The Freedom Score

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Chapter 54

"Finn?" Rose is the first to notice my eyes widen and the color drain from my face like a handful of dust on a windy day. She knows about the MCD. So she joins me while the others watch us. "Wow..." she says immediately when she sees what's on the screen. Then, before I do, she turns to the others. "I think we're all full and satisfied? Good." Her fingers caress my shoulder, a strong woman at my side whom I can always rely on. "Tammy, you clear the table. Daddy will thank you for this. Jasmine, you take care of M... our puppy."

"But sis... I wanted to..." But Jasmine gently puts her arm on Tammy's shoulder.

"Your sister speaks for your father, honey. We obey her."

Jasmine Lynchwood+1 (PS +54)

Tammy hesitates only briefly, then her small feet in the black shoes place themselves on the floor, and her arms diligently stretch out towards the plate. Meanwhile, I feel Rose's cheek against my own. Close together, we share a look at the MCD.

Congratulations! You've brought a subject to a progress score of +50. You've earned a reward. Tokens: +1000

You've conquered and subjugated it to your will, with **** or love, and whether it's happy with it or not. Now it's all about the future. A future in which not only the path, but also the subject's feelings are in your hands.

You have the power.

This means that from now on, additional parameters will be unlocked in addition to the Progress Score of a subject.

Freedome Score activated for subjects with PS +50 or higher.

Like the Progression Score (which determines how a subject behaves toward the user), the Freedome Score (FS) is set by the user and is on a 0-100 scale in the various areas, with 100 representing the maximum value (total Freedome) and 0 the minimum value (total Submission). The user can best view the Freedom Score as a kind of 'specialization' of the subject, which goes hand in hand with the Progress Score (PS) and affects the future of both the subject and, therefore, the user.

The FS is constant and cannot be changed after activation. In addition to the continuously increasing PS, the MCD gives the user a fixed FS that makes handling the subject easier for the user in the future.

This means that, in addition to the Progress Score, the user sets the Freedom Score to determine the subject's degree of personal freedom at the user's discretion.

FS 100 means the subject has free will, like all people outside the MCD. FS 0 means total submission. The subject can't even decide the smallest things for themselves and is dependent on the user for every single decision, no matter how small.

Shocked, I stare at the MCD.

MCD, PS, FS... so many abbreviations. My head is spinning. But not just because of the confusing things on the device in my hand.

This is bad. Like, really bad.

If someone saw me with Rania, Lynn, Candice, or Sonya, they might think I was a monster. And maybe I am. But this...

"No free will?" Rose asks, and I'm infinitely grateful not to be alone with this. She's smart, cuts to the point that dreads me. Maybe I should tell Bella and Lisa about it, I think. What would I say? I'm too late. The MCD is faster than me. They don't know about it and now this Freedom Score haunts me too. Lisa and Bella aren't here. But Rose is. And the other two don't know about the MCD. Yet. Rose does. And she's so infinitely smart and has already reached the place I am. It's dark and scary and she confronts me with things I don't want to think about. "You have to make a decision at some point, right?" I look at Rose, but Tammy, with the plates in her hand, has overheard.

"What does Sis mean by that, Daddy?" she asks, looking at me innocently. Daughter or not, adopted son or not. Tammy is my little sister, my little daughter. I have to protect her. Protect her from my power.

"Tammy, honey, please leave Daddy and me alone for a moment, okay?" Rose says patiently. Jasmine immediately rushes out of the kitchen, her role as mother in jeopardy. It doesn't take a second before she has Tammy in her arms, but she also sees that neither Rose nor I are capable of disciplining her at the moment. Rose looks at her big sister gratefully, then steps behind me. As weak as I am, it's easy for her to rest her chin on my shoulder and stare at the screen with me while she puts her arms around me. Her scent fills my nose, and I feel her hair on my neck, her warmth on my scon, her breathing on my back. We understand each other without words.

"What if it leaves me ****?" I ask, my voice raspy and my mouth dry.

