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Chapter 18
by
Mr Nice Guy
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Assets and Illusions
Night had deepened into that rich, velvety blue that swallowed detail and left only shapes and reflections behind. The neighbourhood streets were quiet, the kind of quiet that felt deliberate, as though the world had agreed to step back and give him room to unravel. Streetlights cast long amber streaks across the polished hood of the car, their glow sliding over the sleek lines of the vehicle as it moved.
The vehicle.
His vehicle.
A luxury sedan. Low, smooth, expensive in a way that didn't shout but didn't need to. The leather seats were butter-soft beneath his palms. The dashboard glowed with restrained elegance, digital displays crisp and responsive. Even the steering wheel felt substantial, weighted just enough to remind him that this wasn't a student's hand-me-down or a practical compact bought used off a classifieds site.
He had never owned a car before.
In his real life, before the potion, before the shift, transportation had meant riding the bus, borrowing his dad's car, or catching a ride with friends. Insurance had been someone else's problem. Gas had been someone else's credit card.
Now the registration listed him as the primary owner.
Him.
A nineteen-year-old university student who still sometimes forgot to separate his laundry properly.
The potion's magic had rewritten more than relationship status. It had rewritten infrastructure. Assets. Debt. Legal reality. Mortgage payments didn't vanish because some supernatural chemistry experiment demanded it. Car loans required monthly transfers. Insurance companies didn't accept 'magic' as a billing category.
So how did this work?
Was there a mortgage in his name? Did he owe hundreds of thousands of dollars on that house? Was there a car loan ticking down month by month? If so, what income was covering it? Tuition payments had always been manageable because his father, wealthy, established, comfortably insulated by both a high-paying executive position and generational money, had ensured they were.
His dad had been the rich one. The safety net. The provider. Born into old money, layered with smart investments and a career that only amplified it. Evan had grown up understanding that comfort without ever fully feeling responsible for maintaining it.
Now the roles appeared inverted.
Anger simmered under his ribs, hot and restless. Anger at Stacy. At the potion. At himself. But anger wasn't going to answer his questions. Nor would it solve his problems. What he needed was to try to get a clear head and figure things out.
He had to admit it: Stacy's idea had worked. The final result had been a disaster, but sleeping in the same bed had really helped. Two hours of sleep, and yet his body felt steady. Clear. Muscles no longer aching with deprivation. The edge that had frayed his nerves all day had softened into something almost manageable.
The sleep itself had been extraordinary. Not shallow. Not fractured. Deep. The kind of rest that settled into bone and stitched something back together. Thinking back, Evan had a hard time remembering a sleep that had been as good as the one he'd just had with his former stepmother. Those two hours had counted for at least half-a-night's sleep, if not more.
And then he'd woken up wrapped around her.
The memory intruded before he could block it. The warmth of her ass against his groin, the curve of her body fitting perfectly against his as if they'd been designed to be together. Her hair had smelled faintly floral. Her breathing had been slow, trusting.
Trusting.
His jaw tightened.
He didn't want that softness, that sweetness attached to his image of Stacy. She was sharp, dismissive, relentless. She had built an entire campaign to win his father. She had rewritten their lives with a potion because she couldn't tolerate not getting what she wanted.
Horrible.
Sexy, yes.
Infuriatingly, distractingly sexy.
But horrible.
Still.
There had been a moment, the briefest moment, just after they both woke up, where he felt so safe with her that he could have stayed in bed for the rest of the night. The rest of his life, honestly. But that moment had been fleeting. Once the haze of sleep had cleared from their minds, both he and Stacy had been horrified, but the look on her face told him that she must have felt it worse.
Another image of Stacy leapt forward in his imagination. She was waking, disoriented, realising she was being held, realising she was being touched, without her consent. A shock of empathy threaded through him. Waking up like that must have been terrifying.
No control over how her body had been positioned. No memory of giving permission to being touched. No explanation for why silk had replaced the sweater she'd gone to sleep in.
He hadn't consented either. That mattered.
But fear didn't divide itself neatly along fairness.
The steering wheel shifted slightly under his grip as he exhaled. Empathy flickered, then retreated beneath resentment.
And then she'd still kicked him out. Out of his own house.
Magic or not, he had as much right to staying in the house as she did. Joint ownership meant she didn't get to exile him like some unwanted tenant. He had followed the rules. Stayed on his side. Stayed over the covers. Stayed dressed.
