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Chapter 6 by gerx gerx

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First Impressions

The campus changed after sunset.

During the day, Halcyon University felt curated—glass buildings reflecting ambition, banners announcing Equity and Leadership like commandments suspended in the air. But at night, the sharpness softened. The pathways glowed under low amber lights. Laughter echoed more freely. Music drifted from open dorm windows. The performance of belonging loosened.

Coretta walked with them, but not quite among them.

Ashley was talking—of course she was talking—but not loudly. Not theatrically.

“Did anyone else,” she said after a moment, glancing at them, “arrive today and immediately feel like they were already being evaluated?”

Mira blinked. “Evaluated?”

“Like,” Ashley continued, searching for the word, “as if the second you stepped out of the car, someone had already decided who you were supposed to be.”

Asmaa’s gaze lifted slightly. “Yes.”

Just that.

Coretta didn’t answer right away.

Because she had felt it.

The glances.

The quiet sorting.

The invisible checklists.

Ashley let out a small breath. “I hate that feeling. Like you’re already defending something you haven’t even said yet.”

Mira nodded faintly. “I just… didn’t want to mess anything up.”

Ashley looked at her more seriously now. “Mess what up?”

“Being here,” Mira admitted.

That lingered.

Coretta felt it too.

Being here wasn’t neutral.

It was weighted.

Ashley glanced at Coretta. “You don’t look like you’re worried about messing anything up.”

Coretta held her gaze. “I don’t plan to.”

Ashley’s mouth curved slightly. “Same.”

There was something in that exchange—recognition, not rivalry.

They walked a few more steps.

Ashley shoved her hands into the pockets of her jacket. “My advisor emailed me this afternoon. Already.”

“About what?” Mira asked.

“‘High-performing students often struggle with adjustment,’” Ashley quoted. “Translation: Don’t coast just because you tested well.”

Asmaa tilted her head. “Did you?”

“Struggle?” Ashley shrugged. “I don’t know yet.”

She glanced sideways at Coretta. “But I didn’t get here by accident.”

Coretta felt something tighten, then settle.

Neither did she.

No numbers were spoken.

None were needed.

The air between them shifted—not competitive, not defensive.

Just equal.

Then Ashley stopped abruptly.

“Okay,” she said, energy snapping back into place. “Why are we walking like responsible adults?”

They had reached the edge of campus, the university parking structure looming to their right.

Ashley pointed toward it. “Come on. Let’s go to the uni garage. We’ll take a car.”

Mira hesitated. “We could just call a ride?”

“Or,” Ashley said, already moving toward the structure, “we don’t.”

She looked back at them. “It’s our last free night before orientation turns us into brochure material.”

Asmaa followed without protest.

Mira glanced at Coretta.

Coretta gave a small shrug and walked with them.

The garage smelled faintly of oil and concrete dust. Their footsteps echoed as they moved deeper inside.

They turned down a row.

And then Coretta saw it.

A black Jeep Wrangler.

Matte finish. Slight lift. Clean lines. Custom rims catching the fluorescent lights in sharp flashes.

Her pace slowed.

Categorized.

Assessed.

Concluded.

Of course.

Ashley walked slightly ahead, blonde hair catching the overhead lights.

Rich.

Spoiled.

Blonde-gets-everything-she-wants princess.

The thought came fast. Defensive. Automatic.

Before she could settle into it, Mira stopped.

“Oh,” she said softly, pulling keys from her pocket. “We can take mine. I’m not drinking anyway.”

The Jeep blinked.

Coretta looked at her. “You?”

It came out sharper than she meant.

Mira stiffened. “Yeah. It’s mine.”

Ashley went very still.

Then she turned slowly toward Coretta, a grin spreading across her face.

“Oh my God,” she laughed. “You thought it was mine.”

Heat rose in Coretta’s neck.

“I just assumed—”

“That I’m a rich, spoiled, blonde-gets-everything-she-wants princess?” Ashley supplied.

Asmaa’s eyes flicked between them.

Coretta could lie.