"It doesn't seem so bad, does it?" Rose whispers in my ear in the privacy of our public embrace and kisses me on the cheek. "Look."

Tammy Lynchwood / Little Girl "I'm sorry Daddy" PS +53

Daddy's Little Princess. FS +70

The subject slowly develops into a free-spirited teenager with a strong kink for daddy/daughter **** play, which she wants to act out on her 'daddy'. As the PS increases, the subject will develop a sense of independent behavior. This includes finding friends and contacts outside the user's circle, as well as occasionally rebellious behavior.

"See?" Rose asks again. "Not so bad. Or..." But then she giggles, far too happy for the situation I'm in. "Or do you even want this?"

"She..." While Tammy tries to be a good little girl and not interfere in the grown-ups' conversation, I turn my head and look up at Rose. "I..."

"You just learned to love her and now she's being taken away from you again?" Rose doesn't need an answer, but I manage to nod anyway.

"It's the right thing to do." My voice is raspy. "She will get friends, will have freedom and... I will have..."

"Okay, look," says Rose, pointing to the MCD when I can't speak anymore. "I wouldn't be a good bro if I didn't point that out to you."

Daddy's Little Pumpkin. FS 20

The subject maintains a strong and close dependence on the user and his world. The outside world will frighten the subject, and it will only feel safe in the presence of the user and his closest circle. The subject will maintain its passion with Daddy/Daughter **** play, rebel extremely rarely, and live a peaceful life as Daddy's Good Little Girl.

"It could stay the same," says Rose gently, stroking my hair. "Nothing would change in a drastic way. You could guzide her."

"I'd keep her captive," I mutter, trying to hide the fact that I don't find the idea nearly as horrifying as I should. Tammy... I always liked Tammy, even when I didn't. I knew what kind of woman she would become, a horrible monster with no control. And now?

My daughter gives me a kind, polite, loving look as she finishes clearing the table. Her mother, Jasmine, my sister, stands behind her, a wet rag in her hand, ready to wipe the table, while from the kitchen comes the sound of Mom eating her dinner from a bowl.

And here I sit, Finn Lynchwood, the master of the house.

Frightened.

"Finn? Hey, babe?" Rose shakes my shoulder, gently but confidently. Feminine. "She'll love you no matter what you do."

"But I can't help thinking about her," I say, only vaguely acknowledging that Rose has given me a loving nickname. "It's my responsibility."

"And Tammy will be happy with every decision you make." My body stiffens while my little sister tries not to listen, while Jasmine is more successful. The two of them seem so content.

Why does everything have to change now? Why is the MCD forcing me to either let go of Tammy or submit her to me? This is all happening way too fast. Our family isn't even healed for too long and now...

But Rose, sweet sweet Rose, she knows what to do.

"You're the one who decides, Finn," she says firmly. "Even if you don't like it, you have to decide. They're all already past +50 and we don't know what will happen if we wait any longer. It's about time." One last kiss. "You have ****" she says with warmt in her features. "But you know that and... we love you, no matter what you decide."

Rose Lynchwood. +2 (PS +49)

"Because you're important to us and we... well..." She nibbles on her lower lip while none of us pay attention to her points. "Because... we love you."

"Can I sit on your lap, Daddy?" Tammy rocks on her feet, her arms behind her back. Right noe, I don't know if she plays the innocent game, of if she really is the cute little peachy girl she behaves like at the moment. I thought it could be this way, maybe forever.

But I need to make a decision. Let her stay the way she is, hold her to me... Or set her free, let her develop... and guide her away from me.

Fuck... maybe. Maybe she stays with me, even after she becomes a teenager again. or maybe she will hate me when I grant her freedom... Or she will hate me if I don't.

Is that how a father feels? Fuck. Maybe that's the reason the MCD torments me with these decisions.

"Daddy?" I look up at my sweet little angle. She looks so fragile and cute and sexy and helpless and strong and horny. All at the same time.

Yes, I decide. It can't stay this way. I need to make a decision, even if it will end this chapter in my life.

