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Chapter 5
by VixxTheLover
What else can you add to the movie?
A cheating wife should be punished.
The husband character ends up fighting the crewman and his wife, and the crewman is killed.
The movie then cuts to a later time, some months later, when the husband has grown a longer beard, it has been an extended period of time.
You decide to include some retribution from the husband, vengeance for cheating on him, for trying to leave him on the island, and for fighting against him with the crewman.
I your version, Kelly Brook comes back to camp, the only shelter on the small island to prepare dinner, and she puts the fish her husband caught on the fire.
She is wearing her bikini bottoms, but not her top. As she walks, you show her beautiful breasts bouncing back and forth.
You see and her wrap are now being used as a sort of belt for her husband, and he has her bikini top hanging off to the side as a trophy of his victory.
As the fish cook, Billy Zane relaxes, looks at his beautiful wife and opens his shorts, and pulls out his cock, starting to masturbate.
Kelly Brook frowns, but drops to her knees before him, and from behind him you see her put her head between his legs and begin performing oral sex on her husband.
The camera pans to the side, it pans around and stops with her bikini top between the camera and the couple, with part of it obscuring the cock Kelly Brook appears to have in her mouth, but just briefly.
You then show a clear shot of Kelly Brook sucking his cock. Her eyes are full of hate for her husband, but she is trying to survive.
Their fish appears to have finished cooking, and now Billy Zane pulls out of her mouth and jerks off on her cooked fish, handing his wife fish covered in his cum.
Being hungry, and both defeated and demoralized, his wife eats it, making a face as she consumes it. The shot clearly shows the cum on her fish, and her disgust in consuming it.
It is meant to be a powerful representation of her defeat. He won, now he is intent on humiliating her.
After dinner, her husband stands above her and drops his pants, taking her bikini top down, and she drops her gaze and removes her bikini bottoms. In your version, the viewer gets full frontal on both actors.
The soft dick shot which is now accepted, and full frontal on Kelly Brook, showing a shaven genital area, which would be impossible on a deserted island, but who wants to see a big hairy bush? Not you in your version of the film.
She hands her white bikini bottoms to her husband, and doesn’t fight as he binds her wrists together with her bikini top. It seems it is both a trophy and a mechanism to **** her further.
Kelly Brook then gets on her hands and knees, with a beautiful side shot of her nude body, and then her husband forces her bikini bottoms into her mouth.
For Zane this is about control, and it is an erotic visual.
Billy Zane gets behind her and begins to forcefully fuck her doggy style, with a ferocious look on his face as he fucks her. The viewer hears the audio clearly, of the slapping of skin, Zane’s fierce grunting, and Kelly Brook’s whimpering.
You see her crying, muffled by her own bikini bottoms, her face lying on the sand as her body shakes under her husband powerfully fucking her.
When Billy Zane cums, he pulls out and cums on her face and in her hair, rubbing his cock on her face afterward. Billy Zane then wipes his cock clean of cum using her hair, looking at her with disdain.
After he finishes he smiles, and then takes her bikini bottoms out of her mouth and unbinds her hands, returning her top to where he kept it as a trophy.
“Thanks for dessert honey,” he says with a theatrical level of sarcasm.
You show a few scenes after that to represent a pattern now exists. She sucks her husband’s dick three times a day like she did her lover, and swallows his cum as before. All the while showing her husband contempt.
Your movie soon ends, with Kelly Brook rescued as in the theatrical release. She steals his lighter, and is rescued but says nothing to her rescuer about another person on the island.
As the boat leaves him, and as Billy Zane realizes he is going to be left alone, Kelly Brook smiles. She has won, she then looks at the muscular black man who rescued her.
She slowly looks back at her husband, who is close enough to clearly see her, and wanting to make sure her rescuer misses her husband on the island, and wanting one last bit of ****, Kelly Brook gets on her knees before her rescuer and begins to suck his big cock.
That is the last visual Billy Zane gets of his beautiful wife, with another man’s cock in her mouth sailing away.
You save your changes, and rewatch the movie. It is better your way. You rewatch the movie, and in your web browser it is just like you made it, and is now a much more erotic movie, and more fitting with the more risqué erotic thrillers seen now in Europe.
Is there any fallout for the changes you have made?
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The New Remote Control
A new generation remote control allows you to control movies in new and sexy ways.
You are a high end programmer, and your company is working on a prototype next generation remote control, and you find it lets you edit released movies in amazing ways.
Updated on Jun 11, 2025
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Created on Apr 15, 2020
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