If the potion undressed him and dragged him under the blankets, that wasn't a choice he'd made. Just as she hadn't chosen that nightie.
The memory betrayed him again, this time coloured by his baser instincts: deep blue silk clinging in the dim light, thin straps framing bare shoulders, fabric barely skimming mid-thigh. Instead of yelling at him, horrified by what he had done, she was on her knees, on the bed, staring at him, pleading for him to come back. It wasn't a memory of something that had happened, but rather a memory of something he'd hoped for, briefly in a weak moment, seeing Stacy dressed as she was. Heat sparked low in his abdomen, a familiar pre-arousal warning.

"No," he muttered to himself, shaking his head as though that could dislodge the image. “Absolutely not.”
He refused to let attraction become another lever the magic could pull.
Hunger gnawed louder now, cutting through the tangle of thoughts. Nothing but coffee and adrenaline had fuelled the day. An empty stomach made everything worse. He always thought better after eating; logic seemed more accessible when blood sugar wasn't sabotaging him.
A glowing drive-through sign rose ahead, red and gold against the dark. This time he didn't hesitate. The sedan glided into the lane, tires whispering against asphalt.
While waiting behind a pickup truck, phone emerged again.
Banking app.
Login.
Chequing account.
The number stared back at him.
$53,842.17.
He blinked, closed the app, reopened it.
Same amount.
Scrolling down felt surreal.
Savings: $312,409.63.
Investment accounts neatly diversified.
Retirement fund contributions steady and substantial.
Foreign currency accounts holding balances he didn't even understand.
He stared at the screen until the car ahead rolled forward and the driver behind him honked lightly.
Loaded.
Not comfortably middle-class.
Loaded.
"What can I get for you?" the speaker crackled.
Order came automatically: burger combo, large fries, extra drink. He added a second burger without thinking. Hunger justified indulgence.
Pulling ahead to the window, the platinum credit card left his wallet almost on instinct. The cashier barely glanced at it. The casualness of it all unsettled him more than the numbers.
Food bag landed warm and fragrant on the passenger seat. The smell of salt and grease filled the cabin. He parked beneath a streetlight and tore into the fries immediately, barely waiting for them to cool. Salt grounded him. Grease settled something frantic in his chest.
Between bites, he opened the app again.
The numbers remained, still unchanged.
Then the text arrived.
DAD: Hey kiddo. I'm at home. Stacy seems really upset - you guys okay? She didn't make dinner. Mind if I order pizza?
He stared at it longer than necessary. Mind if I order pizza? Why was his father asking permission?
The shift hit in a slow, nauseating wave. He wasn't the dependent anymore. He was the provider.
EVAN: We're fine. Go for it. I'll be home later.
The reply came quickly.
DAD: K thanks. Think you could lend me some cash? I'm kind of broke right now.
A hollow sound escaped him—half laugh, half disbelief. Broke? His father had grown up with trust funds and investment managers. Had built on that foundation with a career that paid more in a year than most people saw in ten. And now he was asking his son for money.
EVAN: I'll etransfer you.
DAD: Thanks again! Best kid ever.
Best kid ever.
The phrase lingered on the screen while he chewed mechanically, appetite dulled by the weight of it. One hand holding a burger, the other opening the banking app for the third time, Evan sent his dad fifty dollars. He then looked back at the history of his account and saw that these transfers happened on a fairly regular basis, exactly the way his dad used to send him money. Before the potion. Before the change.
Once again Evan was confronted with the consequences of his actions, of his desire to seek a shortcut with a woman whose name he'd never bothered to learn. If he hadn't been so selfish, so greedy, his father wouldn't be in the situation he was in, Stacy would still have the man she loved, and he wouldn't be tied to a woman who he could hardly stand. Instead of a life of youthful freedom, he had been given a life of ownership, responsibility, and commitment.
It was a life built on a foundation he didn't lay. A life stolen, not borrowed. A life he was going to have to come to terms with in some form or another.
The engine started again, smoother than his thoughts. Headlights swept across the empty lot as he pulled back onto the road. It was time to go home. His home. Their home. Staying away only served to give the magic another excuse to make things worse for them. He would go home and confront his problems head on.
Whether that problem wanted him to or not.
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