"Can I sit on your lap? Pretty please, Daddy?" But her wish is denied again.

"Come sit with me, honey." Rose taps her hand next to her on the sofa while I slump down in the armchair. The TV is on, some rom-com Rose has decided on, but I'm not paying attention.

"Can I sit next to you, hubby?" Jasmine has gathered all her courage after Tammy left my side, nervously plays with her fingers and looks at me hopefully. She wants to comfort me, her love and hubby husband. She's noticed that my behavior has changed, but doesn't know why, hasn't the mental capacity or foresigh, not knowing that I have a godly device on me. Then she smiles with relief, and her wonderful ass, which my hands and my cock have so much experience with, sits next to me on the armrest. Jasmine sits gracefully next to me, legs foldet, and as her fingers gently stroke my hair, I wish I were the monster that the MCD threatens to turn me into. Then it would be all too easy.

But I'm a good guy and sometimes I hate it. I can make decisions, not only for me, but for the people I love. Decisions binding them at my side, knowing it will help them more than their freedom. But at the same time, I respect their free will.

You can always choose the good path, I think, but I know I'm lying to myself. Tammy is a good example. Either I set her free... And she'll move away from me... Or I keep her with me... And I'm a monster.

And maybe, some day, there won't be a path I consider 'good'. What then?

This isn't a game anymore. Not for ****, not for love. I play with the future of my girls. I alone. Rose is at my side, but I decide.

Not even able to think about the girls outside of my family, I try to concentrate on the goal ahead.

But what goal? If the MCD gives me a path where the girl is happy, so free, and I'm not, what path should I pick? And if she is happy, what gives me a guarantee that it will stay this way? Live is hard and scary. Captivity is safe and secure. They trust me. Can I trust myself? And what does my heart want?

It's me who decided on taking action, taking the lead, charge forward for the good of those I love.

And now the MCD forces me to set Tammy free into a dangerous world or bind her to me.

"Can I help you, honey?" Jasmine asks, looking at me worriedly. "I can tell something's wrong, and..." But I shake my head, and she stays silent, staring sadly at the television while I stare sadly at the MCD.

Jasmine Lynchwood / Caretaker "Let me take care of you hubby" PS +54

The Hot Wife. FS 60

The subject will evolve into a domesticated model wife that the user can use for his own purposes, even outside of kitchen and bedroom. Other men, not activated by the MCD, will react to the slutty obedient wife with envy, admiration, and lust toward the subject and the bond between her and the user. Other women, not activated by the MCD, will react to the devoted happy wife with envy, lust, and frustration toward the subject and the bond between her and the user. The user can now make use of his domesticated Stepford Hotwife in the outside world as well, giving the subject more freedom and responsibility in their relationship, using his wife as a special tool in his live.

Barefoot and pregnant in the kitchen. FS 20

In addition to her Stepford duties of keeping the user's stomach full, his balls empty, his life comfortable, and his being filled with pride of owning her, the subject will now feel a growing urge to keep her belly constantly full of the user's offspring. That, combined with the other duties as a devoted wife, the subjekt will loose almost all other drive to a normal live, completly setteling as a baby factory for her husband, ectracting cum out of him and making him smile and happy while stying on her feet in the kitchen and on her back in the bedroom.

_Yeah fuck it. Fucking babies. Shit I hat do ask... So either I give her the freedom to no longer see me as the center of her world, or I take away her freedom, bind her to me, and control her life and her body. Weel you had to think you had everything under control, _Finn fucking Lynchwood.

Suddenly, it doesn't sound so easy to see myself as responsible for everything. On the one hand, Jasmine, in love with me, would certainly be ready for children. Her job is in the future, this way or any other way. She will stay with me.... but... But am I ready for all of this? And would she really be happy? Really? For real? And, fuck, what if she looses her feelings when I set her free? And what if she is unhappy, deep inside, when I make her a stay at home mom? Or should I give her the freedom? The security of knowing I'm controlling her? The freedom to move around. The thrill of walking through the city with her in my arms as if we were a real couple and feeling people's eyes on me.

