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Chapter 16 by Kristobal Kristobal

Anything happen while she's resting?

She spots an old fence

While Emily stayed bent over, palm pressed against the warm bark, catching breath, the forest around her seemed to settle. Leaves whispered overhead. In the quiet she noticed it — a flicker of light off cold metal, just beyond where the trees thinned.

A rusted chain‑link fence, half hidden by kudzu and vines, twisting into the underbrush. She’d passed this stretch a dozen times before — or thought she had — but never seen fencing here. Never needed to.

She stood slowly, backing off the tree, knees stiff. Her muscles protested. She lifted her hands, lacing fingers on top of her head, elbows out, her chest rising, ribs stretching. The sports bra pinched in places, damp, tight, but she welcomed its hold. She inhaled deeply, held, and exhaled, letting her legs reset under her.

Then she walked.

Her steps were careful — leaf litter, broken twigs, roots. She followed a narrow, overgrown trail that edged along the fence, the metal cold and brittle beneath her fingertips when she brushed it. The fence was sagging in places; in others it held straight, standing sentinel to something beyond it.

Light filtered down in slanted beams where the trees allowed it — illuminating graffiti-splashed fence ties, chunks of brick and stone, shards of glass buried in dirt.

After a bend, she glimpsed structure.

Brick walls rising in jagged shapes. Gaps in the brick where windows had existed. No glass left. No door. Just a frame, a doorway open to emptiness. The whole thing was overgrown — vines crawling, moss clinging, graffiti sprayed in bold color names and tags across rough red bricks.

She paused at the threshold.

The building was silent. Hollow. The air smelled of dust, mildew, damp mortar, old rot. Birds fluttered away when she approached. She could see inside through the empty window frames — debris, broken floorboards, graffiti inside too, shadowed corners.

Her heart pulsed hard in her chest. The forest shifted behind her. The fence touched tangibly at her elbow. The building loomed — abandoned, secret, forgotten.

She set her water bottle on a fallen brick. Took a careful step forward. Her thighs trembled. Her chest felt too full.

She raised her hand. Touched the wall beside the opening. The brick was rough, crumbling at edges. Her fingers left smear of sweat and dust.

Inside, darkness. But enough light filtered in for her to see shapes — empty rooms, wires dangling, rusted pipes, broken windows casting jagged beams across floors littered in leaves and broken furniture.

She swallowed.

She wanted to go in. To explore. To see what had been hidden.

But also… to turn back.
To mark this place and walk away.

Which does she do?

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