Susan enters the river...

Susan Storm realized the river may be her only hope. In the river, the dinosaur Sauron wouldn't pick up her scent. She took her boots off, until she was only clad in tight white body hugging panties that displayed a "4" over her crotch. Feeling smart, Sue began to rub dirt on her form. The water in the middle of the river was flowing slowly. Susan could propel herself in a sort of underwater Invisible suit, out of sight and mind. She entered the river and dove under as the pteron Sauron flew over head. He could no longer smell the female's sex and it engaged him, furthermore the brackish waters made it impossible for him to see her if she was in the river. He looked for a wake, but the water just flowed.

Meanwhile, a nude Susan, in an Invisivle suit, more just a ball of air over her head floated and pushed through the brown water near the sand at the bottom of the river. When a large fish came at her, she covered her entire body in a field. The fishes teeth sank in, but Susan's protective field helped. It still hurt. She used invisivle daggers to fend it off.

She had to be more careful. Soon, another alligator like creature attempted to roll Susan. Again her field kept her safe, however, she did not like how much it hurt her mind. With her pratice and ability, such attacks should be like tickles to her.

It became apparent something was wrong. Another fish, maybe the same one attempted to bite her legs. She felt the teeth slice through her weakening field. Suddenly, the current at the bottom of the river became erratic. Susan was tumbling in the underwater rapids.

She needed air, so she pushed with her powers up to the surface. As she broke the surface her lungs sucked in breath. The flow of the water was intense. Susan tried to make a raft with her powers, but she kept falling through the Invisible field as if it were made of sticks.

When a bird, the size of a truck swooped down she used small daggers, but she felt them bounce off the being like rubber balls. Her powers were fading. She couldn't even go fully invisible as the bird attacked. Her only hope, a small invisible helmet projection of air and back under. Which is what she did.

Susan let the current take her. She tried to calculate the distance back to her team, but she was sure she'd overshot by a few miles. Plus there was a fork in the river. There was no telling where she was headed. In fact, she overshot by thirty miles, and the river had forked three times unbeknownst to her. She was flowing fast away from Reed and the Four and deeper into the Savage Land in the South of the Antarctic. Deeper towards the strange southern pole.

Her weak helmet finally gave way, but luckily the waters had begun to get less rough.

The Savage Land had need for Susan here. A strong healthy female of youthful age. A downed tree, felled ages ago, helped Sue to the shoreline. As if the land had long ago shattered the tree in storm, knowing Susan would one day need it to enter the land here. To help the land expand. To help it grow.

Susan coughed as she gripped the branches of a felled tree, and began to crawl across the trunk to the shore.

Not too far away, a large cave rat sniffed the air looking for a meal. Old, and the last of its kind in the area, its race would die with it. Long ago, a family of decendants of Tyrannosaurs with horns preyed upon this land, sending large animals away. Even now, the cave rodent was one of the larger predatory animals. His keen snout took in a unique smell.

Susan Storm moved to the shore. Drops of rain began to pour from the sky. Soon, to her dismay it was like a deluge. In reality, it was mild for the rainy season in this part or the Savage Land. A almost fully naked Susan caught her breath on the sandy shore.

Red eyes watched from the reeds, and a long tonuge licked lips that hid sharp fangs.

Susan heard a squeel then, and gasped when a rodent like creature appeared from the wooded area to her side. It had long ears, oddly strong apelike purple muscular arms but hind legs like a dog. Quills of grey and white poured down its back. The beast snarled at Susan, whk began to pull herself back towards the water. Was there no place to feel safe?

But this beast was quick, and Susan too tired. It leapt towards her, sinking down upon her and pushing her into the sand. The woman gasped as she turned around staring up at the snarling beast whose mouth leaked slobber as a long tonuge licked lips. Susan wasted no time, knowing her powers were gone, she kneed the beast in the crotch.

It shrieked and flopped back. Susan turned on her hands ans knees and began to scurry to the shore of the river. The beast snarled in rage, but its red eyes gazed upon Susan's ass in the white panties. A new smell filled its nostrils. A new urge, not hunger, not thirst. Something it hadn't felt in ages. Something between this meals legs. The rat creature looked between its legs to see a growth between its hind legs, like a pink worm. A hardness and tension it had not known in ages.

