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Chapter 26 by MonsterInNeed MonsterInNeed

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Technicality

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Mrs. Johnson stood in the middle of my messy living room, her eyes slightly unfocused, her body unnaturally still. She was wearing yoga pants and a plain white t-shirt, her dirty blonde hair pulled back in its usual messy ponytail. The dark circles under her eyes seemed even more pronounced than usual, evidence of the endless cycle of soccer practices, homework supervision, and household chores that defined her existence.

"This is… weird," Claudia whispered, standing slightly behind me. She was staring at Mrs. Johnson with a mixture of fascination and discomfort. "I mean, I knew what it looked like before, but seeing it now…" She shook her head.

I glanced at Claudia, noticing how she was unconsciously biting her lower lip, her cheeks slightly flushed. Despite her unease, there was something about the situation that still triggered her kinks—the power dynamic, the control. But it was clear from the way she kept her distance that she was experiencing it completely differently now that she was free.

I turned back to Mrs. Johnson, thinking about what Claudia had suggested. It seemed too simple, but I was anxious about whether it would actually work. If it did, though… Hope flickered in my chest like a fragile flame.

"Okay," I said, taking a deep breath. Here goes." I looked directly at Mrs. Johnson. "I command you not to obey any of my commands unless I raise my arm while making the command."

Emily didn't react. Her expression remained blank, her posture unchanged. She was still following my previous command to stay still and quiet.

"Sit down," I told her, my heart pounding.

Nothing happened. Emily remained standing, perfectly still.

I raised my right arm deliberately, making sure she could see it. "Emily, sit down."

Immediately, she moved to the couch and sat, her movements fluid and natural.

"Holy shit," I breathed, looking back at Claudia. "It worked. I can command them not to obey me."

"Try something else," Claudia urged, stepping closer.

I turned back to Emily. "Stand up and spin in a circle."

Emily remained seated, her hands folded in her lap.

I raised my arm again. "Stand up and spin in a circle."

She rose and did as instructed, spinning slowly on the spot.

"Holy shit," I breathed, looking at Claudia. "It worked."

"Of course it worked," Claudia said, though I could see the relief in her eyes. "You can command them not to follow your commands. It's like… a paradox that resolves itself."

"But I still don't understand how this solves our problem," I said, running a hand through my hair. "So I can make women selectively obey me. How does that help us free everyone?"

Claudia's eyes lit up with that mischievous gleam I'd come to love. "Don't you see? We're not going to free all women—not directly. We're going to command them not to obey your commands, from now and forever."

I stared at her, the implications slowly dawning on me. "But that would mean…"

"They'd still technically be owned by you," Claudia finished, "but they'd be functionally free. No one would be able to tell the difference. No punishment for you, no chaos for the world, but women get their autonomy back."

I nodded slowly, processing Claudia's idea. "I see what you're saying, but for most women on Earth—the ones I've never interacted with and never will—this doesn't really change anything. They're already free to do whatever they want unless I specifically tell them otherwise."

Claudia gave me that look—the one that made me feel like I was missing something obvious. "First of all, it's a question of principles," she said, her voice gentle but firm. "By commanding them not to follow your future commands, you're relinquishing control over them. That's what matters most." She tucked a damp strand of hair behind her ear. "And secondly, this is only the first half of what we need to do."

"What's the second half?" I asked, genuinely curious.

"We need to tell women they're free to manage their sexuality however they want, and to allow or refuse men to have sex with them, based on their own desires." She crossed her arms. "That's actually the main reason I've concluded you shouldn't totally free women—apart from not wanting you to end up in jail," she added with a small smirk.

"How generous of you," I said dryly.

"I'm serious, Oliver. Women are protected by your ownership in a way. No man can touch them unless they have permission. If we free them completely, they lose that protection."

"But that's already what I tried to do with my announcement on Discord," I pointed out.

"Exactly," Claudia nodded. "But now we need to combine the two commands and figure out the best way to propagate it efficiently. We need every woman on Earth to hear it, not just the ones who happen to be on your Discord server."

I sighed and turned back to Emily, who was still standing motionless in my living room. "Emily, be released from all previous commands."

She didn't move. Of course not. I hadn't raised my arm.

"Right," I muttered, raising my arm deliberately. "Emily, be released from all previous commands."

Emily blinked rapidly, life returning to her eyes. She looked around my apartment with mild confusion, then focused on me. "Is there anything else you need, Oliver?" Her tone was polite but with an undercurrent of annoyance—the voice of someone who had three kids waiting at home and a million things to do.

"No, that's all. Thank you for coming over."

She nodded, already heading for the door. "Let me know if you need anything else." The way she said it made it clear she hoped I wouldn't, but the underlying obedience was still there. She might be annoyed, but she'd still come running if I called.

As the door closed behind her, I turned back to Claudia. "So, how exactly do we get this command to every woman on Earth?"