Jasmine was an ice cold bitch almost my entire life. But she is a woman, beautiful and smart. Well,. not so smart anymore I guess, but never the less, she is happy with me. Because she loves me and I done a decent enough job to make her happy. Pumping her full of my children... I could see me as a father I guess. I guess she would be happy with it.

No. No guessing. We're talking about fucking children into her. Like, all the time.

She loves me. Housewife, Stepford wife or not, she accepts her place as it is right now. Giving her more freedome seems the better way.

But she is a woman. And I have known all the time that her lousy lawyer job didn't fill her. maybe I can.

Or maybe I can grant her freedom and make her happy this way. We haven't had the chance to brag with our happyness infront of other people. I could take her out to dinner and... then... make her pregnant?

I exhale, look at me loving wifey and hug her to my side. She melts into my embrace and soon cuddles to me while I keep staring at the MCD.

With Michelle, everything is easier...

Up until now. Fuck.

I'm scared when I activate her profile, Jasmine still next to me, stroking my head but averting her eyes, to her family.

Michelle Lynchwood / Petplay "Are you my new owner?" PS +52

A well-trained Puppy FS 40

The subject will develop a strong bond with the user, primarily determined by the freedom to engage in puppy play. Puppy play will dominate the subject's life, but not her entire life. Human and dog go hand in hand within the subject, and together with the user, she determines when pet play is activated and when not. Others, not activated by the MCD, will see the subject's puppy behavior as her kink and react to it normally with understanding, curiosity, or disgust.

An adorable Puppy FS 20

The subject will develop an unbreakable bond with the user that nothing can shake. The puppy mentality will occupy the overwhelming majority of her life, and the desire for pet play will be constantly present in her thoughts (which revolve almost exclusively around the user). The subject will almost completely lose the desire to speak or make human noises, will stay on the ground/on all fours and generally will behave strongly as a puppy would to. With non-MCD activated individuals, the subject will be curious, but cautious and reserved as long as the user hasn't trained her to accept them.

Yup. Mom's gone. Either way, she will stay a puppy. At least, I could make it so that she can still talk to me. Do I want it?

It's not that I hate mom. She deserves to be punished and breaking her is fucking fun. Because she likes it in a weird and sexy way.

But making her a full-time puppy? Never hearing her talk again? Mostly?

I look at her, lying on the ground in the centre of the room. Tammy play's with her, crawls her stomach, covered by her cute dress. She pants and squeals and Tammy giggles and laughs. I know Mom is free and happy this way.

But all the time? She would have to stay indoors. What about her friends? Her work? She wouldn't be able to work from home anymore.

Or I could make it so that we could go outside. At least sometimes.

I snicker slightly when I imagine her and me fucking in the dark, outside, where people could find us.

Or maybe I could introduce her as my puppy **** to others. This way she could have a bit more freedome if I choose the we--trained Puppy Setting. Would she like that? or would she like it more at my feet, never worried about anything?

I look around the room. Rose and Jasmine look at me, waiting for me to announce my intentions, wanting to jump at my first words, helping me. Tammy is careless and happy, as I always wanted her to see and Mom is free and without weight on her shoulders.

My family is at the place I wished them to be all my life. In a fucked up, wired and fucking sexy way, yes, but they are happy. All of them.

And now, I need to make a decision.

Alone.

"Babe?" Rose's eyes follow me, concerned, helpful, in love, as I stand up, kiss Jasmine tenderly on the forehead, and stretch out my arms to hug Tammy, who comes flying towards me.

"Do you want to play with me, Daddy?" she asks, pressing herself against me.

"Daddy needs a little time for himself right now," I say, and immediately Rose is at my side.

"Let me help," she whispers, holding Tammy, who is pouting but understandably crossing her arms.

I step up to Rose, very close. We squeeze Tammy between us as I cup Rose's cheeks in my hands and kiss her gently in front of my assembled family.

"Take care of them," I say. "That helps the most." Rose nods.

