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Chapter 5
by Skrulllord
Can Sauron control himself?
Sauron waits for more changes
Susan was becoming furious. She hated staying in this reptile's kingdom. After the battle with Kazar's troops, Sauron had not let her leave. A cadre of guards followed her throughout the kingdom. She thought she would get used to their presence, but it was their stares that troubled her. It seemed these beasts were actually leering at her lustfully. 'Why would they care for a human' Sue thought. To her, she had not changed even one bit. It was part of Sauron's plan. The longer she remained and believed all was fine, the more changes would take effect. Since the battle, the changes increased double-fold. Soon it would be too late to reverse the effects.
She had decided that maybe visiting Kazar might help her predicament. As she strode through the dungeons, the guards let her into his cell.
"Hello Kazar." she greeted him.
Kazar spat in her direction. "What do you want lizard woman." His anger was palpable. "You will get no information from me."
Confused Sue asked. "What? I...Huh?"
Kazar turned from her. "Has your mate not told you that I will not speak?"
Sue shook her head. "Mate? I think you have me mistaken for someone..."
Kazar yelled. "No more mind games. I have heard the rumors of Sauron's powerful new mate. And should have believed the talk."
"But Kazar. It is me, Susan Richards, the invisible woman."
Now Kazar was confused. "No more games. Tell your mate I will not speak."
With that Sue left, a strange feeling came over her. She went quickly to Sauron's throne room. The "king" was in talks with his generals. He looked up at the new Sue and smiled. "Leave us" he told the generals and guards.
"I wish to leave beast." Sue shouted.
At this Sauron let out a loud cry that turned to laughter. "Leave, and why would you do that." He walked toward her. She stepped back frightened.
Her resolve stayed with her. "Return me Sauron. This game of yours is over."
With that Sauron looked deep into her eyes. "Return to what. The humans would attack you. They hate our kind."
The word "our" made Sue's stomach cringe. "What do you mean "our kind".
Sauron laughed mightily again. "Did you really believe that you were only here to help stop an uprising? No my beauty. You shall be my Queen. Together we will rule the Savage Land. No longer are you the human you thought you were. BEHOLD!" he cried. And with that, her mental blocks fell. He followed his outstretched hand that pointed to a mirror. Sauron allowed her time to take in the shock.
The image that reflected back at her was almost too much for Susan to comprehend. Her form was no longer that of a blonde human. The creature that stood before her was reptilian in nature. Her skin was green as the other Pterons. Yet, not the same. She touched the outer areas of her body, which were now covered in scales. She wanted to throw up. The inner part of her skin was smooth and yellow tinted. As she gasped, she beheld her teeth that were now fangs. She touched the sharp ends and cried. That is when she saw the large yellow eyes as they welled up with tears. She put her hands over her face and felt the claw-like talons as they pinched her head.
"SSSSaruon! What have you done to me?" Even her voice was reptilian in nature. She spoke with a long hiss, brought about by her long forked tongue.
Sauron put his hands on her shoulders. Her mind was too caught up in the shock to fight. "I have made you perfect." He whispered. "You’re stronger and more beautiful than ever.”Your breasts are larger, your ass firmer. Why you are the perfect mate. Though not quite a pteron."
"No. SSStop sssaying that!" she finally lashed out and pushed him away. She ran out of the room and down to the dungeons. She opened Kazar's cell and fell to her knees.
"Pleassse!" she begged. "You must help me. He hassss turned me into thisss!"
Kazar stood back. Maybe she was telling the truth. No. He thought. This was a mind game. He spit at her. "You are Sauron's whore!"
Anger welled in Susan. An anger not felt in a long time. She stood up and the fire in her eyes scared the human captive. She lashed out with a **** blast sending him against the wall. "Foolissssh human!" she cried out. She saw the man writhing on the floor. 'They are so weak' she reasoned. 'Wait, what am I thinking'. With that, she knew she had to flee. With her powers back, she went invisible and decided she would slip out of the castle and back into the jungle.
What happens next to Sue?
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Invisible Woman in the Savage Land (Adult Story)
Sue gets trapped in the Savage Land (View if 18+)
Sue Richards the invisible woman is marooned in the savage land away from the team
Updated on Feb 19, 2025
by madmaniac
Created on Jul 22, 2006
by Skrulllord
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