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Chapter 39
by
Mr Nice Guy
What's next?
Reward System
The engine idled in the driveway, the purr of the luxury sedan doing exactly what it was designed to do, giving its owner a sense of comfort and peace. Evan sat in the driver's seat, hands resting loosely on the wheel, eyes unfocused as he stared through the windshield at the front of the house. The familiar shape of it grounded him in a way the rest of the day hadn't quite managed to. Classes had come and gone in a blur, conversations half-heard, notes half-written. His mind was never fully on the moment, but instead fixed, at least partially, on the evening's event.
Normally, by the time he got home, there was a weight to him. A kind of dull exhaustion that settled in his shoulders and refused to leave. A long day of classes, combined with a long bus commute both ways, usually meant he needed time to recharge when he got home.
But not today. Today, there was something else instead. A lightness. Energy. He felt rested. Relaxed. Maybe it was because he'd been able to drive, cutting his combined commute by almost an hour.
What he suspected, though, was that the source of his relaxation had a more mystical origin. The potion had, after all, caused him to feel focused, fully recharged after just a few hours of sleeping in the same bed with Stacy. He remembered his drive to school, how he should have been running on fumes, but instead had a clear head, a rested and responsive body. Was it too much to imagine that the magic would give him the same gift when he came home to her?
A reward.
For good behaviour.
The idea didn't sit well.
His grip tightened slightly on the wheel as his mind wandered to who was waiting for him inside: Stacy.
The response in his body was instant. A quick, sharp pulse of heat low in his groin, familiar now in a way that made his jaw clench. Not overwhelming. Not enough to take control. Just enough to remind him it was there. Waiting.
Persistent.
"Yeah, not now," he muttered under his breath.
The last thing he needed was to walk into the house with an erection. He'd never hear the end of it.
A slow exhale. A moment to let it pass.
Then the engine cut, and the quiet rushed in. Keys slid free from the ignition. Backpack grabbed from the passenger seat. The door opened, cool air brushing against his face as he stepped out and shut it behind him. A quick press of the fob, and the car answered with a familiar, confident beep as it locked.
Growing up, that sound had meant his dad was home. That the day was winding down. That things were normal.
Now it meant something else entirely.
Ownership. Control. The car, the house, the wife that had belonged to his father, were now all his. Evan shook his head once, sharp and deliberate, cutting the thought off before it could dig any deeper. There would be time to unpack all of that later. Too much time, probably. Right now, there were more immediate problems.
Like the fact that in a few hours, his house was going to be full of people.
Classmates. And Professor Caldwell. All relationships that had been rewritten to fit Evan's new reality. He no longer understood the dynamics in his friend group. He no longer knew where he stood with his least favourite professor. The potion had flipped his personal life on its head, and its reach hadn't yet seemed to find its limit.
Out of everything the magic had done, this evening's gathering still made the least sense. Taking something as mundane as a study session and turning it into a high-stakes dinner party? With Caldwell actually agreeing to show up? And Stacy being the one who set it up?
None of it added up. What was the point? What was the magic trying to push them toward this time?
He didn't have an answer. That was the worst part. No pattern he could fully grasp. Just pressure. Nudges. Situations that **** them closer together, **** them to play along. Forcing them to put on a show, pretending to be something that they weren't.
That they weren't yet.
Over and over during the day, Evan's mind had wandered that way. How long would it be before he gave up? How long would it be before he betrayed what little agency he still had and allowed the potion's magic to do what it wanted, to let it not only redefine his relationship with Stacy, but his own sense of self. His own sense of morality. With every fibre of his being, Evan wanted to do the right thing, to fix things that he had ruined by bringing the potion home, but every day he could feel those fibres becoming frayed. One by one. Minute by minute.
And to top it all off, he had to navigate all of magical nonsense while entertaining Professor Caldwell, of all people. The stakes couldn't be higher. If tonight went badly...
Evan exhaled slowly through his nose.
Failure wasn't an option.
Caldwell already thought he was barely worth the effort. That had been made painfully clear. The only reason the professor had shifted even slightly was because of Stacy. Because of the version of her this reality had constructed.
If that image cracked...
If something slipped...
He'd be right back where he started.
Or worse.
The front door opened with a quiet click, the familiar interior of the house greeting him as he stepped inside and shut it behind him. For a second, everything felt still. Then he noticed it.
Clean.
Not just tidy.
Immaculate.
From the entryway alone, there wasn't a single thing out of place. No stray shoes. No clutter on surfaces. No faint traces of everyday life lingering in corners. It didn't even look lived in. It looked staged. Like a showhome in a newly developed neighbourhood.
Evan frowned slightly, eyes scanning the space as he stepped further inside. The house had never been messy, not really. But there had always been something human about it. A sense that people existed here. This was different. This had taken a lot of effort.
And with him at school all day, and his dad... well... wherever his dad had been, that left one person.
