Chapter 41
by
sacchito22
What's Max's plan with the machine?
Lessons learned, lessons applied.
Max saw his sisters and cousins huddled together talking animatedly in hushed tones as he headed up to his room. Glancing up before reaching the second floor, he could see his mom and aunt watching them with knowing smiles and laughing to each other. Probably some unspoken girl-code thing, Max wasn't sure.
Finally making it to his room, Max found the magical device right where he left it. It's time to do some work, and make sure to do it in a way that won't fuck up the timeline again. Re-befriending Olivia is going to be weird enough as it is. Sitting down and making sure to think about things a little more, Max set out to do a little polishing of his, and maybe a few other people's lives.
First he typed in, "What if I understood, instinctively, if one of my changes using this device would alter my past timeline in a major way?" (This way, he should get some sort of warning and then try to investigate what would happen. Thinking over the next few things he wants to enter, he got no instinctive feelings, so he went ahead with them.)
"What if the women I'm sexually involved with are completely fine being a part of my harem?" (While there's no major difficulties yet, there's no reason there won't be in the future. Max remembered watching the fallout of a jock at school trying to date three chicks at once and that ended in one chick keying up his car and setting it on fire. Definitely going to try and head that off.)
"What if I instinctively understood how to seduce women?" (His gut really had gotten him through some tight situations in the past few days, might as well upgrade that a bit.)
"What if my instincts never led me wrong?" (A little insurance to make sure he could always trust his gut instincts and not have to over think things.)
"What if I was naturally absurdly difficult to abduct, ****, ambush, attack, kidnap, and/or imprison?" (Just getting some martial arts skills might help, but won't cover everything. This should help put serendipity on his side for any future enemies.)
That was most of the good Max wanted to do for himself, but now for other people.
"What if the girl I know as Tiffany will become permanently curvy as her pregnancy progresses, with at least DD breasts, wide hips, and a nice thick ass?" (Max was probably going to be spending some time around the blonde, might as well make her a little easier on the eyes. Also, Max wanted to make sure she hadn't been using a fake name, instead of having this effect some other girl.)
But now for some punishment, "What if the girl I know as Tiffany will be 75% more intelligent and capable than she was as her pregnancy progresses, permanently?" (Honestly, the girl looked like she could use a little more polishing in the intellectual department since she seemed only to be capable of manipulation, especially if she's about to be a mom to his kid.)
"What if the girl I know as Tiffany will increasingly become what I consider 'good and kind' as her pregnancy progresses?" (Okay, this kinda forces her to be good instead of giving her the chance, but Max wasn't sure if his previous edits to women who bear his child were going to make her actually not a bitch anymore, or just a capable bitch.)
"What if the girl I know as Tiffany, as her intellect increases, will equally talk like an airheaded bimbo stereotype, until she gives birth to her firstborn daughter?" (This was an interesting punishment Max had thought of; actually being incredibly smart, like Tiffany thought she was, but not able to sound like it. Max also figured to make this temporary to see if he wanted to punish her differently once she actually had his daughter in her arms.)
"What if the girl I know as Tiffany knows that I am changing her body and mind with the above four changes, but cannot communicate to anyone but me about it and will not react negatively?" (Max figured this would put the icing on the cake. Not only for her to know that her body's changing for more than just motherhood, but that he did it, and she can't tell anyone in any way about it. Also so she won't get too scared or angry about it and endanger herself or the baby.)
That was enough for Tiffany, but now for her minions, Max had some ideas. Neither really did anything, but Max had some ideas for the capable latinas.
"What if, after moving in with me, the women I know as Carmen and Maria will become more beautiful?" (Honestly, Max just wanted to see what will happen with this. He also knew he wanted them to move in with him. Carmen would be a phenominal body guard and Maria had some unusual skills with that phone of her's. He'd rather have them on his side than as loose ends.)
"What if, after moving in with me, the woman I know as Carmen's scars will all heal completely, with no signs of ever being there?" (This was just so the scarred amazonian latina will have that scaring on her face and anywhere else will heal up. Not that they bothered him, but Max got the sense they bothered her, and she'd actually been nice to him.)
Max realized, he just put in the previous two changes would only come into effect once they moved in, but this wasn't his house, and it was already a little packed as it is. And none of his daughters had even been born yet. If he was going to have a big harem (it was getting pretty big to him), he's going to need a bigger house.
"What if I won the largest lottery in the state this month?" (That should give Max the money to help get a nice big house to move him and his harem into.)
"What if no one will bother me, my family, or harem, about winning the lottery?" (Just to make sure that no one comes sniffing around from winning the lottery.)
"What if, within two weeks of winning the lottery, I will find the perfect house for me and my harem to move into?" (This way, Max was literally sure to find a home for himself and his harem.)
Satisfied with the initial changes he'd done, Max leaned back. This should take care of all his problems, for now. Max opened the door to his room to head back down to the party, but stopped at the unexpected vision in his doorway.
Who or what's there?
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The "what if" machine
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After a heavy box is thrown through his bed room window, Max goes from pissed to extatic after he sees what it is .
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