"We'll wait for you. Always."

Then I turn around and walk out into the night. The cool evening air blows in my face, the sounds of the brightly lit city fill my ears, and I'm happy and proud that I only have two thoughts, two goals for this evening.

How do I create a situation in which I can think about my family's future...

And what will my family's future be?

Message from the author:

I made a few small changes on the fly and added a few sentences to clarify things.

The rest is up to you.

Actually, I think I did so well this time that I don't need to explain the poll again, but I'll do it anyway for old times' sake. ;)

The Freedom Score for Tammy.

Set her free, make her a teenager with daddy/daughter **** play kink. Have her move away from you if you think she deserves freedom and independence.

Or keep her with you, safe and secure, and hopefully happy with having little freedom but a daddy. Maybe she doesn't need anything else in her life.

Freedom brings her closer to potential new daughters/girlfriends of Tammy and Finn, submission brings her closer to family and a life at home.

The Freedom Score for Jasmine

Give her more freedom, let her develop as a happy wife, happy life, and let her find (fuckable) friends. Potentially good for orgies with multiple women or even another man... or two. That can be fun, but Finn obviously has to be a strong man for **Jasmine.**

Or take away her freedom and... Well, I think there's a (probably quite large) group of women who want babies, and I had to stop myself at one point in the description when I included myself in that group. But fuck, I also want a self-determined life for your wifey.

After Rose, Jasmine is developing into one of my favorite characters. Closely followed by Tammy and Lisa.

The Freedom Score for Michelle.

Happy doggy, more freedom, more risky outdoor sex, and maybe some kinky stuff with others. Even other couples? Or maybe some way into darker stuff? Or lighter stuff too?

Or, of course, the submission choice. Full-time doggy (95% of the time), stay at home with the Lynchwood Home.

And for all of them, there are still their wishes of course, that Finn surely wants to fulfill. I think, with all of them, both choices would be doable in terms of the wishes of the woman.

All in all, it took me this long to clean up a few of the problems I've created in the previous chapters. And fuck, I hope you're okay with me asking for your help trought the polls in this chapter. I mean, polls are something you probably like, but I also admit I'm glad I don't have to decide for myself whether we should fill Jasmine with babies or lead a halfway normal life with her where everyone is jealous of her connection to you.

And I apologize if it's too difficult to decide. I hope it inspires instead of demoralizing you. I sometimes have that problem.

In any case, this way we can resolve the question of whether Michelle should become a full-blown puppy, and, much more importantly for me, I can put a super-satisfying end to the question of how Tammy should behave. In both cases, she'll love daddy/daughter **** play, but in one, she'll fully embrace the role, just like Michelle, and in the other, it'll "just" be a strong kink. I think I've created a good opportunity for everyone to feel comfortable with one of my favorite characters.

So.

Poll for Tammy

https://strawpoll.com/e2naXPoK0yB

Poll for Jasmine

https://strawpoll.com/w4nWWM7KYnA

Poll for Michelle

https://strawpoll.com/xVg716vq6yr

And we have another poll that, unlike the main three, will be online for a normal amount of time.

Should Finn get help from someone when he thinks about his family's fate?

Of course, you as the reader will decide what happens to Jasmine, Tammy, and Michelle, but I thought it might be time for a pivotal meeting between Finn and one of his friends.

You can choose between Lisa, Bella, Sofia, and Ryan. This gives us a little more time for everyone to vote for the family members, and each of the friends has something important to discuss with Finn. (And hey, this is CHYOA. Who knows. Maybe we'll have sex.) Or we decide to skip this interlude, Finn comes home in the evening after much deliberation, and the family orgy begins, so he can go to school the next day and get the other girls involved.

Poll for extra scene

https://strawpoll.com/e6Z2AkwqwgN

Okay. You have a lot to think about. As always, I'm available for my readers and I hope you like what I've put together through sweat and (pretty sure imanginary) panic attacks. ;)

Best wishes to you and happy voting.

Finn 0815