A quiet thud as his backpack hit the floor at the base of the stairs, forgotten almost immediately as a faint sound reached him from deeper in the house. Movement in the kitchen. His steps slowed as he approached, something tightening subtly in his chest without him quite knowing why. The smell hit him first: warm, rich, something cooking.
Then he caught sight of her.
Stacy stood at the stove, back turned, attention fixed on whatever was in front of her. The scene, too, felt staged, almost. But instead of it being a show for display, a set piece for an elaborate ruse, this felt like something out of a life that didn't belong to him. Didn't belong to either of them.
As he stared at her, the now-familiar arousal began to wash over him, only this was far more powerful than what he experienced when just thinking about her. Heat surged through him, sharper than anything he'd felt in the car. A tightening in his chest. A profound rush of blood pumped into his penis, causing it to grow stiff.
Attraction. Desire. Need.
Stronger than it had any right to be.
He'd always known she was attractive. That had never been the issue. Even at his worst, even when resentment coloured everything else, that fact had been there in the background.
But this...
This was something else.
Amplified. Focused. Weaponized.
"Get ahold of yourself," he muttered internally, forcing his gaze away for a second, grounding himself before stepping fully into the room.
The moment passed. Not completely, but enough. Enough, at least, to function.
She turned at the sound of him, and for a second, neither of them spoke.
The dress she had chosen to wear was new. Red, patterned, fitted in a way that made it impossible not to notice. An apron tied neatly over top, like she was leaning fully into the role the night demanded. Her hair fell loose over her shoulders, softening the sharp edges he was used to seeing.
Beautiful.
There wasn't really another word for it.
No smile greeted him. No scowl, either. Just... uncertainty. Like she was waiting for something. For him to say something. Do something.

"Hey," he offered, keeping his voice level.
"Hey."
Short. Controlled. A beat passed. His eyes flicked around the room again, then back to her.
"I, uh... the house looks great," he said, gesturing vaguely. "Seriously. It's a lot. Did you do all this?"
A faint flush crept into her cheeks, subtle but there. Her gaze dropped briefly to the floor before she answered.
"Thanks," she said. "Figured... for tonight, it should be presentable."
"It is," Evan said quickly. "More than that. I didn't expect you to..." He cut himself off, shaking his head slightly. "Thank you."
For a second, something softened in her eyes, then it snapped back. She turned toward the stove, stirring something with more **** than necessary before facing him again. The uncertainty was gone, replaced by something sharper. Familiar.
"Don't get the wrong idea," she said, voice firm. "This doesn't change anything."
Evan stilled.
"I clean up, I cook, I put on a dress. None of that means I've forgiven you. This is still your mess."
"I know," he said quietly.
"I'm doing this because we agreed," she continued, pushing forward. "One night. I play along. I smile, I host, I make everything look perfect." A tight breath. "But you don't get to read into it."
"I'm not..."
"And you don't forget your part."
That stopped him. Her gaze dropped. Not to his face. Lower. The shift was subtle, but unmistakable. For a split second, something else flickered there. Not anger. Not disgust. Something that made his stomach tighten.
Curiosity.
Evan moved instinctively, hands coming forward to cover himself, breaking the line of sight. The moment snapped.
Her eyes jerked back up, colour flooding her face.
"See?" she snapped, frustrated, turning away again. "I can't even... this is exactly what I'm talking about."
The spoon hit the pan a little harder than necessary.
"You keep me in line," she continued, voice tight. "That's the deal. I don't cross lines, and if I start to, you stop me. Immediately."
Evan hesitated.
"Stacy..."
"No." She shook her head, cutting him off. "No hesitation. No thinking about it. You just stop it. Whatever it is. Because I'm telling you right now, I don't trust myself to."
Silence settled between them, heavier than before. He nodded once.
"Okay."
"Good," she said, though it didn't sound like relief.
Then, without turning back, she added, "Now go get ready. I'm not dealing with your friends on my own."
That was that. Evan lingered for half a second longer, watching her back, the tension in her shoulders, the way her movements were just a little too controlled. Then he turned and left the kitchen.
The scene replayed in fragments as he moved upstairs. The dress. The look in her eyes. The way her voice had shifted. The way she'd needed him to take control.
Guilt pressed in, heavy and familiar. This was his fault. All of it. Every shift. Every crack in her control. Every moment like that in the kitchen. And underneath it...
Unwanted.
Unwelcome.
Still there.
That low, persistent heat. The growing desire every time he saw her. Every time he thought of her.
Evan exhaled sharply, dragging a hand through his hair as he reached his room.
"Yeah," he muttered to himself. "This is going to go great."
He didn't believe it for a second.
What's next?
Love Potion Number Ten
Madame Ruth's Finest Work
Love Potion Number Nine worked a little too well, so Madame Ruth's decided to go a different route for her newest creation.
Updated on Jun 11, 2026
by Mr Nice Guy
Created on Dec 28, 2025
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