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Chapter 14
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anonenffan
What does Mackenzie see?
The coast was clear-make a dash for the hotel!
[Originally by SpiralFelix]
Before she could second-guess herself, Mackenzie emerged from the alley at a brisk walk. For the sake of her tenuous bottoms, she didn't dare walk any faster, despite her topless state. One arm covered her bare chest and the other was pinned to the bikini bottoms to make sure they stayed in place. Although there were still a few people in the immediate area, the coast was relatively clear. Mackenzie only heard one more catcall before she successfully arrived at the entrance to her hotel.
Mackenzie gave a massive sigh of relief at the feeling of the cool air rushing over her body. The hotel lobby wasn't crowded but it was certainly far from empty as people milled about in every direction. Mackenzie gulped upon noticing that she was again drawing stares from most of the onlookers. She quickly made her way over to the concierge desk and had to wait an agonizing minute before a hotel employee was free. He was a young man looking to be around the same age as Mackenzie.
"Can I uh... help you?" he asked with raised eyebrows as Mackenzie approached the counter. Her right arm covering her breasts did nothing to hide the fact that she completely topless.
"Yes, my, uh, room key was stolen." Mackenzie replied, her face red. "Room 546."
"I see." the concierge replied, peeling his eyes away from Mackenzie's bare skin. He typed on his computer for a few moments before looking up and asking, "Mackenzie?"
"That's me!" she replied sheepishly. Even facing the counter, Mackenzie could still feel all the eyes staring at her partially exposed backside.
"You uh... don't happen to have ID do you?" the concierge asked.
"Not really... The thief stole my whole purse while I was out on the beach."
"Oh my! Then we should be contacting the police! Did he steal your uh..." the concierge gestured down at Mackenzie's chest, "top as well?"
"No, no!" Mackenzie blushed even further. "That was just an, uh, accident on my part."
"Well, regardless, I'd be more than happy to call the police for you." replied the concierge in a friendly tone. "I'm sure they could send some officers out here in no ti-"
"Please, no!" Mackenzie interrupted, dreading the thought of explaining her situation to the police wearing nothing but some skimpy bikini bottoms. "I can go through all that later, but for now I'd really really like to just get back to my room and get dressed."
"Right, of course." the concierge hurriedly replied. He whipped up a quick form and set it in front of Mackenzie. "If you could just sign here, miss, then I'll get your new room key ready for you."
Mackenzie, being right-handed, awkwardly tried to shift her left arm over her breasts while removing her right. She was able to do so almost seamlessly, only exposing one of her nipples for a moment. Blushing furiously, she grabbed the pen on the counter and leaned forward to sign her name. But the motion sent one of the bikini bottom's ties past its limit. In an instant, the knot slipped free and Mackenzie's only form of cover began to slip down her legs. With no hands free, the redhead quickly did the only thing she could think of: she shoved her groin hard up against the counter. The friction kept the bottoms from sliding down even further, but the impact jostled the other knot loose as well. The bottoms were barely held in place by the **** of Mackenzie leaning into the counter, but it came at the expense of the back half of the bottoms swinging down, leaving Mackenzie's ass completely exposed to the entire hotel lobby.
Hand shaking, Mackenzie hurriedly signed the form and set the pen down. Her right hand now freed, she grabbed the undone bottoms and held them in front of her pussy. There was simply no way she could retie them with only one hand and absolutely no way she was exposing her breasts in the middle of the lobby! So while the new key was being generated, Mackenzie simply turned to face the lobby, keeping her bare ass up against the hotel counter and holding the bikini in front of her pussy. What took only about 60 seconds felt like an eternity as Mackenzie tried not to notice the groups of people blatantly staring at her while she was basically naked.
"Here you go, Mackenzie!" the concierge happily said as he held out the replacement room key. Mackenzie turned back to face him and froze, unsure how to grab the key with both her hands full. Mackenzie gulped nervously as she shifted her left arm slightly further across her breasts. It still covered her nipples, but now her hand was free. She leaned far over the counter and was just able to grab the card key, wrist and forearm still glued to her chest.
"Thanks!" she replied nervously, leaning back. She turned to head for the rooms when she felt the bikini bottoms being tugged from her loose grip. She glanced back and saw that one of the string ties had gotten wedged in between the two edges of the counter's corner when she'd leaned in. She gave it a yank, but the tie was wedged tight. Instead of coming loose, the bikini slipped from Mackenzie's grip and swung down to the side of the counter. Mackenzie gasped and quickly clamped her hand down over her bared pussy.
"Oh, uh, need some help with that?" the concierge asked, having clearly seen all of Mackenzie's exposed form just now.
The now completely naked Mackenzie was about to begin an attempt to rescue her final form of cover when she remembered two things. First, at this point it was barely even providing her with any cover. She could do just as well with her bare hand. And second, it wasn't even her bikini! That settled it for the young beauty, who turned and ran towards her room without another word, giving the lobby-goers one last look at her lovely round ass.
Dreading the thought of sharing an elevator with someone in her current state, Mackenzie ducked into the first stairwell she saw and continued her run all the way up the fifth floor. She opened the door to a deserted hallway, much to her relief. And just a few moments later, Mackenzie arrived at her room, still very naked and now very out of breath. She finally let her arm come away from her breasts for a brief moment as she inserted the card key.
Does Mackenzie's new card key work?
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Mackenzie's Misadventures
A Redhead's ENF Nightmare
26-year-old Mackenzie, an alluring redhead, experiences a nightmarish series of events that leave her exposed and humiliated.
Updated on Jun 14, 2026
by LOLO69
Created on Jan 5, 2016
by Phantompen
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