Susan crawled hand and feet towards the water. Hoping to float further down. But suddenly she felt something hit her ass. Was it...was it a snout. A tongue ran up her panties and Sue groaned involuntarily. She turned as the beast was pulling with its teeth at her white panties.

"What the fuck," Sue shouted, the normally strong heroine reduced to damsel once again. She heard a tear.

Riiiiippppppppp....

She felt cool air as her panties were removed. She tried to crawl away but her eyes popped open when a long tonuge shot right up into her past her warm mounds and into her love tunnel. The surprise caught her off gaurd, and she let out a moan. She began to buck her hips fighting away, but suddenly, a large weight was on her. She felt fangs at her neck. She expected ****, to be eaten. Large front limbs wrapped around her waist, pulling her back. She was going to be eaten, she feared.

But suddenly, her eyes shot open even wider when she felt something pushing near her exposed womanhood. Over and over. "What the fuck...what the....OH MY GODDD!" She stared off into the distance as something entered her most private place. Something hot, thick and long. "Its....its...." Susan didn't want to say the vile word, as the beast humped its member in her, inch after inch with no regard for her well being. The beast was growiling like mad, eager for what was occuring. It was rutting the Invisible Woman. Like some rat mate, she sobbed, trying to fight, but it was so strong. "I cant let it finish inside me," she thought fighting off pain, "it could....could...." she didn't want to think what that would mean. Could it...with her? This was an odd place and she didnt want to know.

Sue saw a stick not to far from reach, she began moving her arm but the beast roared and pulled her back. She felt its pounding. Pain was mixed with something she had to ignore. It was fully inside and had to be at least 8 full inches long. It began slamming into her, making her tits slap back and forth. Its roars grew. "Rrrr...rrrr..rrr..rrr" It seemed lost in its work, and Susan began to move her hand.

But the breasts length, girth, pace and something in its scent caused Susan pause. "No," she moaned. "Nooo," her eyes rolled and her hands gripped the sand an inch from the stick. Her toes curled in the sand. "Noooooohhhhhh," she moaned, lowering her body allowing her ass to move into the air. She was cumming despite her effort to avoid it.

Susan bared her own teeth, regaining resovle kn her mind as her body convulsed and her pussy dripped around the rat creatures cock. She pulled herself in the sand. She gripped the stick and roared as she turned quickly and layed a strike into the rats right abdomen. Sending the rat flying, its cock shooting precum.

The creature let out a whined roar as Susan crawled to the river. She flopped her exhausted body into the water, and let the current take her. The ordeal, the fight, and the embarassing unwanted orgasm made her beat down. She let her body float for a mile or so, before moving h we arms to pull her shore-side.

She felt safer, but as she moved towards the shore she heard the whiny growl of the rodent in the distance. It wasn't too far and it seemed to be moving closer. Something moved over Susan's leg in the shallow water as she stopped to think. Her eyes moved skyward and she noticed a being flying in the distance. Sauron? The giant bird?

"Ouch!!" She cried out, feeling a sharp pain. The blonde heroine looked down. The arm of a starfish, large and thick, was on her foot. It was big animal, she noticed, seeing the purple arm attached to a huge starfish like being in the water. Susan pulled her right leg, but her left, covered by the starfish arm wasn't moving. She suddenly felt cold pins and needles. Then a seering pain in her foot. Her foot was in a burning state of paralysis all of the sudden. The starfish arm moved up her leg slowly to her ankle, numbing each area as it moved.

The unique and now familiar growling of the rat being suddenly rose from the woods not too far off. Susan paused, as her foot began to burn.

Susan reached down with her right arm. She began attempting to remove the strange purple appendage. As she struggled, another thick starfish like appendage slapped on her arm. It moved slowly but managed to get its tentacles on her. She felt the same pain and deadness. A third arm from the starfish hit her right calf, and Susan had further trouble moving out of the water.

The left side of Susan's body was numb and stiff. She couldn't move her arm of leg. It was pulling her towards the water. Fesr gripped her.

She had three choices. She could sream for help from flying dino or bird, and maybe it wouldn't eat her. Maybe wave her arms to get its attention.

She could scream for this rat monsters for help. At least it wasn't going to drown or eat her.

Maybe she coild just fight this slow starfish monster.

What was she to do?