Instead she exhaled. “…Maybe.”

Ashley laughed—but there was something familiar in it.

“God, I wish,” she said. “My dad installs HVAC. My mom works night shifts at a hospital. I promise you, nobody handed me anything.”

She shrugged, but quickly.

Then she gestured toward Mira. “Meanwhile, Miss Quiet Luxury over here has the actual parental concern package.”

Mira flushed. “It’s not like that. My parents just didn’t want me commuting at night.”

Asmaa stepped closer to the Jeep, brushing her fingers lightly over the rim. “That’s… considerate.”

Then she looked at Coretta.

“You assume fast,” she said quietly.

Not accusing.

Just precise.

The words settled.

Coretta felt them land.

Asmaa looked back at the car as if nothing had happened.

They laughed.

Coretta did too.

But inside, something shifted.

Her assumption hadn’t really been about Ashley.

It had been about control.

She had learned to identify advantage before it could be used against her.

Sometimes she saw it where it wasn’t.

Ashley caught her eye again.

“You thought I was here because of money,” she said gently.

Coretta didn’t deflect this time.

“Yes,” she said.

The word felt heavier than she expected.

“I did.”

Ashley held her gaze.

“And how many people,” she asked, not unkindly, “have decided you’re here because of your skin? Or because you’re a woman? Before you even opened your mouth?”

The question didn’t land like an attack.

It landed like a mirror.

Coretta felt her jaw tighten.

Too many.

Teachers who overexplained things to her.

Peers who assumed shortcuts.

Strangers who congratulated her for “representation.”

She exhaled slowly.

“It happens,” she admitted.

Ashley nodded once. “Yeah. So maybe don’t do the same thing to me.”

There was no venom in it.

Just clarity.

Asmaa watched them quietly.

Mira shifted her weight, eyes moving between them like she was bracing for fracture.

Coretta swallowed.

“You’re right,” she said. “I did exactly that.”

Saying it out loud loosened something in her chest.

Ashley studied her for a second longer—measuring sincerity.

Then she stepped forward and clapped her hands once, decisive.

“Okay. We’re done.”

Mira blinked. “Done with what?”

“With this.” Ashley gestured loosely between them. “The sorting. The labeling. The pre-judging.”

She looked at each of them in turn.

“We’re not doing that tonight. Not with each other.”

Her tone shifted—less playful, more grounded.

“We’re going to have a great girls’ night. We’re going to eat something unhealthy. We’re going to drink something we’ll regret slightly. And we’re going to actually get to know each other.”

She paused.

“Not as diversity statistics. Not as scholarship kids. Not as rich, poor, loud, quiet.”

“Just… people.”

Asmaa’s lips curved faintly.

Mira nodded slowly.

Coretta looked at the three of them.

The loud blonde.

The quiet observer.

The shy girl with the expensive Jeep.

Three girls who didn’t quite fit the campus gloss.

Three girls who, if she was honest, probably didn’t slot neatly into any group here.

Misfits.

Like her.

“Friends?” Mira asked softly, almost testing the word.

Ashley smiled. “Let’s try.”

Coretta felt something unfamiliar rise in her chest.

Hope.

She had spent so long navigating rooms strategically that the idea of walking into one without armor felt reckless.

Could she actually do this?

Could she let herself not compete?

Not defend?

Not pre-strike?

Could she make real friends here?

She looked at Ashley again.

“I’ll try,” she said quietly.

Ashley grinned. “Good. Because I don’t have a backup plan.”

That earned a real laugh from all of them.

Mira slid into the driver’s seat.

Asmaa folded into the back, instinctively choosing the corner.

Ashley dropped into the passenger seat.

Coretta paused for half a second before closing her door.

Maybe this was reckless.

Maybe it wouldn’t last.

But maybe—just maybe—she didn’t have to do this alone.

The engine roared to life.

Campus lights faded behind them.

For the first time since arriving at Halcyon, Coretta wasn’t stepping onto a stage.

She was stepping into a possibility.

And she was willing to try.

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