undressing. She seemed oblivious to her own actions, "You hold no sway over me demon!" Susan's words fell flat, though she believed them. Her body was working on its own. She stood naked before the glowing eyes, and the pit exploded with fire. Her body seemed to linger and allow the red eyes to leer even as Sue remained defiant. "I hate you for what you did to me!" She didn't even look down as she pulled the white gown from the alter and slipped into the garment. This time it was much tighter and allowed Set to see the lovely curves of her form.
"You have kept yourssssself well my dear, I am impressed!" He hissed. "Lie down my love!"
"I will never submit to your will again Set!" Sue remained defiant. Again, her body acted upon its own, and Sue took no note as her hands pullled her upon the alter. She turned so that her legs faced the glowing firey pit.
"Would I but wed you here!" He leered down on the altar. "But my true form is not in this temple. Just my spirit!"
Sue still gazed at the eyes, "What do you want from me?"
Set laughed, "You are the one who returned to me Sssssusssan!" The eyes glowed brighter, "What is it that you want?"
Susan shouted, "To leave this place and be free!"
"Ssssso be it!" Set hissed louder than ever. The walls of the cave boomed. Susan could not move as the firey pit burned brighter. Her eyes finally averted Set's gaze and took in her predicament.
She was on the alter in the gown, now spread eagle. "OH MY GOD!" Susan cried, "What is happening?"
"Your dessstiny!" Set's voice spoke. This time, the voice was not in her head but in the room. Sue gasped as the head of a large snake appeared out of the pit.
"No! Please!" Sue begged. The snake god took no mind of her cries. He wished his actual form was in the room. This was merely an astral projection, yet it would do complete the spell. The massive snake emerged from the pit and wrapped around the alter. It's tail flailed in the air. Susan begged and pleaded to be released. Her body seemed to understand what was coming next, and her legs parted as the snake's tail slithered between them.
Sue's eyes went wide as the tail penetrated her womanhood. It was not tender. Though her own juices and the snakes body allowed an easy entrance. "MY GOD!" Sue cried out. There was no pain. Only exctasy for the woman, as the snake tail cintinued to enter her. Inch by inch the snake god entered her. "OH GOD! OH GOD! I'm cumming!" Her body rocked. The feeling inside her sent her to levels she could never imagine.
The snake was not finished. Set continued to enter. Each inch brought Sue a new orgasm. When more than half of the snake was inside her she was shocked to see her stomach was not growing. It was as if the being was disappearing inside her. Finally, with a plop, the snake was gone inside her gaping vagina.
Her breathing had subsided. Her mind returned to her, "What have you done to me?"
Set's voice again hissed, now louder in her mind, "It ssssseemed like you enjoyed it! You called me God many timesssss!"
"You are not my God!" Sue said forcefully.
"I am now!" Set bellowed. Sue's stomach burned like fire. The pain was unbearable. "You are now my highest priestess, and you will free me from my captors!"
"Never!" Susan bellowed still trying to fight. She watched as the dress itself began to slink around her body. The material changed into scales right before her eyes. It wrapped around her breasts, and one piece slinked to her crotch and wrapped around her body. It was a snakeskin armor. It barely covered her huge tits, and ample ass. It was more bikini than armor. She looke to her arms to see protective arm bands, and on her legs were high-heeled snake-skinned boots.
Sue was finally able to stand on her own. She tried to pull off the snake-skin breast plate. She found it to be painful and even noticed blood trickle down. "That is part of you now Sssusan!"
"Get it off!" she shouted tearing at the material. She found no way of removing the armor.
"I will when you release me!" Set bellowed. "You only have seven days!"
Sue sighed, "What happens then?"
"The skin will envelop you, and you will truly be my bride! Now go!"
Susan walked towards the entrance of the cave. At the mouth were several items. She grabbed them. A large sword. Bow and Arrows. And a necklace. "What is this?"
Set's voice remained in her head, "It is an amulet that gives its wearere the power to turn into a snake!"
Sue chuffed, "I'll never use this!"
Set laughed, "You will, and you will enjoy it! There is no escaping me Ssssusan! You are to be my bride! Now free me so we can finish the ceremony and consummate our union!"
"I'm going to kill you Sssset!" Sue said deifantly. She realized that she hissed a little. Time was running out! She had to do this task.
Sue in the Hyborian Age
Invisible Woman in the Savage Land (Adult Story)
Sue gets trapped in the Savage Land (View if 18+)
Sue Richards the invisible woman is marooned in the savage land away from the team
Updated on Feb 19, 2025
by madmaniac
Created on Jul 22, 2006
by Skrulllord
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