Chapter 7 by Unknown7

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Rey tries to steal a spaceship from the Niima Outpost

Rey snuck into the Niima Outpost. She knew the Millennium Falcon was still there. She tried to sneak ship but was caught by Unkar Plutt's men. They took her to Plutt.

"So, you're trying to steal my ships, are you?" said Plutt, "take her to the whipping post"

Rey was dragged over to the whipping post that Plitt had installed outside months ago to deal with thieves.

Rey herself had seen Plutt whip thieves before. The last one got forty lashes. Rey's clothes were torn off, leaving her naked as her wrists were tied to the post. Plutt came behind her with a whip.

"Listen up!" shouted Plutt to the crowd, "this scavenger tried to steal one of my ships. Its time you see what I do thieves around here"

Plutt brought the whip down hard on Rey's back.

CRACK!

Rey screamed in pain.

CRACK!

Rey was already sobbing.

CRACK!

The girl shrieked in agony.

CRACK!

"Please stop!" begged Rey.

CRACK!

"I'm sorry!" Rey cried, "I won't steal from you again"

CRACK!

At this point Rey pissed herself. Some of Platt's men laughed at Rey's misfortune. Rey herself didn't care. She was in too much pain.

CRACK!

The whipping took its tole on Rey. She had down collapsed, the ropes round her wrists were the only thing holding her up.

CRACK!

Rey was on the verge of passing out.

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The Defeated

What if the heroes (or the occasional villains) were defeated.