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Chapter 6
by CorruptionCentral
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Things look normal at the retreat until Suzy starts to play
When the Pogo Plane landed at the retreat She Hulk had sent them to, Reed, Ben, and Johnny found a serene country setting with many people enjoying the clear summer day. Everyone was most courteous and helpful in guiding them to the Visitor's Center and every one of them had glowing complements both for the facility and the object of the hero's quest, Susan Storm Richards.
When the male members of the famed team reached the information desk, the retreat counselor gave them a warm welcome. "Good morning gentlemen. We are so glad to have you here. I am sure that mistress..." The man flushed for a second but recovered quickly "MS Richards will be quite happy to see you. Actually, she is in the gymnasium making use of the martial arts equipment." The slip did not escape the notice of the heroes, but the counselor was quick to give them directions and scoot them on their way.
Once out of ear shod of the counselor, Ben growled "What was that bozo's problem? Ya think he's been watchin' a little too much Skinimax or sumthin'?" Johnny playfully threatened Ben for implying that his sister might be encouraging that freaks fantasies and another of their classic arguments started up. Of course, Reed was less than amused and tried to ignore it as well as the thought of other men ogling his wife. He knew it happened all the time, but he did not like to think about it.
When they found Sue, she was practicing swordplay with a large broadsword. She was dressed in a strangely familiar theme of purple, black and green. Her purple skin-tight leotard was cut deeply down into her ample bosom. Her matching stiletto knee high boots and opera gloves were a deep dark green with black trim. Her thin waist had a thick black belt and her neck had a matching choker adorned by a red stone with a large white D. On her back was a two-sword scabbard rig that allowed her to remove the meter long blades through the side of the scabbard instead of having to lift them out. One of the scabbards was empty while the other held a twin to the blade she wielded with expert precision. Ben could not resist the urge to say what he was thinking. "So, I wonder where 'Counselor Freaky' got the idea she waz Mistress Suzy?"
The beautiful woman stopped her workout and turned to face her former teammates. Her every move exuded sultry seduction. Her wry smile brought all the men there to an immediate erection, but the steamy purr of her next words made their blood run cold. "He knows who his mistress is, gargoyle. Susan, Diablo Wife commands here!"
Reed's jaw dropped a good foot before he regained a semblance of his senses. This was HIS wife! What had that fiend done to her to make her think he was her husband? Reed practically pleaded with the woman he loved "Sue, please... tell us what happened. We can help you!"
"I don't need your help, LOSER," the vixen growled. "You Had me, and you THREW my love away! Well, Diablo has made my dreams come true. He will soon be the king of this world and I AM his queen!" With that, the heroes leapt into motion. Ben began to advance on the Invisible Woman while Johnny ignited and took to the air. Reed's elastic body moved to encompass his wife but with a laugh she held up the sword in her hands and purred "Fools, Coinspinner will not allow you to enslave me again!"
Reed tried to avoid the sharp edged tool by reaching for the arena lighting above Sue, but that cut off the Human Torch's flight path. In a last second flight correction to avoid frying Reed, Johnny let a great burst of flame out. As Johnny crashed hard into the sprinkler system, Ben caught the full brunt of flames in his eyes. The sprinkler system erupted streams of water throughout the room dousing the Torch and setting off an electrical short circuit from the lights through Reed. The electricity and water scrambled the synapses of the worlds greatest genius and made him a prisoner in his own body.
As the temporarily blind Thing tried to find his way, Sue slinked over to her dazed and soaking wet brother. Johnny had hit his head hard on the wall and the whole room seemed to spin about him. When he looked up, he could barely make out the smiling face of his sister. The shaken hero mumbled "Sue? I'm so messed up. Please help." Suddenly he noticed the sword she held up. "What? What are you doing? Sue! NO!"
A quick thrust brought the sword into the young man's chest. If Sue had not been so recently exposed to the Mindsword, nothing could have made her strike down her brother like this, but the swords sway over her was complete. She joyfully plunged the blade into the young man and relished the feeling of unfettered power of crushing this once precious life. She could almost feel the last shred of the heroine inside her die as she cemented herself into her new life as Diablo's mate and partner. As the critically wounded man wheezed Sue purred "Why, I am helping you little brother. I am showing you the mercy of a quick ****. What awaits your friends is far worse."
From behind her came a mighty roar "What the hell have you done!" Susan turned to face an enraged Thing. His sight came back just in time for him to see one of his dearest friends run her own brother threw. "I'm gonna kill you for that!" Ben charged the woman like a rhino.
For the first time in the battle Susan used her **** field to slam into the Thing's face hard enough to slow his charge. She left Coinspinner still stuck in her brother's chest and pulled the other sword out of its scabbard. The Thing swung a mighty blow for the woman's head with his huge fist, but Sue easily avoided the angry blow. As she slipped under the blow, she brought the blade over her head and through the arm of her attacker. Ben howled in pain as his severed right arm bounced off the gym floor. Shock tried to rob him of his senses, but Ben struggled to remain in control. From behind him he heard Sue's sultry voice. "You see I have something special for you, creature!" A quick sweep of Stonecutter took both Ben's legs. Sue was giddy with evil pleasure as she tortured and crippled her former friend. All through the gruesome acts, the electricity flowing through his body held Reed Richards incapable of even turning away.
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Diablo and the 12 Swords of Power
A Marvel Heroes Meets Fred Saberhagen's 12 Swords story
This is a story I started many years ago on SuperStories site. It was long since lost to the many server failures, but I recently found a copy of all the chapters I had written and thought it might be a fun project for CHYOA. Diablo is out to destroy his greatest enemies and has found just the tools to do it. In a universe where science and magic have mixed over the millennia, 12 swords forged by the God Hephaestus have been let loose in the world of Man. Originally, the swords were to be used in a game of the Gods to see what chaos they would bring to the humans that worshiped them, but Hephaestus did his work too well and even the Gods themselves were to their power. In this world, the swords destroyed the Gods and themselves, or so the stories told. In truth, Hephaestus wove one more spell into each that as the swords were 'destroyed' they would be transported to a pocket dimension to await a new game with the pets of the deities... Too bad for the Gods that they did not live to see the end. It is this pocket dimension that the evil alchemist Diablo finds and where our story begins
Updated on Nov 5, 2018
Created on Nov 5, 2018
by CorruptionCentral
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