Claudia and I sat on my couch, staring at each other as the realization sank in.

"We're just going in circles," I groaned, running my hands through my hair. "And wait—with your plan, you'd still be the only truly free woman. Men would still be a danger to you specifically."

Claudia nodded, her expression resigned. "Yes, and it's not ideal. But if that's the sacrifice I have to make to free all other women, I'm willing to do it." She gave me a wry smile. "Besides, it's not like I was super safe before all this happened. And I'm hoping that once women everywhere are free to have sex again, once fresh porn is back on the menu, men should be less frustrated and maybe less creepy." She shrugged. "In theory, I shouldn't be in a lot more danger than before—just a bit."

She sighed heavily, leaning back against the couch cushions. "Let's get back to figuring out how to spread the message. That's the real problem."

"We need it to be shown everywhere," I said, thinking out loud. "Maybe broadcasted somehow. What if we used women on a major television network? Made them broadcast the command?"

"That would work locally, maybe nationally," Claudia pointed out. "But not worldwide. We need something global."

"Social media?" I suggested.

"Not everyone uses social media, and people are spread across different platforms." Claudia shook her head. "No, that's not it. We need someone important, someone who could command attention everywhere…"

We both froze simultaneously, the same thought clearly hitting us at the exact same moment. Our eyes widened as we blurted out in perfect unison: "Deborah Thomas!"

The first female president of the United States, elected just last year. A woman with access to emergency broadcast systems, international diplomatic channels, and the attention of the entire world. If anyone could spread a message globally, it would be her.

"That's it," Claudia said, her eyes wide with excitement. "If you command the president, she could make it happen. She could use emergency broadcasts, diplomatic channels, everything at her disposal to spread the word."

"So we need to get to the president," Claudia said, pacing my living room. "The six degrees of separation theory says you're only six handshakes away from anyone in the world. We just need to find the right woman who knows the right woman who knows the right woman… and so on until we reach President Thomas."

I groaned, flopping back on the couch. "That sounds incredibly complicated. It would be so much easier if we just knew someone closer, not six handshakes away." I stared at the ceiling, my mind racing through the limited social connections I had. Most of my contacts were online gaming friends or baristas who knew my coffee order.

Then it hit me.

"The Harringtons," I said, sitting up straight. "Old railroad money, connections to half the Fortune 500 companies? They're the kind of people who get invited to White House dinners. They must be close to the president, or at least know someone who knows her."

Claudia's eyes widened. "That's perfect! Call them. Now."

I pulled out my phone, hesitating for a moment before dialing my father. He picked up on the third ring.

"Oliver? Is everything alright?" His voice had that careful, measured tone he used when he was trying to sound concerned but was actually annoyed at being interrupted.

"Dad, I need the Harringtons' number. It's urgent."

There was a pause. "The Harringtons? Oliver, I can't just give you Harold Harrington's personal number. He's one of the most influential men in the country."

"It's about his wife," I said, thinking quickly. "There's a… flaw in the command I gave her. I need to fix it."

Another pause, longer this time. "What kind of flaw?"

"The kind that could be embarrassing for everyone involved if I don't fix it immediately," I said, hoping he'd fill in the blanks with something suitably scary.

I heard him sigh. "Fine. But Oliver, don't make me regret this."

Five minutes later, I was on the phone with Harold Harrington himself. His voice was gruff, impatient.

"Mr. Moore? Your father said this was urgent."

"It is, Mr. Harrington. I don't have much time, but I need to speak with your wife."

"My wife?" His tone shifted from impatient to suspicious. "What business do you have with Eleanor?"

I took a deep breath, hating what I was about to say but knowing it was necessary. "Mr. Harrington, I own your wife. I own all women. I think you remember that from our brunch. Now, I need to speak with her, and I'd appreciate if you didn't deprive me of my right to speak to my property."

The silence on the other end of the line was deafening. When he finally spoke, his voice was tight with barely controlled anger. "One moment."

I heard muffled voices, then Eleanor Harrington's refined, Boston-tinged accent came through the phone. "This is Eleanor Harrington."

"Mrs. Harrington, I need your help. I need to get in touch with President Thomas as soon as possible. I'm commanding you to help me do that, and I'm giving you authority to issue commands on my behalf if you need to in order to make this happen."

"I understand," she replied, her tone shifting to that familiar, slightly detached efficiency I'd come to recognize in women under my command. "I'll need to make some calls. The First Lady and I serve on the same charitable foundation board. I should be able to arrange something through her office."

"How long will it take?" I asked, my heart racing with a mixture of hope and anxiety.

"Well... I... Considering the considerable authority you just gave me, young man, I suppose you can expect her to give you a call herself soon."

I grinned at Claudia, giving her a thumbs-up. "We'll be waiting for her call," I told Mrs. Harrington.

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